Feedback - disgusting Emily

[blab]

Hi @ all

This thread is made for the Feedback for the tease disgusting Emily

http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9357

Feel free to give Feedback and help me to make this tease better.
My English is not so good but i hope there are no mistakes. If There are any post it please and I will correct them.

Have fun by trying the tease.

blab

[zmalejlitery]

Great tease!
I hope ill see more such good work from You.
More kinky stuff please :)

[dtspam]

Really good tease. There are only very few teases covering these more extreme kinks (foodplay, urine, poop, enemas, diapers, etc).
It could have contained a bit more teasing (and maybe more pain in the main story line) for my taste though.

[Subspaced]

First of all, I think it's great to see more scat/urine/...-related teases. There's still way too few of them, so please keep making more!

But to be quite honest, I think this tease could be a bit better balanced. It felt too confused, too unrealistic, too mechanical. For instance, the whole jumping from one mistress to the other thing was a bit confusing and slightly offputting. And the numbers of spanks (and other things) they ask you to give yourself is so high that it starts feeling mechanical. I would advise you to focus on sexual arousal more.
In my opinion, it's better to have a (shorter or at least more slow-paced) tease about one kink than to have them all mixed in there in one complex tease. If you want, you can still instruct the player to start up a different tease you wrote from within the current tease, but mixing them all up like this is a bit confusing.
This would also reduce the risk of people giving up because they don't really like a part of the tease. I for instance really loved the scat stuff but I didn't much like the cleaning, so I skipped it. Felt a bit like cheating :)

But please, please make more! I really enjoyed some parts, and I think it's great to see teases about more extreme kinks! Make more, I'll play them!

[sammy_808]

i agree, more kinky extreme fetish teases!

i loved this one.
:)

[greiver]

Congrats a fantastic tease truly loving the extreme sides and rarity of such a tease although i would pay attention to the previous comments all seem to be sensible suggestions. I personally cant wait for the next tease however dont rush as i want to truly appreciate your work once again thanks x

[blab]

Thank you for all the feedback! Feedback is very important and I will consider your feedback in my next tease.

LG

blab

[blab]

the upper post does not mean that you arent allowed to post some more feedback^^

[zmalejlitery]

Hej Blab,

Im waiting for another great, messy tease from you, hope you still on Milovana:)

[blab]

great since now this tease get over 10.000 clicks thank you for all the viewing.

My next tease I think will come in April or may because the next two month will be very stressful.

Greets

blab

[darkangel588]

absolutely amazing tease! i would really like to see more! maybe i could also help? let me know

[Ketto]

Best tease i have seen here. Scat is the shit!