Day Seven.

[becruel]

Hello, this is my first try at writing a story. Hope i posted in the correct section and put the right tags etc.
Please let me know if there's anything you didn't like or in what way I could improve my writing...
Enjoy! Hope you'll like it!



My girlfriend came home she knew exactly what I liked. I had just managed to get her interested in T&D and suddenly the past week she'd been VERY interested! She'd been teasing for six days now with tasks and edges I had to do for her. So I got really turned on really fast...I started stripping her...but she pushed me away and said, "Every piece of cloth you remove from me or you will cost you one edge". So I took off her top while I kissed her neck taking my time going over her collar bone slowly softly kissing her shoulder down towards her breasts going lower over her belly. I knelt down and started taking her skirt off with my mouth. She smiled her evil smile at me; she was wearing shorts under the skirt!! I stopped and looked up at her...
"Wow so you're really not going to go easy on me huh?” I said.
She said “Now where's the fun in that?"
I took off her shorts then feverishly trying to move faster totally aroused now, and then came the bra, then I kissed and caressed her breasts slowly teasing her licking and rolling her nipples between my teeth and my thumb and finger, playing with her breasts. I felt her breathing fasten I let my hand trail down slowly into her panties and I was surprised by how wet she was. I couldn't resist any longer I finally removed the last piece, peeling off her panties and leaving her completely naked.
"So that's five edges”, she said.
She started caressing me and slowly took off my shirt and started playing with my nipples, by now I was already throbbing and aching for her. I tried to softly get her to my pants instead of my nipples but all I got was "Not so soon", finally after a lot of teasing she got down to her knees and removed
My jeans then started rubbing me through my boxers. This went on for a while till I started leaking then she stripped of my boxers. She started kissing and licking everywhere except my cock. Teasing me everywhere except where I wanted it the most. I suddenly couldn't take it anymore and picked her up and........

If you'll like this I'll post ahead. I'm not sure its that good so...

[Oleander]

Go on...

[SexualChoc]

good story
next time you should aslo pay an edge for each piece
of your OWN clothing you remove...(if the story was real)