I never got around to reading the text. I was too stoked on the pictures. I just sat there and watched. It was too good for sexy.
Just to commend Dellok on choice of a model who seemed to represent the beauty of a woman, a natural woman at her best.
That's all I have to say on that.
Fifteen Minutes.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
After having a rerun, I should clarify, I took the 'medium' option, and that is where the natural woman caused me to post this thanks note. Seems that the easy and hard alternatives are totally unrelated to thiis.
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Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Um, Atmon. Maybe you're talking about the "natural lighting" of the photos, but the model you're talking about in the 'medium' option Bryci... well, she's not natural at all. She's very enhanced in the breast area.Atmon wrote:After having a rerun, I should clarify, I took the 'medium' option, and that is where the natural woman caused me to post this thanks note.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Nah. What you see is what you get.supermokkori wrote:Hope I'm not busting your dream bubble.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Well, i'm glad you liked the tease.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
I'v starred it 5, it's well made. But I'v gotta explain and criticize a few things. Spoiler for those who haven't played.
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Re: Fifteen Minutes.
Hi, Nezhul, thanks for the feedback. I must confess I myself not really a "sexual titan" and belong in "normal". When i was writing the tease, I decided to put levels for a simple reason : I recieved some thanks for the "easy" mode of my tease Levels allowing "early comers" and other "really-not-sexual-titan" to do a tease to the end. So i decided to keep on doing so. But I then find myself with only two modes : Easy and Normal. Hard was then a good addition but the Hard was my conception of hard.
If you'd give me "exemples" of your conception of hard, it would help me for my futur teases.
Dellok.
If you'd give me "exemples" of your conception of hard, it would help me for my futur teases.
Dellok.
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
My criticism is meant as a constructive feedback, I still gave you 5 stars.
That's what I can say about hard not being really quite hard:
1) too much slow stroking or normal stroking. In my opinion there should be more fast stroking. BUT you shouldn't get too focused on that.
2) definitely needs more edging. The way I'd go with the hard setting, is make a player stroke quite good and fast for 5 minutes, then make him edge a few times (just like you did in the end). Then after a short rest make him stroke some more when he's already hard, and some more edging in the end. Maybe with holding
3) too plain. The medium part got nice palming experience. I think the hard one should have had that too. And other interesting techniques. Like stroking the head only or something. The hard one was simply stroking, stroking, stroking..... too plain, as I said
Don't be afraid of making a hard setting too hard. Even if 90% of guys can't really finish it - heck, they were warned!
Give in to your fantasy, imagine the best sexual torture you could think of. And that would be a hard one =)
p.s. Also, keep the tease consistent. If 1st two settings feature only pleasure, you shouldn't try adding CBT to the hard one.
That's what I can say about hard not being really quite hard:
1) too much slow stroking or normal stroking. In my opinion there should be more fast stroking. BUT you shouldn't get too focused on that.
2) definitely needs more edging. The way I'd go with the hard setting, is make a player stroke quite good and fast for 5 minutes, then make him edge a few times (just like you did in the end). Then after a short rest make him stroke some more when he's already hard, and some more edging in the end. Maybe with holding
3) too plain. The medium part got nice palming experience. I think the hard one should have had that too. And other interesting techniques. Like stroking the head only or something. The hard one was simply stroking, stroking, stroking..... too plain, as I said
Don't be afraid of making a hard setting too hard. Even if 90% of guys can't really finish it - heck, they were warned!
Give in to your fantasy, imagine the best sexual torture you could think of. And that would be a hard one =)
p.s. Also, keep the tease consistent. If 1st two settings feature only pleasure, you shouldn't try adding CBT to the hard one.
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Re: Fifteen Minutes.
It's exactly how I took it, no worries.Nezhul wrote: My criticism is meant as a constructive feedback
You're right about the "plain" part, I didn't put any "head strokes" or "base strokes" etc... I'll put some in the next tease. (The next, next one, not in "Weaklings")
Excuse my english but what is CBT ? Cock & Balls Tease ?Nezhul wrote: CBT
Re: Fifteen Minutes.
torture, I believe. Generally it's about pain. I meant that if a tease is about pleasure there shouldn't be pain involved. Something like post-orgasm torture doesnt count. I just often see teases where everything goes good and nice and then you are suddenly asked to punch your balls hard. Such inconsistency turns me off.
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Re: Fifteen Minutes.
I think not getting what you want while it is in plain sight counts as torture.
So teasing can be torture without the pain, except the pangs of desire.
Many forms of "torture" are considered, by the masses, to be used for extracting information.
With pain most often the incentive to "Spill the Beans".
I suspect just the threat, to themselves or loved ones, of pain can be sufficient in many cases.
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