FB: honey Trap

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Vinc
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has a dead end after she kneel down
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Vinc wrote:has a dead end after she kneel down
Actually, that's not a dead end. That's an ending. :rolleyes:
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Hey Danube!

I like the type of teases you are making. where your actions decide wether you get to be a slave or not. and honey trap is really good. maybe a little bit too easy to become a master (by just deniing everything she says...). but still very good. please keep up the good work. i would love to see a next tease from you!

Best Wishes Fritzi
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Doesn't make any sense to me. You finally become her master. She kneels down...end...... I expected some action. Haven't even opened my pants....just clicking and then the tease is over. Too easy and boring if you play it that way I think.
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I thought it was a dead end as well, until I read this. 12 clicks in less than 5 minutes with no action, and this still currently has a 3.5?! Makes absolutely no sense. Ends in what appears to be a hangup right at the moment it looks like it might get interesting. This really is a tease, just in the worst possible way. Sorry if I am sounding hypercritical, but it looked really promising and then...nothing. In the spirit of constructive criticism, I would have to say that it looks like you posted an unfinished product. I got curious and clicked my way through the alternate path. Although chastity is not my thing, at least it had a little timer action, and some edging, but still ended suddenly like it wasn't finished. Don't get me wrong, I appreciate the effort anyone puts into a tease for others to enjoy, this just looks like it needs more work.
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