FB: Army drill Instructor

[SexualChoc]

I apologies I can not respond in the language the tease was written

I was surprised by the hidden times
I wonder if some people saw the first page or two and just closed this tease?

It is actually interesting
Something about a domme using that language
shivers.

the pictures were well put together
Now I can not claim to kow everything in the story, Some of those
words were beyond my American school teaching.

But I actually liked the tease and gave it a good rating
I hope you write more
Note If you decide to post you do NOT have to post in English :)

[LittleElfBoy]

4/5

I found the idea interesting, but the problem is, she says you passed, while it doesn't matter if you came or not. There should be a consequence for doing it or not. Otherwise, it's a perfect tease for a quick cumshot and it's easily imaginable that you're in an army camp. But the title is kinda misleading it's not really a drill (so, it's a rather easy tease).

[Frozen88]

The Idea is interesting, the pictures are nice, but in the End it's just a 5 min wanking task with cumming without consequences or further interaction. Would be happy if the tease would be much longer, with consequences and more variety

Die Idee ist interessant, die Bilder gut, aber am Ende ist es ein Tease, der mir 5 min lang sagt, dass ich wixxen soll und am Ende kommen und das ohne weitere Konsequenzen oder Interaktionsmöglichkeiten. Wäre glücklich, wenn deine Tease deutlich länger wären, evtl. mit Edging, mehr Tease und Story Elementen und auch währendher noch viele Interaktionsmöglichkeiten bieten bzw, feedback abfragen, damit das ganze lebendiger wirkt. Auch wäre um 5 min zu wixxen ein gewöhnlicher Porno oder ein JOI- Video lieber, da muss irgendwie mer her.
Deine Ansätze und Ideen sind wirklich gut, mach was draus :)