The One In Vegas - Feedback

[Coco]

Thanks again for the appreciation
I'm looking for more pictures for the second part at the moment, it's not gonna be as long as the first one, I guess (unless Penny suddenly wants more ) but I already have an idea for it and will hopefully be writing it any time soon

[Yanker]

I don't usually comment on webteases, but have to in this case. Coco, this is the best tease I have encountered on this site in 5 years. I had my doubts at first, as the first edge is very soon into the tease (a common theme these days) but this turned into an absolutely superb tease. It got into my head, and they are always the best ones!

A very big thank you for taking the time to put this together.

Yanker

[teased247]

Great tease Coco!! You hit soo many of my hotpoints .. loved it! Hi Fives and Five Stars from me

[d3vi0n]

I made a HD Remake of your great tease to play it offline in TeaseMe. I replaced the original pictures with higher resolution and added many more pictures. The story remains unchanged.

"The One In Vegas HD" by Coco with over 130 highres pictures (24,7 MB):

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http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?t0i10jqdetjdwjf

[Coco]

Kinda flattered over here that you took the time to do that, d3vi0n

I just had a look at it and I really like the new pictures, maybe I should let you do it for the next tease
Some pictures I didn't even know after I researched more pictures (unfortunately AFTER I published the tease).

Maybe I will work with your programm on my next tease, it seems to be easier to work with
Great job with that programm, btw, really nice, way to go

[camel]

That was hands-down incredible.

Spoiler: show

I was taking at the screen, and at the end I came so hard that I started spontaneously giggling afterwards.

In addition to everything Bondageman had said, Penny Flame is my favorite porn actress.

Translated: I was so fucking owned by that tease.

[orlando]

This was really good. I am new to Webteases and I gave this one an attempt. Needless to say I didn't make it long and came way before the end, but I really enjoyed it. I plan to give it several more attempts.

I would agree with the others that the first edge is a bit soon, I would like some more build up. Other than that, I enjoyed as much of it as I could so far.

[teases42]

I loved the tease. One request I would have is that you put in a button to skip the intro story and go straight to the teasing for those repeating it.

Keep up the great wotk

[Coco]

I loved the tease. One request I would have is that you put in a button to skip the intro story and go straight to the teasing for those repeating it.

A good idea, if I find the time I will include that, thanks The longer build-up will be considered, too.

Translated: I was so fucking owned by that tease.

Nice to read that

[Coco]

Thanks to teases42 the "Skip intro" button is now included at the beginning for those who wanna do it more than once.

Have fun!

[Coco]

I just updated the pictures according to the TeaseMe-Offline Version.
Thanks to d3vi0n for those!

So now the pictures should change more often (I didn't check every picture, so if there is one not appearing, a quick note would be great )