I can't wait till you move this one beyond spanking, into real t&d.

Very, very good. Well detailed, good buildup.

Thank you kindly.

Yeah, You got me on the typos. I wrote this a while ago and whatever I used didn't have a spellchecker. As for the perspective, for me, the single-point-of-view thing doesn't always work for this kind of story. It seems to me to be the sexiest thing, sometimes, for the reader to see what's happening ...

I don't know if this is proper or protocol--I apologize if it isnt--but: I am a sometime writer, thinking of posting more work on this board, but this will depend (in part, at least) on feedback, because while my stories (so far) are relatively short, I do go to some trouble to make them good. So, I ...

The Night Nurses Pt. 2


If this had been a movie, the camera would have been above her bed looking down, spinning slowly as if it all was a dream. But it wasn’t. Lisa lay on the pea-green sheets wide awake.
She’d heard Mia enter Mr. H’s room just a minute before, saw the light snap on through the ...

The Night Nurses Pt. 1


“UUNNnnhhh….Ooohhh…”
Lisa could not believe her eyes.
When the strained gasps and moans had begun several minutes ago, in the bed to her left from which only a hanging curtain separated her,
they had sounded so lustful and perverted that she had simply lain there, not moving ...

Simpler This Way

She strolled out of the shower, tossing aside the towel she had just dried her hair with, filling the bedroom with that wonderful post-shower shampoo-and-steam smell. Then, twirling her long dark hair into a loose knot, she walked slowly up to her husband. He was sitting on the ...

First things first:
I did not write this story. I have a little bit of good writing under my belt (The Night Nurses, Simpler This Way) but Matt Moreau did this one.
Also, I was not able to learn what the rules are for posting Literotica links in this forum. If I have transgressed, I apologize.
I ...

This is an excerpt from a longer story yet to be written. I'm thinking of expanding it to book length and selling it in some form. Let me know if I should.

ADULTS ONLY ADULTS ONLY ADULTS ONLY

Stevie jumped slightly as the phone vibrated against his leg, in his sock where it was hidden.
A jolt of ...

I wrote this story some years ago, and am posting it here to see what kind of response it gets; if there's enough, I may start writing again. Respond here or to [email protected].

The Night Nurses

"UUNNnnhhh....Ooohhh..."
Lisa could not believe her eyes.
When the strained gasps and moans had ...