Feedback: A Very Good Day

[supermokkori]

... and I thought video teases were freaking hard to make.

Some history - I originally joined Milovana back in July last year after tracking down where all the great Cock Hero videos came from. So, was just browsing what Milovana was all about and came upon Uberman's Awesome Competition Flashtease - which was so freaking awesome that I started to make my own Flashtease based on some of the concepts that Uberman established.

Then I got distracted with video teases.

So, after finally finishing and uploading the Stroker Ace Challenge: HD Remix video tease a couple weeks back (damn straight, shameless plug! ) , I was determined to finally finish my original Flashtease I started over 6 months ago.

Anyways, finally finished it for the most part - I tried to do some bugchecking, but as Nyx kept deleting pages for some unknown reason, I just pushed it up hoping not many bugs will be encountered.

Anyways, started this thread in case there are bugs and obviously for feedback. As it's my first Flashtease would love to hear any feedback - good or bad. I tried to do a lot of themes, multiple stroking techniques and other new things; wanted to experiment with some new elements that I may try to use in future Flashteases. Specifically, there are two things I'd really liked to get feedback on:

1) POV hardcore images - Something I really enjoyed about Uberman's Awesome Competition was his use of POV scenes during the hardcore sequences of his tease - combined with the story elements, POV shots really "enhanced" the perspective of the viewers experience. I tried to do the same but, as you may know, POV hardcore images aren't that easy to find. So when I couldn't use exact POV images, I used "POV-like" images. Let me know if these images work, or if seeing too much of the "dude" in the shots selected were too distracting/offputting.

2) Metronome-sound stroking - A lot of stroking challenges in this tease are sound-based/metronome-based... but I tried a few "new things", especially in the each of the possible "ending encounters". I'd like to hear what you guys think of these (please use spoiler tag to describe them, don't want to ruin the experience/surprise).

So would like to hear feedback on both these points, but any feedback would be outstanding - I would like to do a couple more Flashteases in the future and any feedback on this first Flashtease would be really useful in doing my next one... provided Nyx doesn't crash or keep deleting pages!

Anyways, let me know what you guys think of the tease. It's located here:

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showf ... p?id=15472

ENJOY!

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Bug fixes
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2/15/2012:
* Fixed tease stoppage at Dawson strip sequence
* Fixed Weight Lifting start point
* Fixed Exit point #1 for Boxing sequence
* Fixed loop in coffee sequence
* Fixed yoga break loop sequence
* Fixed final ending loop (after pull hair decision)

2/16/2012:
* Fixed Edge loop bug with Wendy encounter

2/19/2015:
* Fixed minor Edge cycle bug with Dawson
* Fixed major Continue bug after Brooke interview (thanks to AtTheEdge)

[stockboy]

I was in the Dawson section and the metronome stopped and the tease is hung at the spot where the text says:

"As Dawson moves her luscious..."


Ah, you may be fixing it at this very moment

[Castiel]

In the scene where you go to the gym and are given the choice of whether to go weight lifting, yoga or boxing, I clicked weight lifting and suddenly found myself skipped forward somewhat to a post tease scene.

Only part way through but its pretty good so far other than this bug

[supermokkori]

I was in the Dawson section and the metronome stopped and the tease is hung at the spot where the text says:

"As Dawson moves her luscious..."


Ah, you may be fixing it at this very moment

In the scene where you go to the gym and are given the choice of whether to go weight lifting, yoga or boxing, I clicked weight lifting and suddenly found myself skipped forward somewhat to a post tease scene.

Only part way through but its pretty good so far other than this bug

Sorry guys, I've taken it offline till later... Nyx is fucking me up my ear and just deleting random parts for no reason and not allowing me to properly update in others. I'll try to fix it later.

EDIT UPDATE: FUCK THIS SHIT! I have no idea why this error is happening. Probably won't be reupped for a few hours. Sorry.

[supermokkori]

Alright... had to delete every page and then recreate every page. Still have no idea what messed up, but both bugs above should not be occurring anymore. Thanks for the heads-up, Flashtease is back up. Hopefully no other bugs will happen.

[TheDoctor]

I love this i truly do, i love the adventures and games style teases, however i noticed that at the end of the boxing challange. it linked me to the starting page. just wanted to point that out. I hope and disire to see more complex teases like this.

[Mykki]

I think there's an infinite loop when you are getting coffee

[TheDoctor]

and a loop at the yoga challange (your killing me here) lol iam going to try the weigh lifting one now and hope i dont die lol.




and i think the yoga one would be a verynice tease on its own! thinkabout it :P

[manium]

Confirmed, infinite loop when you go get 'hot' coffee.

[Spigot]

Found a loop at the yoga section right before 'the next part is pretty'

it's a 30 second break that repeats either that or the tease being taken down caused it. going to go back through again

You did a nice job though

[supermokkori]

I love this i truly do, i love the adventures and games style teases, however i noticed that at the end of the boxing challange. it linked me to the starting page. just wanted to point that out. I hope and disire to see more complex teases like this.

Fixed, thanks for the heads up Doctor.

I think there's an infinite loop when you are getting coffee

Well that was stupid... reverted back to old code for no reason. Fixed

Found a loop at the yoga section right before 'the next part is pretty'

it's a 30 second break that repeats either that or the tease being taken down caused it. going to go back through again

*sigh* That's what happens when you have to rebuild each page manually - you invariable skip a page. Fixed now.

Again, really appreciate all these bugs reports and your patience guys. I would bug test it in Nyx, but I'm fearful of previewing behind Nyx will probably break something accidentally - kinda like making a move on a 20-minute played Jenga piece.

and a loop at the yoga challange (your killing me here) lol iam going to try the weigh lifting one now and hope i dont die lol.

and i think the yoga one would be a verynice tease on its own! thinkabout it :P

Yup, fixed that one... and yeah, I REALLY got carried away with the yoga portion, as it's probably the 2nd longest sequence in the Flashtease. Just all the images made it really easy to go long on that portion.

[Vinc]

I was just going to play it...please publish it in the next few hours or i will go crazy

[Mykki]

Also infinite loop with Bree at the end(?)

Spoiler: show

The part where you can go faster or pull hair

Also forgot to mention how incredible this tease is. One of the best and once you get all the bugs sorted, probably the best (depending on what you fancy, of course).

[supermokkori]

Also infinite loop with Bree at the end(?)

Spoiler: show

The part where you can go faster or pull hair

Also forgot to mention how incredible this tease is. One of the best and once you get all the bugs sorted, probably the best (depending on what you fancy, of course).

Thanks very much Mykki for the very kind words.

Actually the loop you're referring to is done by design:

Spoiler: show

that part will keep playing, forcing user to either to choose to go faster or pull hair

Appreciate the very kind words. Not that I'm complaining about the feedback, but were you cool with the "POV-like" images and the new elements added to some of the "stroke beats"? Let me know!

[Mykki]

Spoiler: show

I was trying to point out the umm.. "scene".

Once you choose either faster or pull hair, you will evantually get short rest (after edging if I remember right) and be returned to screen where you can choose to go faster or pull hair. Atleast I couldnt get the scene to advance after that

I did like the variety. Just like with the Awesome competition and Last Mand Standing, it's nice to get different things. And as for POV-like images, Im just happy when there's eye contact with the camera.

Also if you feel like making the tease more user friendly, I'd love to see continue button because some times I read the text too fast and end up waiting and other times there's so much text I either can't read it all in time or I read it in hurry fearing the text will vanish before Im done.