I receive some instruction from Mistress D. one week ago, and today is time to follow the order.
I take a train for go to Bristol, and then I ask a taxi for go to the Leigh Wood. There I have to find the Blaise Hamlet Cottages. When I finally arrive; I find the red box like was write on the instruction. I let the afternoon finish, and then I get naked, I take out of my bags the woman clothes Mistress D. order me to purchase. I make up myself, and I dress up with the red string and bras, the black stocking and the really short red dresses, and of course the long red boots with high heels. Then after wear my new short black wing, I let all my other clothes and all my things inside the red box and I close it with the code Mistress D. give me. Like that if something happened she will open it for give me back my things…
The night was almost fully there now and fully dressed like a bitch I start to walk inside the forest without light. I have for order to find the ruin of the Folly Castle where more instruction will wait me.
After a long uncomfortable walk in the dark, I finally find the ruin and the message from Mistress D. was there like she told me. I open it with a big excitation and I read it :
Dear Sissy Slut suzie,
If you read these words, you can know I am really proud of you. I hope your feet don’t hurt you too much, if yes be prepared for more pain bitch! Now start really the fun, I mean for me of course. There is your instruction, and you have to know I don’t give choice, if you want to find your clothes, passport and credit card back. Because when you will read these words, I will have the red box near me in my car, in the way back of my home for take a long and warm bath. But is time for you to initiate a new level in your training. I call it “total submission of my whore”, do you like the name? I am sure you will like it.
I want you to find enough money for pay a taxi that is waiting you in the center of Bristol. This taxi knows where I live and if you find 300€, he will take you to my home. But here is the fun, for find this money you have only one solution is prostitution. But you can’t ask too much, because you are just a beginner, then you are not allowed to ask more than 5€ for a blow job and 15€ for be fucked in your little bitch ass, and of course if two men want you in the same time you will be really happy to give a good discount, and will be only 20€ for the two during a half hour minimum.
I think now is time for you to take the direction of the city and to start to work. Just two little things, if you find someone to take you in his car for help you to go to the city, then you will thanks him with a free blow job; and the taxi wait you until tomorrow 12am no more.
Well my whore suzie, the only thing more I can say you here is: Move your ass bitch!
Ps: a box of 100 condoms is waiting for you behind the big stone.
Mistress D.
I can’t describe my feeling when I read these words. When I decide to follow the instruction of Mistress D. , I was ready for everything, or many things. But never one instant I imagine that can happened. I pass a moment to think of the solution I have, but more I think more I don’t see have one other choice than follow my Mistress order. I finally take the box of condoms and start to walk in the direction of the city.
After one hour of walk without see any car, finally one come in my direction, I do a timid sign for ask to stop and the car stop just some meter after me. It was time for me to become what my Mistress want. But how much was slow the ten steps I do before be in front of the car door.
-may I help you miss? You know, can be dangerous to be alone in the dark night dressed like that.
I try to speak but was impossible, no one word. The man opens me the door and I sit near him.
-I don’t have problem to help you to go where your friends are working, but I think will be normal if you give me a little thing in exchange of my kindness, no?
I take a big brief, and I open his pants. Was a really huge cock, and already with a fully hard on. I open wide my mouth and I start to suck his cock during he was driving. When I was doing I repeat in my head, again and again: I worship Mistress D. . Then I feel his hand on my head, making me deep throat his cock and I gag and it a few time before to follow the movement of his cock fucking my mouth. I have just the time to move before he cum, and he shoot all over my face.
-I am sorry bitch but is here you have to stop. I am sure some of my friends will be really happy to have a little trip with you. Bye bye.
We only do a little distance before I come back walking, with my face full of cum. And was just the start of a, so long night.
A new car come, just the time to clean my face before some new cum come on it…
In the instant I was turning back, one old Van stop brutally in front of me. Inside I can see three men sit in the front.
- Hello Darling! What are you doing here alone in the night? Are you not afraid of the big malicious wolf? If you want to go to the city, you are welcome to in behind.
Like if I eat my tongue when I do a blow job to the guy before I don’t say one word, and a second later I was inside the Van. What other choice I have? Don’t accept, and continue to walk until one other car stop, without know when will come the future one. From now I know, I have only one way for can come back in my real life. The driver takes me out of my reflection.
- Like we drive from a long time we will stop here a little time, before to go to the city. And I am sure you will be really nice to let us fuck you during this little break. My friend and I are on the road from a few days, and we are a little boring of the only sexy magazine we have. Our balls are really full of cum and we are sure you will love the taste.
I don’t have the time to realize what will happen; the two other guys was already behind with me. And before I can try to give one objection, the younger open the zip of his pant taking out his cock and shoving it deep in my throat making me gag on it. And the other takes off my string brutally and insert his cock profoundly in me, starting to fuck me up the ass deeply and violently. I do one strange song with my gorge when I feel the dolor, but my mouth was full of the other cock that was making me deep throat.
- Hope you don’t mind if we do a little movie of this, just for remembrance. Is not every day we have the opportunity to fuck a whore like you. You will soon become a fucking world famous whore when I will upload this on the net.
It was impossible to say something. The other guy was pushing me on his cock from behind my head. Forcing me to suck him deep and fast, until he finally cum a big load on my face, when I still feel the movement of a strong cock in my stomach.
- I know you have hungry, bitch! Then swallow all my cum and clean my cock until I don’t see any more cum on it. After that I will film you sucking the huge cock of my friend.
- It’s time for the principal dish, tart!
I don’t know if I was afraid of what can happened at this time of the night in one dark forest if I refuse do to what they want. But I don’t really ask me, and I suck his cock clean and I swallow all his cum. Then he returns in the front of the Van, and the driver comes behind. The guy was still fucking me, taking time but doing it harder and harder. The driver kneels in front of me, and opens his pants. Taking his cock in the hand, and if he have large hands they appear to be small compare to his big cock who was fully erect in front of my face.
- Listen carefully, bitch! I want you to suck my balls, to take the two in your mouth and to make warmer the big load of cum that is waiting for you there. Then you will lick my cock from the balls to the top, you will run your tongue on the top and you will suck me like the better ice cream you never taste. I will not force you to take it fully, not in your mouth. But I want you to try to go as far as you can. And take really care, because if I think you are not trying enough then I will teach you how do!
I was sure do pass a worst time if I don’t do like he command me. Then I open wide my mouth and I start to suck his balls. The guy who was fucking me stops. He goes in the front of the Van taking something and come back.
- You ass is too tight for a good working whore, and if I don’t help you a little you will can’t please my friend. And believe me it’s not really good to make him angry.
- Don’t worry the pain you will feel now is nothing compare, because if I fuck you now you will discover what pain really mean. And please try to smile for the camera!
I feel a cold liquid running along my ass, then some fingers starting to in and out, moving faster and deeper each time. Was really painful, but how can I scream when I have my mouth full with the balls of the driver. He starts to fist fucking me when I was trying to take the driver’s cock deeper as I can.
- Well, well, not so bad. Now let we see if you are enough open for receive the fuck of your life. But you have to thanks my friend for the service he give you, I am sure a great blow job will be welcome. Let the fun begin Bitch!
I don’t have the time to take my breath before to have a new cock in my mouth. And again was impossible for me to do more than moan when I feel the huge cock penetrate me violently.
After a long painful moment who was like eternity for me, to be fucked hard and deep and to suck a cock, the driver take out his cock from my ass and come in front of me. The other guy take is cock out too and the two in the same time cum all over on my face, a really big amount that was dripping from my eyes to my neck.
- What are you waiting for bitch! Lick every little drop and swallow all. Show to the camera how much you are happy to please us and how much you are a cum whore.
- Really good! See how much you like it!
- Now move your ass of bitch out of this car quickly, we have to go. And take this, maybe will be enough for buy you a new slutty string.
I don’t try to argue about drive me to the city, too afraid of what can happened if they start to be angry. I take the 10€ they give me and I go out of this Van from heel.
The Van goes fast. And again I was coming back in the same place, still far of the city. But this time with 10€ in my pocket, of course it’s far of the 300€, but is the only positive thing who happened to me, and that will help me to continue . . .
Total submission of a whore Part1&2
Total submission of a whore Part1&2
Last edited by SUBCD on Fri Apr 18, 2008 1:32 am, edited 2 times in total.
Re: Total submission of a whore Part1
Brava!
I look forward to Part 2.
S
I look forward to Part 2.
S
Total submission of a whore Part2
After a half hour of hard walking, with the long heels boots, finally a new car comes in my direction. Was a pink Mustang and I do a timid sign for ask to stop. The car stop just some meter after me and one amazing girl out and come in my direction with a so sexy way to walk. She was totally dress in pink latex, with a corset, a short dress and long boots; and she has long black hair and really large breast.
- Hello little ass! Are you lost? What a girl of your sort is doing here at this time of the night dressed with this whore’s outfits?
As she look to be a really nice person I try to explain to her why I am in this situation, without give to much details but enough for she can understand.
- Poor of you, you really don’t have luck! But maybe that can change, it’s up to you. Here is the deal I propose to you. Like your story make me really horny, if you accept to have sex with me in the way I want, then I will help you. I will take you in my car, and I will as well let you out in the best place for can find a lot of guest, like that you will can maybe win quickly the money you need. Do we have a deal, little ass?
Again I don’t have a lot of choice, and like she is so beautiful can’t be a bad moment to have sex with her in the way she want. Then I accept the deal, hoping this time my luck was coming back.
- Good choice! Now get on your knee, close your eyes, and open your mouth wide with your tongue out. Don’t open your eyes until I say you to do or our deal is broken. Do you understand?
I do like she command me. I listen to the zipper of her skirt and then I feel her ass on my face.
- Now I want you to lick my ass with your tongue, I want to feel it deep inside me.
I start lo lick her asshole and to insert my tongue profoundly inside still with my eyes close, my face between her ass cheeks. And after a little time she move, asking me to let my mouth wide open and I feel a strong cock coming inside my throat.
- Show me how you know please a real shemale cock! Suck it little ass! You can open your eyes now, and I want to see on your face how much you like it, how much you want more. Take it fully in your throat, beg me to fuck you like you deserve, like the real whore you become!
My luck was definitely not coming back. But finally in one way, can be lucky to be fucked by a so beautiful shemale. I have so much fantasy about it in the past, and now it’s real. I just have to don’t think of the situation where I am now. Just focus on the moment.
- Really good! You are really a quick learner. Now bend over on the back of the car and let see how your little ass like to be deeply fuck by a large shemale cock!
She lift my skirt and like I don’t have any more panties she introduce slowly the top of her cock, then take it out and again introduces this time fully her cock deeply in me, feeling her ball push on my ass. And with her two hands on my shoulders she starts to fuck me with strong movement of her back. Each time her cock almost fully out, and each time coming back deeply in.
- I want to listen you moan! Let me hear you enjoy it! Say me you love to be fucked and you want more! Scream it!
I start to moan and more I do, more I feel the waves of pleasure increase. I say out loud how much I love to be fucked and in this moment really was more than say it; I discover some sensation I never have before. And every time I ask for more then she fuck me harder and faster, pushing her cock deep that she can.
- Take it like the whore you are now! Turn in front of me than you can watch me fuck you, and stroke your clit in the same beat! I will make you have an orgasm like never you have before and you will think of me every time you stroke in the future!
She was fucking me looking in my eyes. Coming back to do more slowly, making me to follow her movement for stroke myself. And then increase the speed, fucking me faster and faster, harder and harder. I start to feel a first edge coming by wave, but like if she was feeling too, she beat me on my balls, making me scream of dolor.
- You will cum only on my command! I want first listen you moan and beg me to let you cum!
She come back to increase the speed, moving her hips quicker, letting her balls hit me on my ass. Then again she beat my balls when I was so near to cum, and come back to fuck me harder. She up my legs and move it more near my chest.
- Now I want you to open large your mouth and to look in direction of your clit when you are stroking. I will let you cum but I want you to do it directly in your mouth, but you will not swallow it, not yet. You will close your mouth full of cum and you will kneel in front of me!
Again I feel her large cock fucking me harder and faster when I was stroking my clit harder and faster until I finally cum a big amount directly on my face with a big part inside my mouth. Then I kneel in front of her, with her cock in front of my face. She was stroking near my lips with one hand on my head.
- Open your mouth cum slut and let me prepare for you a nice cum cocktail! After I cum in your mouth, I want you to mix our cum together with your tongue and to feel the flavor you like so much, and then you will swallow all like one obedient cum slut!
I open my mouth and she fulls it with a big load of warm and salty cum, and then I do like she command me and I swallow all like the obedient cum slut I am.
- I see in your eyes how much you like that! But we have to go now, we have a deal and I know you have a lot of work waiting for you if you want to win some Euros. I know the perfect place for that. Put you bitch’s ass in the case of my car, sorry but I don’t allow whore to sit near me in my car. Is the only choice you have, but of course you can refuse.
Of course I can refuse, but I prefer that instead of stay on this road without know who will be in the future car. More than that my feet hurt me so much and I really need a little rest before to try to win some money. Then I accept her proposition and I in to the case. She closes it violently. I am now in the dark and the car start in direction of the city …
- Hello little ass! Are you lost? What a girl of your sort is doing here at this time of the night dressed with this whore’s outfits?
As she look to be a really nice person I try to explain to her why I am in this situation, without give to much details but enough for she can understand.
- Poor of you, you really don’t have luck! But maybe that can change, it’s up to you. Here is the deal I propose to you. Like your story make me really horny, if you accept to have sex with me in the way I want, then I will help you. I will take you in my car, and I will as well let you out in the best place for can find a lot of guest, like that you will can maybe win quickly the money you need. Do we have a deal, little ass?
Again I don’t have a lot of choice, and like she is so beautiful can’t be a bad moment to have sex with her in the way she want. Then I accept the deal, hoping this time my luck was coming back.
- Good choice! Now get on your knee, close your eyes, and open your mouth wide with your tongue out. Don’t open your eyes until I say you to do or our deal is broken. Do you understand?
I do like she command me. I listen to the zipper of her skirt and then I feel her ass on my face.
- Now I want you to lick my ass with your tongue, I want to feel it deep inside me.
I start lo lick her asshole and to insert my tongue profoundly inside still with my eyes close, my face between her ass cheeks. And after a little time she move, asking me to let my mouth wide open and I feel a strong cock coming inside my throat.
- Show me how you know please a real shemale cock! Suck it little ass! You can open your eyes now, and I want to see on your face how much you like it, how much you want more. Take it fully in your throat, beg me to fuck you like you deserve, like the real whore you become!
My luck was definitely not coming back. But finally in one way, can be lucky to be fucked by a so beautiful shemale. I have so much fantasy about it in the past, and now it’s real. I just have to don’t think of the situation where I am now. Just focus on the moment.
- Really good! You are really a quick learner. Now bend over on the back of the car and let see how your little ass like to be deeply fuck by a large shemale cock!
She lift my skirt and like I don’t have any more panties she introduce slowly the top of her cock, then take it out and again introduces this time fully her cock deeply in me, feeling her ball push on my ass. And with her two hands on my shoulders she starts to fuck me with strong movement of her back. Each time her cock almost fully out, and each time coming back deeply in.
- I want to listen you moan! Let me hear you enjoy it! Say me you love to be fucked and you want more! Scream it!
I start to moan and more I do, more I feel the waves of pleasure increase. I say out loud how much I love to be fucked and in this moment really was more than say it; I discover some sensation I never have before. And every time I ask for more then she fuck me harder and faster, pushing her cock deep that she can.
- Take it like the whore you are now! Turn in front of me than you can watch me fuck you, and stroke your clit in the same beat! I will make you have an orgasm like never you have before and you will think of me every time you stroke in the future!
She was fucking me looking in my eyes. Coming back to do more slowly, making me to follow her movement for stroke myself. And then increase the speed, fucking me faster and faster, harder and harder. I start to feel a first edge coming by wave, but like if she was feeling too, she beat me on my balls, making me scream of dolor.
- You will cum only on my command! I want first listen you moan and beg me to let you cum!
She come back to increase the speed, moving her hips quicker, letting her balls hit me on my ass. Then again she beat my balls when I was so near to cum, and come back to fuck me harder. She up my legs and move it more near my chest.
- Now I want you to open large your mouth and to look in direction of your clit when you are stroking. I will let you cum but I want you to do it directly in your mouth, but you will not swallow it, not yet. You will close your mouth full of cum and you will kneel in front of me!
Again I feel her large cock fucking me harder and faster when I was stroking my clit harder and faster until I finally cum a big amount directly on my face with a big part inside my mouth. Then I kneel in front of her, with her cock in front of my face. She was stroking near my lips with one hand on my head.
- Open your mouth cum slut and let me prepare for you a nice cum cocktail! After I cum in your mouth, I want you to mix our cum together with your tongue and to feel the flavor you like so much, and then you will swallow all like one obedient cum slut!
I open my mouth and she fulls it with a big load of warm and salty cum, and then I do like she command me and I swallow all like the obedient cum slut I am.
- I see in your eyes how much you like that! But we have to go now, we have a deal and I know you have a lot of work waiting for you if you want to win some Euros. I know the perfect place for that. Put you bitch’s ass in the case of my car, sorry but I don’t allow whore to sit near me in my car. Is the only choice you have, but of course you can refuse.
Of course I can refuse, but I prefer that instead of stay on this road without know who will be in the future car. More than that my feet hurt me so much and I really need a little rest before to try to win some money. Then I accept her proposition and I in to the case. She closes it violently. I am now in the dark and the car start in direction of the city …
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Bobby1966
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Re: Total submission of a whore Part1&2
Love part 2, shemales are so damn sexy 
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hakeem.wolfie
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Re: Total submission of a whore Part1&2
The story is really getting interesting, but the grammar makes it really difficult to read :(

