New tease: I hope this makes it worthwhile

[johnno240]

Hey all..

I just finished my first ever webtease. It would be great if you guys could give me some constructive criticism so i can improve for next time.

Its got a lot of teasing, a bit of cuckolding, and a bit of anal play.

I think its ok without being great. Pretty good for a first try though.

thanks

[Dontask]

I think it's very good, especially for your first one.

The only drawback to it, is the length/number of pictures. That's understandable though.

I'm looking forward to your next one.

[dark]

Hey johnno240,

At first welcome here The tease is good, but like dontask said, more pictures would be great. If you divide the text on more pictures this would make it more exciting for me. But its not easy to find large picture-series. I know that In the last weeks i searched for hours only for pics.

But hey your ratings are good, so it seems that a lot of people like that tease. Good work man!