[FEEDBACK] Train your eyes and your focus

[kerkersklave]

I like the concept. Could be longer and have more tasks, questions and humiliation. Also I don't like the model used for the Mistress. She is dressed and styled in a "cheap slut" kind of way which I don't perceive as very dominant or attractive. Maybe others feel different. Also, the pictures seem to be a bit blurry, also the text on the censors is blurry and can be hard to read.

[to130]

I really enjoyed the tease, I even made the pictures a little bigger to read the sensor captions. I also enjoyed how you started the tease. You know me so well.

Thanks

[nicki_blue]

I thought your tease was great. I liked that there wasn't too much preamble, I thought the instructions were simple and easy to understand, text read well and timing was good, and I thought your image selection was great. All together it was a lot of fun.

I do have one suggestion, which I'll spoiler below so I don't give anything away to anyone who hasn't tried it

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There is a section at the end that had optional toys. I thought this was great but the tease doesn't give much time to gather those toys. You could add a button to click and continue, once the toys are gathered and ready to be used.

I don't remember being given any forewarning that toys might be needed/optional - I don't think this is a bad thing and I really liked the surprise but it was a rush to get gather things and be ready to play along.

[subtoy486]

It was outstanding. please make more.

[ChloeXoxo]

Unfortunately, this great tease just disappeared from the list!!
Is there any chance to get it back?