FB:Russian Roulette with Therapist Rhian

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FB:Russian Roulette with Therapist Rhian

Post by bitemyass »

:-) Very interesting concept. Model was a very good choice, language great, flow of tease good. The concept of swallowing one's own cum is exotic and intriging. Its one of some teases that i was able to follow through. :w00t: :clap2:
Although it was random picking of the baggies, :yucky: i picked the one with my seed first. Surprise! Once i finished the tease though, i ruined two orgasms afterward. All within 15 minutes.
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Hope there is more from this.
Great job.
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It should be nominated for TOTM (and should win :-P)
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Post by manwithcape »

I really liked the tease only:
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If the tease is called russian roulette that's what it should be, you should be able to win or lose based on luck. the fumble didn't add to the experience, sticking the the rules laid out before that would've been better in my opinion.
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Re: FB:Russian Roulette with Therapist Rhian

Post by pigjoy »

Thanks everyone, appreciate the feedback.

Manwithcape, I'll definitely take note of that for anything in the future.
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I had a loose plan as I was writing it, then got to the end and realized that I had no way of knowing whether the "client" had choosen succesfully or not. I thought of doing one of those "If you picked the bag with just milk, go to page #27", etc, but I find those to sometimes be awkward, and they can take people out of the experience.

I could have just had the client pick one, and then end it on that page, though such an abrupt ending would have required some heavy re-writing of the story.

But I appreciate the thought and may incorporate that into a future tease.
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