I've got a good set of photos and a storyline. I'd just like some help to improve the text.
It's about a boy being punished by the head girl. Anyone willing to preview my story and help me with the dialogue?
Need some help with my first webtease
Need some help with my first webtease
Last edited by chyooster on Tue Apr 19, 2011 4:11 pm, edited 2 times in total.
Re: Need some female input
I'd be interested in seeing a feminization aspect to that kind of plot. Could be hot!