FB: Four Sisters

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Post by billlr »

Excellent tease. 5 stars!

Just who were those girls?
I especially liked "Ceasara".

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Thank you!

I like her as well, I think her name is Caesaria Clemin. I used the original names for all the girls.

Except for the girlfriend, she's called Peach but I thought that sounded pretty stupid...
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Sequel, please!
Especially with Caesaria. There's gotta be a reason why she's so quiet.

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Great tease, liked it! Good length, good amount of stroking spiced with pain and all motivated by a nice and plausible story. And i loved the use of the clothepins(!) Well done sweden123! Really hope this turns into a sourface-series!!

P.S.: For health precautions I would advise though, not to leave clothes pins attached for longer than for around 15 minutes in a row and wait for at least for around 5 minutes before reapplying them to the same region. (I think you already followed this in your tease though.) Pins that are attached for too long can harm the tissues due to an inhibited blood circulation. Another good option is to attach them to the nipples for 15min, then take them off and immediately attach them to the balls, after further 15min attach them to the nipples again and so on. In this way they can be worn for a virtually infinite time ;-)

P.P.S.: Liked Caesaria and there is a lot more material of her on the web: http://board.freeones.com/showthread.php?p=3793227
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Thanks!

I was concerned about the time you could wear the pins, I asked in the chat but they were not very helpful. I don't think it's much longer than 15 minutes, but I might have to check that out.

I'm not so sure about a follow up, the biggest problem when creating the tease was first finding a good model and second finding a good set with said model. I really wish they would wear clothes for more than 3 photos in a set, and also stop with the fake looking horny expressions.

I find Ceasara extremely attractive, but it doesn't seem like she ever wears clothes in her shoots. Which makes it difficult to use her in a tease. But then again I guess she just never wears clothes.
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yes, finding non nude pictures in her sets seems to be quite difficult.

I think the sets of the girls on this site are better for this purpose:
http://www.teensexymodels.com/

There are a lot of girls with sets where they wear clothes for more that three pictures. I like this girl for examle:
http://www.teensexymodels.com/st/niches ... love.shtml

There you will certainly find a girl for your teases. Still hoping for a follow up ;-)
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I just wanted to chime in and say thanks for such a great tease! I loved the clothespins as well and could have done more. Great pacing and stop/start timing...one of my favorites of all time. Thanks again! :-)
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I am currently in a period of no-stroking chastity so the way I get teased is to read and click continue without stroking. I left Four Sisters before it got to clothes pins. :yes:
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Part 3 is up (and I guess 2). It's a prequel to part 2.

The protagonist is more outspoken in this part, and kind of a dick. I'm not sure how well that came out.

Hopefully no bugs! I did less proofing on this one than on the previous.
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This tease was truly brilliant,

I've spent all evening doing parts one and three cos I kept coming half way through and I saw it said part three was a prequel to part two. The bit at the end with Ceasara has become my biggest fantasy now,
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having a weight from my balls and the girl in charge of whether or not I get a break is rightfully angry with me
and I got to the end of the first bit in part two before deciding it was too fantastic to waste now and I'll come back to it having denied myself for a few days.

I guess my point is thank you very much for my favourite ever series and I hope you write more, either as Tammy's or Peach's boyfriend, I don't care. I really loved the way Tammy was basically mental, sadistic and hopelessly in love with the character. Also, I know it's not really my place, but if you did another tease I'd love it if you had to spend the whole tease with a ball weight, which the girls would take on and off and increase or decrease but always put back on.

Even if you don't write more, I'm definitely gonna do pts 2 and 3 a whole bunch of times so again I'll say thank you for a terrific tease.
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Enjoyed reading it, too bad I'm not into CBT so the tease's not for me. As a fantasy pretty hot though
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This one was really well done. The prequel thing was extremely creative and an excellent idea.

Thanks!
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I've been thinking about making a new tease, possibly a follow up to this series, and I'm a little bit curious to why the third part has a lower rating than the second part. Personally I like the third part a lot more.

Does anyone have any feedback on what could be improved or what parts you liked best/least in the series?

I'm aware that it been a while since I released these, so it might not be as fresh in your minds as it is in mine.
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I liked the whole 3 part series. I am not sure if it can continue, or if you should start a new series, but you definitely have one of the best on Milovana.
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I love this series a lot and I liked each part as well. It would be awesome if the story continues!! :w00t:
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