Advice Needed

[hermes]

Hello everyone,
I'm sorry I haven't introduced myself before but I am quite a shy, reclusive type.
Anyway, I am in the process of writing my first tease and I wish to ask the community for some specific advice. Any response would be greatly appreciated.

1. Came vs cummed
I have had a look elsewhere and information available is not conclusive. I would just like the people of Milovana to tell me which they feel is correct as this could possibly be a jarring error that detracts from the tease.

2. Possible punishments within tease
I am struggling to come up with suitable punishments for failing sections of the tease. I am quite vanilla and admit to being no expert on the subject but I am sure there are some of you out there who are .
So far I have the idea of having to continue the tease after ejaculation and using the rolling of a dice as a method of determining whether the punishment is administered. I like the idea of changing the odds as you progress through the tease so if you fail at the start then there is a 5/6 chance you will be punished and this will decrease to 1/6 as you progress. I would like to know what general opinion is on this.

3. Choice of models/images
I notice that generally softcore images are used and personally I prefer this to hardcore but I would like to know what other people think. Also, are people in favour of, against, or completely neutral in regards to the subject of 'augmented' models. By this I mean models who have implants or have undergone plastic surgery. Is it preferable for the model to be natural if possible?

As I said before, any constructive response would be greatly appreciated and I would like to thank you for reading this.

hermes

[SissyTashi]

The first point;

Came is generally the accepted grammar, as it is the past tense of "Come". I know several people who dislike the spelled "cum", in general, but it's gottent to the point where it's been more or less accepted in most circles without much of a bother.


The second;

Punishment varies a lot, but for the most part is some form of CBT or other pain. If they fail one section, they may need to put clamps on their nipples, for example. Another, X numbe of slaps to their balls. It could also involve palming (as some guys find it *very* torturous) for a fixed amount of time.

[tBone]

1. Come just seems more natural to me.

3. I don't know the nature of your tease, but the less dicks and men in general, the better.

[Stair_Car]

The problem with hardcore porn scenes in teases is that the man will probably have to be a third party, not the audience, because a) he may not be in a submissive enough role, and b) if his face is visible it's hard to identify oneself with a strange man. So if you're making a cuckold tease, hardcore porn works fine, because you can say the man in the pictures is the dominant male, and the reader is the submissive. But in most teases you want the domme focused entirely on the reader, and that's easier to do with softcore images.

[bookworm]

1. Came vs cummed

Came. "Cummed" is not a word I recognize.

2. Possible punishments within tease

Most mild teases make the participant ruin their orgasm.

3. Choice of models/images

I prefer soft core and lesbian images to hardcore images. However tastes differ widely.

[cumhardy]

1: Came. Cummed sounds weird.

2: To be honest, after I cum I usually dont follow the rest of the punishment in a tease, unless its just to ruin the orgasm. I lose interest pretty quickly after I shoot and probably wont follow much more instructions. I know Im a terrible cheat, and I guess a lot more people would follow the tease more closely.
Personally, I like to have a reward for not cumming, like the model strips off more, or maybe you are allowed to use a more satisfying stroke the further you get in the tease. So the punishment for cumming early is more along the lines of not getting the full satisfaction of the tease. Also, Im not really into CBT in teases, I prefer just stroking, maybe with humiliating elements.

3: I prefer as natural as possible, including natural boobs and figure and pubic hair. Also the setting behind the model is important for me, usually dont bother with a tease if the model is outside (I dunno why, I just find it distracting). The background setting has got to be natural too for me. Also I prefer softcore, and non-nude teasing.


I wanted to add, dont take my answers as anything other than my own personal preference. I think you will get many different answers to these questions and the best advice I can give is that its impossible to please everyone so dont try to, just write whatever you like best. The only way we get new and interesting teases is if people write what they want, rather than what they think other people will want.

[Bandit224]

1: Came

2: I follow punishments for cumming after a tease, but sometimes only if the punishments are short. I would recommend not using dice and just straight out dishing the punishment. For the most part, it's difficult to keep anyone's attention after they've came.

3: Natural, and the background of the images, etc, have to reflect the story. If the story takes place on a beach, use beach pics. Neutral to hardcore vs softcore, it really depends on the story (Softcore if it is just the viewer and a woman, hardcore if it involves more people). Softcore is more abundant in terms of locations, which causes it to be used more. Nudity is a must for me.

[billlr]

1) "Came" and "cum" are the most appropriate for adult subjects.
3) I tend to prefer all-natural girls in my teases (hairy bushes especially).
But once in a while I like the ones with fake boobs, flat hard abs and clean-shaven pussies, often to denote girls with more "experience" sexually and looser morals.

Bill

[hermes]

I would like to thank everyone who responded. Your opinions have been very useful for me and have in the most part confirmed what I thought. I look forward to releasing my tease as soon as possible for the community to enjoy.