This is my first tease so hopefully not too bad. Tried to create a narrative interspersed with videos whilst making the CBT section optional with a good reward rather than a punishment...
Thoughts?
http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=15776
My Sexy Flatmates...
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I really enjoyed it... the story in combination with the vids, fantastic! I can only hope to see more of those teases!
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Re: My Sexy Flatmates...
awesome, it's a whole new dimension adding the videos, 6 out of 5
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It's so much better having the videos embedded. You wouldn't think it matters much but it can be jarring when you have to cut and paste a link to a new window. Also, you did a good job making the videos work with the story.
I just wish I wasn't locked up atm. I haven't done a tease properly in a long time. Half because I've lost the discipline and half because most of them suck. Yours I would do.
I just wish I wasn't locked up atm. I haven't done a tease properly in a long time. Half because I've lost the discipline and half because most of them suck. Yours I would do.
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whos the girl in the glasses hear the end
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I'm not sure to be honest, maybe others will know.
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I couldn't agree more mialty - one of the big turnoffs for me with some of the teases (both regular and Flashtease) is when it's required to go to open up a new browser window/tab and watch another video to continue with the tease - not only is it inconvenient (especially in Flashteases as you can't simply copy & paste the link), but it's takes attention & focus away from the main tease. It would be like reading a novel and when the action starts getting interesting, the book tells you to watch a video before you turn the page.miatly wrote:It's so much better having the videos embedded. You wouldn't think it matters much but it can be jarring when you have to cut and paste a link to a new window. Also, you did a good job making the videos work with the story.
Props Tanqueray - I usually don't dig regular Teases, but you made the story work well with the videos. And OMG, the CBT with Jackie Ashe, as she uses you like a punching bag!?! That was crazy!
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it might just be me, but is the last video no longer available?
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Hey,
can you pls post the link to the missing vid. I saved my cum and I wan these 2 cum shots :)
can you pls post the link to the missing vid. I saved my cum and I wan these 2 cum shots :)
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