First, I liked your choice for actresses. Hannah Hilton is one of my favorites. I also liked the font you used for the text.
However, you probably lost a lot of readers with your first set of instructions: "I want you to grab that great cock of yours and start stroking slowly. I want 100 strokes in 5 minutes." You could have broken that page into 5 one minute pages with a timer and instructed "Stroke your cock. One stroke every 3 seconds." The gallery of photos you used had twenty photos in it. You could have used some of those photos to maintain "visual interest." Then add some text "conversation" to engage the reader.
The next page same thing. Instead of "Stare at my tits and give another 100 strokes but this time I want them in under 2 minutes. You could broken down the page into two one minute pages with a timer and instructed "Stroke your cock, one stroke per minute (approximately 60 strokes a second). One stroke every two seconds would be 30 strokes a minute. Fifty strokes a minute falls somewhere in between.
You could have used a timer instead the Continue button when you instructed the reader to "lightly caress your cock."
You could have also used a time instead of the Continue button when you instructed the reader to "tease yourself a bit with that slow stroking."
Finally, while I liked the font, I didn't like the use of a lowercase "i" in place of the pronoun "I". It doesn't add anything and it's bad grammar.
That's my feedback for what its worth.
