First Teaser: The Retake Exam

[joss]

Hi,

Ive published my first teaser.

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=15191

This teaser is for guys and include a lot of edge, slapping, some pain, some anal and a bit of humilliation.

Due to its my first one and that english is not my mother language, any suggestion, correction or any other kind of comment will be welcomed.

Hope you like it and enjoy!
Regards.

[Tapopip]

I just read it, didn't do it. Looks pretty hard and awesome in so many ways. The perfect way to handle a cbt/anal webtease. Even if it looks VERY painful.

Even if, as with all the teases which do the same, asking people to stroke 200 times slowly with only a picture is not very exciting. Maybe put a video in there would help, or something like that.

[joss]

I understand your point but i like to follow the story that the pictures tells, and insert a video could break the line of that story. One thing that turns me off in the teasers is when the pics are not consecutive. I mean, when in a slide there is a pic that doesnt fit with the rest of the pics.

Anyhow, im grateful for your opinion.

[sweden123]

I was kind of indefferent to this tease at first. But for some reason I've returned to it a number of times.
I guess I really like it.