Feedback on Churn and burn

[submm1]

Hey folks,
As it was my first tease I am curious to see what you thought. What did you like and what should I have done differently? I have a few ideas for some more teases and want to make sure to take your feedback into consideration as I put them together.
thanks
submm1

[johnno240]

It was an excellent webtease, even better that it was your first. Im actually kind of jealous that i hadnt thought of some of the ideas you used.

I think the thing i didnt like about it was some of instructions wernt my interest. But that is just a personal thing and is nothing against the webtease as such.

Cant wait until your next tease.