Feedback: A Very Good Day

[supermokkori]

^^^ AH crap.

Tease will be offline, as I'm fixing this hopefully last bug. If Nyx is nice, it'll be back up in 10... if not, it'll be another hour or so.

EDIT UPDATE: alright fixed. As that bug happened very close to the final ending, I'm hoping it's that last bug that happens.

[supermokkori]

I did like the variety. Just like with the Awesome competition and Last Mand Standing, it's nice to get different things. And as for POV-like images, Im just happy when there's eye contact with the camera.

Thanks Mykkki.

My goal was to use some of the events and methods that Uberman did in the Awesome Competition, with my own writing style and plotline. And glad that the "POV-like" images were more enjoyable than distracting.

Also if you feel like making the tease more user friendly, I'd love to see continue button because some times I read the text too fast and end up waiting and other times there's so much text I either can't read it all in time or I read it in hurry fearing the text will vanish before Im done.

Yeah, I'm a little bit of a crossroads on that. On one hand, I agree with you that continue buttons should be used as some readers read faster than others. On the other hand, I'm also a fan of not having to press buttons when the flow of the tease doesn't need a button press. I'll try to balance it a bit better next time, as for this Flashtease I didn't use the "continue" option that often at all.

[Holdingout1]

Just got through most of the tease and I thought it was very well done - A 5 in my opinion although I gave it a 4 since I hit a few minor issues

The biggest issue is I got caught in an edge loop with Wendy - which I gave up on after about 10 . . . if this was intentional I guess I was not patient enough.

The only other minor issue is that at least on my PC it took time to load all the great sounds which put a pause in between many stroke series. Could just be my crap PC lol

All together it was a great tease and it definitely showed a lot of effort. Nice work and keep em coming (or not cumming) as the case may be

[supermokkori]

The biggest issue is I got caught in an edge loop with Wendy - which I gave up on after about 10 . . . if this was intentional I guess I was not patient enough.

Gah... another bug. I'll try to fix it in the hour - the site is running really slow right now for me.

EDIT UPDATE: OK fixed that loop, thanks for catching that, Holdingout1.

[Chico]

Thanks very much for a fantastic tease - only played for an hour but really looking forward to another go when I have more time. I liked the "girl next door" models and the variety and the pace is just about right.

Thanks again,

Chico

[Coco]

Great tease you've created there, way to go

I liked your way of writing and the interaction was really nice. Though I kinda got...idk, killed or something by a way too big russian muscle mountain after making Alex scream, I still enjoyed it.

I think it's gonna be a candidate for the TOTM

[Uberman]

The amount of creativity in this tease is just too damn high!
You have now become the Yoda of Flashteases. I can not teach you anything.

Awesome work!

[supermokkori]

The amount of creativity in this tease is just too damn high!
You have now become the Yoda of Flashteases. I can not teach you anything.

Awesome work!

Uberman, you honor me greatly.

I've tried to be creative, but let's not get too crazy - some of the maze Flashteases and the gameshow ones that involve the "set" and "must" commands of Nyx are really really cool and creative.

Lastly, YOU are the Yoda of Flashteases... I'll consider myself the Windu Mace, just cuz he's cool.

[Vinc]

Yep! awesome tease with a great style of writing. Never read so many different words for pussy XD great job. only thing i dont like is the music beat sound but everything else is just perfect.

[supermokkori]

Yep! awesome tease with a great style of writing. Never read so many different words for pussy XD great job. only thing i dont like is the music beat sound but everything else is just perfect.

Vinc, thanks a bunch for the very kind words.

My gf helped me a lot on the different words for "pussy"... she personally love "sexbox" best.

Hrm... you didn't like the metronome beat sound I used? What didn't you like about it? I'm going to start up a new Flashtease next month, so I have a lot of time to experiment in choosing a the right metronome sound. let me know!

[Dwells]

This is one of the finest teases I've seen on the site- and I've been around since it started!
I don't think people appreciate how much effort goes into making something that big and the imagination that has to go into thinking out the different plot lines.

This really got the excitement factor back in a sea of the more average and less imaginative teases these days.

An amazing job, thanks for all your effort and I look forward to seeing any of your future work.

[supermokkori]

This is one of the finest teases I've seen on the site- and I've been around since it started!
I don't think people appreciate how much effort goes into making something that big and the imagination that has to go into thinking out the different plot lines.

This really got the excitement factor back in a sea of the more average and less imaginative teases these days.

An amazing job, thanks for all your effort and I look forward to seeing any of your future work.

Firstly, thanks Dwells for such great effusive comments.

My main thing was to make sure that it was a Flashtease that I would enjoy playing - to that end, I looked to some of my past favorite Flashteases like Nezhul's 'Will You Want To Go On', Decker's 'The Pornstar Is Right', and Uberman's 'Awesome Competition' and just tried to use some of the style elements and FlashTease techniques they've established. Also, I felt that there were way too many serious-natured, almost "mean" storyline Flashteases and wanted to make something a bit fun-natured and light-hearted in terms of the plot, characters and writing.

I am working on a semi-new Flashtease - it'll actually be a sequel to a Flashtease storyline previously done before and I plan to make it bigger and longer than 'A Very Good Day'. Don't think I'll get it out till April though as that's quite a lot of images to sift through, sound files to edit and code to debug.

Again, thanks for checking out the Flashtease and glad you enjoyed it. If there was anything you didn't enjoy or elements from the tease you would like to see more of, I'd love to read about it.

[supermokkori]

anyone know who the blonde girl in the beginning is?

I do.

That would be the beautiful Bree Daniels - she's featured throughout the tease and is the main "objet du désir" in this Flashtease.

[Humblest]

supermokkori, this was an awesome tease. Indeed, it was one of the very best flash teases. I really enjoyed the beating to the metronome thing until a timer runs out. It was also nice that when the time came for the big O, it really sped up, plus there were the girl voices and it continued to repeat itself until the O arrived.

I am not even going to talk about the production values, which were simply excellent and I really, really liked the fact that the tease was pretty long.

The thing I liked the least about the tease were some of the long pauses between non-stroking scenes. What I mean is that for example there was some text, which I read in say 10 seconds, but it took about a minute or two to switch to the next page of text. A continue button after each page of text (and I do enjoy the test - it is the long wait after already having read it that was the problem) would probably solve this problem. The tease was, nonetheless, excellent, but I though I would also throw in some constructive criticism.