The tags say for-gals, but this is definitely for-guys.

It is too long. Should be broken up into phases/girls. And that would allow you to add more content as the tease goes on.

I definably liked the first setup phase. An expanded section with a lot more public humiliation would have been real ...

I loved the tease - despite the minor problems!
What guy doesn't fantasize about being used by mutiple women for sex!
And public humiliation is another fantasy of mine and there was a lot of that real and implied.

THe ending was cute - but unrealistic. How can you train a man to be a man without at ...

i agreaa mostly with hhhobo. i hand no trouble with the images, but they are certainly not appropriate for the tease. more appropriate photos are definitely needed.

maybe you can add a substory were some women (other employees???) come back and see what is going on.

Pretty sure virginia indecency laws include a visible erection - whether through clothes or not.
So technically if a cop sees you like that he could arrest you!

But by that time, if it were me at least, the evidence would be gone - unless a cop took a picture first.

A website I frequent talks a ...

VERY HOT!!!

There is certainly a wealth of good information in both the original post and some of the replys.

You definitely do need to follow the advice in the original post.

But where/how to meet Dommes?

From my experience, the key to finding a wonderful Domme is to TURN OFF your computer and get your ...

Being teased and denied of course. But to really add some spice, it should be in public so everyone can see how bad i want it. On the beach with me wearing my mistresses white, shear, skimpy panties is particularly appealing.

Another fantasy of mine is to be forced :-) by a domme to fuck a tied up ...

I loved it too! Just one question/comment which may be answered in sequels.

Since you ruined his manhood and feminized him, I presume you will whore him out to other guys.
That does bother me a little. I have no problem with serving women - but I'm not into other men - at least not yet.

And I don ...

Me too!

I'm kind of new here. But this tease is AWESOME. By far the best I've seen. The voice alone should get this a 5!!! If that's Kristina's voice, she could be any male to do anything just using it, forget the rest of her body!! (Just kidding of course).

I doesn't hurt at all that this is my VERY ...