Maybe I'm just incredibly unlucky, but

I just could NOT get the dagger recipe from Lisa. Even after beating her 15 times, I never got a recipe. There's a 3.5% chance of that happening naturally, so maybe double check?

I thought it was really weird that you had defeated her 15 times and didn ...

Maybe I'm just incredibly unlucky, but

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I just could NOT get the dagger recipe from Lisa. Even after beating her 15 times, I never got a recipe. There's a 3.5% chance of that happening naturally, so maybe double check?

Love the idea and execution and can't wait to see what changes as you polish it up. I really like the audio in the orgasm portions.


One nitpick is that the audio is very loud. Might be worth editing the clips to lower the volume a bit.

I have struggled with the timings since the beginning.


As a general rule of thumb, I'd set most Say actions right before Choice actions to "instant". (There are of course some cases where you'll want a delay.) I'd also allow player to skip most Say actions, especially longer ones, unless a ...

Great work! My only gripe is that larger sections of text appear very slow, but that's coming from a native speaker so it might be a bit different for you.