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jscamp
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leave feedback for horny as hell
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Love the women in the tease, but not for me :-/
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Pretty good. One thing that was a little weird is the huge amount of strokes right away, immediately followed by the chastity belt. I think it was 100 and 200 strokes plus the belt on the first page. I liked the girl enough that I could get going right away, but I can't speak for everyone. Also it's tough to then get soft that quickly without help. I think even if you had done something with icing down it would have helped, but I think it should have been at least not until the second or third page.

The other thing (which is probably just nitpicking) is with the pictures that are partials. On pp. 6 & 10 it seemed like it fit with the story, but pp. 8, 12 & 13 just seemed to be edited very slightly with the gray bar across the bottom. You should look into cropping pics to help that.
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