Feedback for The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny

[The Edge 2.0]

Hi everybody.

After spending 20 minutes in a sloshy bubble, guided by Nikki's voice to write something, I officially present The S-L.A.V.E. Mutiny.

I just wanted to do something different, and it started off being inspired by a million different sci-fi things in space, but ultimately became a case study in domination by Portal's GLaDOS.

Any feedback you guys care to share will go a long way towards

A. Letting me know you had a laugh, or
B. Ensuring I never, ever do that again



Cheers!

The Edge

[spiritus]

I loved it.
It was smart, sexy, funny and the model is gorgeous.

Thanks!

[The Edge 2.0]

Thanks!

Thank you!

[kesbabev]

Fish!
I looked up and saw your doodle.
Your doodle.
Naked is a curtain
For lies are the sun on which I sleep
Snow covered my sex
My sex is a snowman
Your doodle reminds me of a carrot


I think that about says it all, don't you?

Kes

[Miss Tira]

I was baffled but consantly laughing.

And talking toasters always make me happy. Howdy doodly do.

[The Edge 2.0]

Fish!
I looked up and saw your doodle.
Your doodle.
Naked is a curtain
For lies are the sun on which I sleep
Snow covered my sex
My sex is a snowman
Your doodle reminds me of a carrot


I think that about says it all, don't you?

Ironically enough, I thought that said it all long before I ever wrote this tease.

I was baffled but consantly laughing.

And talking toasters always make me happy. Howdy doodly do.

I guess I know who to turn to when I need to ask that all important question then.

[Miss Tira]

It's about bloody time someone around here got one of my clever SF references. (Or in this case, his own.)

We don't like muffins round 'ere.


Seriously though - I loved it.

[mike1978]

We don't like muffins round 'ere.

Aah, so you're a waffle woman.

[The Edge 2.0]

We don't like muffins round 'ere.

So you're a waffle man! ...... Err, woman.

<--- Confused.

Can I help to alleviate your confusion in any way, good sir?

[The Edge 2.0]

Aah, so you're a waffle woman.

So you're a waffle man! ...... Err, woman.

Wow....

[Miss Tira]

You see what he's like?! This is what caused the accident in the first place.


lol let's just hijack the thread! This is fantastic.

[mike1978]

That was no accident. That was first degree toastercide!

[The Edge 2.0]

Nope. I'll continue to be baffled. I think it's more amusing.

In that case, anything I can do to make you even more baffled, good sir?

You see what he's like?! This is what caused the accident in the first place.

You mean the accident involving you, the toaster, the waste disposal and the 14-pound lump hammer?

[The Edge 2.0]

*Shakes his head from side to side*

I recognize that... That's.... That's...

The start of The Bartman!

Do the Bartman!

[Miss Tira]

And we're off again!