Turn of Events: The Bachelor Party

[teases42]

My first tease published. I originally was going to do a series of teases designed for couples but never got around to it (project may see the light of day in the future after I introduce my wife more to tease and denial). I was really impressed with 1885's teases "The Ex" and "The Indiscretion Series." Perfect blend of story and instruction in my opinion. I always see people posting on the forums "more teases like that please" to which people always respond "why don't you write your own?" so I did, borrowing a lot from 1885's style. I plan to make this a series so any feedback I can apply to the next episodes is appreciated.

[billlr]

Great tease, Can't wait for the next installment.

Bill

[jlx666]

Great tease, Can't wait for the next installment. [2]

jlx