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Hi everybody.

After spending 20 minutes in a sloshy bubble, guided by Nikki's voice to write something, I officially present The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny.

I just wanted to do something different, and it started off being inspired by a million different sci-fi things in space, but ultimately became a case study in domination by Portal's GLaDOS.

Any feedback you guys care to share will go a long way towards

A. Letting me know you had a laugh, or
B. Ensuring I never, ever do that again

:-D

Cheers!

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I loved it. :yes:
It was smart, sexy, funny and the model is gorgeous.

Thanks!
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spiritus wrote:Thanks!
Thank you! :-D
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:w00t:

Fish!
I looked up and saw your doodle.
Your doodle.
Naked is a curtain
For lies are the sun on which I sleep
Snow covered my sex
My sex is a snowman
Your doodle reminds me of a carrot


I think that about says it all, don't you?

Kes

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I was baffled but consantly laughing.

And talking toasters always make me happy. Howdy doodly do.
Visit http://www.princesschristie.com today!
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kesbabev wrote:Fish!
I looked up and saw your doodle.
Your doodle.
Naked is a curtain
For lies are the sun on which I sleep
Snow covered my sex
My sex is a snowman
Your doodle reminds me of a carrot


I think that about says it all, don't you?
Ironically enough, I thought that said it all long before I ever wrote this tease. :lol:
Miss Tira wrote:I was baffled but consantly laughing.

And talking toasters always make me happy. Howdy doodly do.
I guess I know who to turn to when I need to ask that all important question then. ;-)
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It's about bloody time someone around here got one of my clever SF references. (Or in this case, his own.)

We don't like muffins round 'ere.


Seriously though - I loved it.
Visit http://www.princesschristie.com today!
Tira demands it. And the Princess' affection couldn't hurt either. Well, it probably can.

So in summary - http://www.princesschristie.com right now.
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We don't like muffins round 'ere.
Aah, so you're a waffle woman.
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Miss Tira wrote:We don't like muffins round 'ere.
So you're a waffle man! ...... Err, woman. :blush:
jp wrote:<--- Confused.


Can I help to alleviate your confusion in any way, good sir?
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mike1978 wrote:Aah, so you're a waffle woman.
The Edge wrote:So you're a waffle man! ...... Err, woman.
Wow.... :lol:
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You see what he's like?! This is what caused the accident in the first place.


lol let's just hijack the thread! This is fantastic.
Visit http://www.princesschristie.com today!
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That was no accident. That was first degree toastercide!
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jp wrote:Nope. I'll continue to be baffled. I think it's more amusing.
In that case, anything I can do to make you even more baffled, good sir? :smile:
Miss Tira wrote:You see what he's like?! This is what caused the accident in the first place.
You mean the accident involving you, the toaster, the waste disposal and the 14-pound lump hammer?
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jp wrote:*Shakes his head from side to side*
I recognize that... That's.... That's...

The start of The Bartman!

Do the Bartman!
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And we're off again!
Visit http://www.princesschristie.com today!
Tira demands it. And the Princess' affection couldn't hurt either. Well, it probably can.

So in summary - http://www.princesschristie.com right now.
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