Purely Professional, Mr. Pro

doink · Post by **doink** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:31 am

I got one word: fabulous. Thanks. Great model. Great dialogue, too. The dialogue is simple, direct, taunting, HOT.

cymerc · Post by **cymerc** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 3:19 pm

Agree -- the dialogue is simple, sensual, and in some ways reminds me of one of my ex's. Hot, hot, hot!

slavechylde · Post by **slavechylde** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:18 pm

doink and cymerc,

Thank you both so much. I really appreciate your kind words. You picked up on exactly what I was going after. Thanks again.

slavechylde · Post by **slavechylde** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 5:54 pm

Thank you, jp.

If I only spent as much time working my novel as I spend working teases..........

pbchillin · Post by **pbchillin** » Mon Feb 18, 2008 8:57 pm

Wow! another fabulous tease by yourself, really enjoyed this and the prequel to it, thanks again :)

slavechylde · Post by **slavechylde** » Tue Feb 19, 2008 3:05 am

It's always nice to hear affirmations. Thank you.