[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
[RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
I just published my second tease: Emily's Extreme Business Trip!
This tease is a sequel to my previous tease, Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation, but you do not need to play that first if you have not already. You will be spoiled on the story/ending of EEBV at the beginning of Emily's Extreme Business Trip, however.
EEBT will take you on a multi-day tease with multiple characters using chastity, denial, and lots of edging. There are three possible endings to achieve, with several possible variations. Every single one of the images was generated via AI by me specifically to be used in the tease.
Please use this thread to report any bugs, typos, spelling issues, etc. that you encounter as well as any constructive criticisms so that I can better tease you in the future. See the link to my tease below.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=62946
This tease is a sequel to my previous tease, Emily's Extreme Beach Vacation, but you do not need to play that first if you have not already. You will be spoiled on the story/ending of EEBV at the beginning of Emily's Extreme Business Trip, however.
EEBT will take you on a multi-day tease with multiple characters using chastity, denial, and lots of edging. There are three possible endings to achieve, with several possible variations. Every single one of the images was generated via AI by me specifically to be used in the tease.
Please use this thread to report any bugs, typos, spelling issues, etc. that you encounter as well as any constructive criticisms so that I can better tease you in the future. See the link to my tease below.
https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=62946
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Looking forward to it, except for me it locks up right after name entry and doesn’t progress further.
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Sorry about that, issue fixed and it's back up now.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
You should probably put a cuck/ntr warning in the description.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Why Cuck or Ntr warning. I played through two endings last night and i don't remember seeing anything to warrant it, unless there's something in the ending I didn't get.strokertoy wrote: ↑Fri Jun 09, 2023 2:00 am You should probably put a cuck/ntr warning in the description.
Dev, great first two games. Looking forward to the next if you decide to go for it.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Okay, let's do this.
Even the cbt was integrated so well (and sparse enough) that I followed along for story purposes, despite normally ignoring parts like that.
I particularly liked your changes to the longer edges - splitting them up so you can switch pictures and so I don't know how long it is despite using cheat mode.
However, most of my feedback is going to be SPOILER HEAVY, so I'll hide it away:
Also, do you happen to have a list of endings/paths/ending variations? The tease isn't convoluted to make searching for them too bad, but I'd still like to know how to avoid missing one - a work like this deserves to be completed 100%.
In summary, thank you for your effort and work, and I hope to see more of you in the future!
So first off, congratulations, you somehow managed to beat your previous tease (which is one of my all time favourites despite having several themes I'm not really interested in) - this tease is fleshed out, interesting, long, challenging, did I mention long, and just generally awesome (almost) all-around. There's variety, both in pictures and in tasks, and it's just generally improved in (again, almost) every way compared to the Beach Vacation one.
Even the cbt was integrated so well (and sparse enough) that I followed along for story purposes, despite normally ignoring parts like that.
I particularly liked your changes to the longer edges - splitting them up so you can switch pictures and so I don't know how long it is despite using cheat mode.
However, most of my feedback is going to be SPOILER HEAVY, so I'll hide it away:
- Spoiler: show
Also, do you happen to have a list of endings/paths/ending variations? The tease isn't convoluted to make searching for them too bad, but I'd still like to know how to avoid missing one - a work like this deserves to be completed 100%.
In summary, thank you for your effort and work, and I hope to see more of you in the future!
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
arandommark wrote: ↑Sun Jun 11, 2023 7:49 pm
Also, do you happen to have a list of endings/paths/ending variations? The tease isn't convoluted to make searching for them too bad, but I'd still like to know how to avoid missing one - a work like this deserves to be completed 100%.
In summary, thank you for your effort and work, and I hope to see more of you in the future!
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For the list of paths and variations:
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
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https://milovana.com/webteases/geteossc ... p?id=62946
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Yeah, EOS isn't the easiest to work with. Iirc, the guy that made girl's naughty school figured out a way to write the entire thing in normal code and found that easier/faster, but then again he sounded like a proper programmer that was used to that kinda stuff.Nice-Log wrote: ↑Mon Jun 12, 2023 8:10 pmAlso, I don't have any problem if you or anyone else wants to write your own continuation or modified version of my existing teases. Milovana makes it pretty easy to grab the JSON file for a tease and upload it into the EOS editor. For this tease, you can grab that from the below link, and that gives you access to all of the pages, images, and sound files that I used.
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https://milovana.com/webteases/geteossc ... p?id=62946
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
thedude604 wrote: ↑Sat Jun 10, 2023 12:48 amWhy Cuck or Ntr warning. I played through two endings last night and i don't remember seeing anything to warrant it, unless there's something in the ending I didn't get.strokertoy wrote: ↑Fri Jun 09, 2023 2:00 am You should probably put a cuck/ntr warning in the description.
Dev, great first two games. Looking forward to the next if you decide to go for it.
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
An other banger tease! Well done! :)
Any followup planned ? I can't get enough of Emily :)
Any followup planned ? I can't get enough of Emily :)
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Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Excellent tease, i really like your work so far! Are you planning on making any new teases in this style?
Re: [RELEASE][FEEDBACK]Emily's Extreme Business Trip
Hi, I think I read in the feedback of beach vacation that you used stable diffusion. Are you still using it to generate the images? If you are, could you maybe tell us little more on the model/lora or some tips how you make your images look so good?
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