Breaking you series, finale!

[kesbabev]

To everyone following the series, thanks for your words of encouragement. I hope the finale lives up to the rest of the storyline, and I strongly encourage everyone who reads this to go thru the entire tease again, before seeing the finale. I think it will be a nice suprise. Again, thanks, and keep an eye out for my next series!

[The Edge 2.0]

Wow, that was fast!

Thank you again for posting this awesome series. I'm glad to see you wrote a 4th part, as I would say you definitely built up some momentum in the 3rd that begged to be carried over into another installment. As for part 4 itself, here's my feedback (and I can't believe I'm doing this on a Milovana message board, but):

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I think you did a great job generating a real sense of the haze a mind enduring this would feel, so kudos for that. At first I was a little jarred to discover it was all a dream, but ultimately I think that works out great. The haze clears and the fantasy of something that extreme can sift into the fantasy of a fantasy, if that makes sense, and the ending feels almost like a confessional where you stand on the verge of experiencing it all over again, but for real. Awesome job!

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Again, keep up the good work, and I definitely look forward to seeing more of your teases!

The Edge

[ab608]

This was/is an awesome series! It has a good story line to it.

I kind of hope, there is more to it. Now that they is a breaking point.... the new beginning perhaps.

[kesbabev]

Thanks for all the kind feedback. Sadly, no spinoff in the works for Breaking you, although I am currently in collaboration with another very talented writer. We are working on the series "Hell Hath no Fury". If you are interested in reading more of my works, I would definitely check this out.

Also, anyone that has some ideas for a webtease, feel free to PM me. I'm always looking for fresh ideas. it seems that as I browse this site, I see the same things. Domination, verbal humiliation, instructional masturbation, and the ending is predictable. I prefer to see something new, something to keep people interested.

Again, thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed the series!

[z_k]

Very nice work. I love the feminization-themed teases, so this one definitely got me going.