I have just published a new webtease:
"Topping from the Bottom: Your Wife Turns the Tables" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=14764
This is an unusual tease, where the hero ("you") and your wife Aaliyah, struggle to both be bottoms. I hope you all enjoy it.
I am aware that the tease is not a simple, obvious story, and that it doesn't have much in the way of explicit instructions, especially at the beginning when the story is getting going. My advice is, just go with it, and if you don't like this sort of thing, stop.
But if you like it, please let me know. I might continue this if I get positive feedback and can find the time.
Topping from the Bottom
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New_Boy
- Curious Newbie
- Posts: 1
- Joined: Thu Dec 29, 2011 5:38 pm
- Gender: Male
- Sexual Orientation: Open to new ideas!
- I am a: Submissive
- Dom/me(s): Un-Owned
- Location: Midlands, England
Re: Topping from the Bottom
I LOVED IT!!!
Yes it was slow to start but the story is good and you just keep reading
The concept is Brill! I have not done a tease like it and would love to see how it ends and who he gets off with, or which position he (I) end up in as a bottom or top to my wife or a bottom to ? that would give the game away
Pictures where great, I through that they were perfect for the parts that they played
Please write more
I would love to learn if he (I) earns enough point to cum
Again many thanks for the best tease this year and you waited so long before postiog
Yes it was slow to start but the story is good and you just keep reading
The concept is Brill! I have not done a tease like it and would love to see how it ends and who he gets off with, or which position he (I) end up in as a bottom or top to my wife or a bottom to ? that would give the game away
Pictures where great, I through that they were perfect for the parts that they played
Please write more
I would love to learn if he (I) earns enough point to cum
Again many thanks for the best tease this year and you waited so long before postiog
Re: Topping from the Bottom
You write fantastically and I'd like make some polite comments :P
This dude has issues. Seriously. The fact that he can't bring himself to fuck her because of "respect" and his fetish for orgasm denial suggests this hero has a huuuge complex. I mean it sounds like he's having severe cognitive de-function because of it. I know this is all fantasy and dude, it is a huge testament to your writing skills how much I've been drawn into this story, but, man, it really sounds like there are big issues this dude needs to get out to have healthy day-to-day functioning (this doesn't include feelings of frustration from denial, I mean serious impairment to this hero's thinking.)
Bringing the Dom in adds a nice new layer and angle but personally I would have liked the hero to find his inner 'man' even just once to get over this hump and fix this quite dysfunctional relationship with the girl. Hell, I was almost yelling at my screen for him to just fuck her. :P Again, extremely immersion story writing (as you can see from above) and my god do you write a lot - very interested to see where this story goes and you've also given me some inspiration to start writing a bit as well.
This dude has issues. Seriously. The fact that he can't bring himself to fuck her because of "respect" and his fetish for orgasm denial suggests this hero has a huuuge complex. I mean it sounds like he's having severe cognitive de-function because of it. I know this is all fantasy and dude, it is a huge testament to your writing skills how much I've been drawn into this story, but, man, it really sounds like there are big issues this dude needs to get out to have healthy day-to-day functioning (this doesn't include feelings of frustration from denial, I mean serious impairment to this hero's thinking.)
Bringing the Dom in adds a nice new layer and angle but personally I would have liked the hero to find his inner 'man' even just once to get over this hump and fix this quite dysfunctional relationship with the girl. Hell, I was almost yelling at my screen for him to just fuck her. :P Again, extremely immersion story writing (as you can see from above) and my god do you write a lot - very interested to see where this story goes and you've also given me some inspiration to start writing a bit as well.
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dr_cunning
- Explorer
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Re: Topping from the Bottom
I'm with T-rix on this one... the guy was so sub-oriented and dysfunctional, that it was a frustrating read - yet fully enjoyable and engrossing. Like most good fiction, the story and the characters in this are just an exaggerated version of a very real and plausable situation. I loved it and am eagerly waiting to see what direction Cactusman goes with this in part 2!!
Re: Topping from the Bottom
Thank you all three for your comments. I agree that the hero is more than a bit dysfunctional. In any case I very much appreciate your comments and interest. Thanks!
Re: Topping from the Bottom, part 2
I have finally published the sequel to my original tease "Topping from the Bottom: Your Wife turns the Tables",
which is:
"Topping from the Bottom: Your Wife Turns the Tables (Part 2)" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17571
This sequel, also my original, picks up right from where the first part left off. Both parts are available under a tag, so you can see them from the Topping from the Bottom series.
Enjoy, and please leave comments if you like this.
which is:
"Topping from the Bottom: Your Wife Turns the Tables (Part 2)" http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showt ... p?id=17571
This sequel, also my original, picks up right from where the first part left off. Both parts are available under a tag, so you can see them from the Topping from the Bottom series.
Enjoy, and please leave comments if you like this.
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Stafford
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- Gender: Male
- Sexual Orientation: Bisexual/Bi-Curious
- I am a: Submissive
- Location: West Midlands, UK
Re: Topping from the Bottom
After doing the First and LOVING it
Yes the Male was not straight but then, we all have are problems, the story was great and and took time to go thou and was waiting for the next one in the Series so I'm Happy
Just finished the Second part and it is as GOOD as the first, loved every Page the Story was strong and kept me moving forward and wishing to known what happens next!!
The only thing that I would say about this Tease is be careful what you wish for as it never is how you imagined it and there is NO going Back
Thanking you very much for your hard work and my Pleasure from it
Yes the Male was not straight but then, we all have are problems, the story was great and and took time to go thou and was waiting for the next one in the Series so I'm Happy
Just finished the Second part and it is as GOOD as the first, loved every Page the Story was strong and kept me moving forward and wishing to known what happens next!!
The only thing that I would say about this Tease is be careful what you wish for as it never is how you imagined it and there is NO going Back
Thanking you very much for your hard work and my Pleasure from it
Re: Topping from the Bottom, part 2
Thanks much for your kind words, Stafford. I appreciate the feedback!
Re: Topping from the Bottom, part 2 is TOTM
I'm very pleased with the reception that part 2 has gotten, receiving the Tease Of The Month award for August and also becoming the number 1 rated tease on Milovana. Thanks!