Listen to your elders - feedback

[demosthenes]

I really enjoyed this one! I rarely actually follow the webteases (or I haven't until recently) but this one was very enjoyable!

Honestly, aside from the main one, I didn;t much like the pictures... but the tease itself was great. Nicely written, well-paced... all of that. Love the ending. Hoping to see more from the author!

[JelloBoy]

I too enjoyed this tease, the older ladies fit the tease perfectly. I've been denied for a week and could make it too far when I was sure I would loose it, so I had to stop, but I'm going to give it a try again in the near future. Great tease!

[demosthenes]

I too am going to have to try again - I've been through twice now and just not made it...! Great work, this one.

[demosthenes]

The quick follow up is definitely appreciated! I liked both of these very much.

[dtspam]

I liked all of them, they are quite well paced. I just disliked the loop in the last one, I prefer to be able to end a tease and not have to break it off at some point.
And I wondered, where the first one of the series has gone.