[Feedback] Goon Session 2

[BrainStew]

After lots of constructive feedback, my second installment of Goon Session is up. I tried to make it a bit more interactive and less linear.

As always, I'm thankful for any criticism that's aimed towards making my future teases better.

Enjoy and have fun!

.Stew

[plum69]

Thanks for your two teases so far. Loved them both! Great that us betas are only worshipping clothed Women. Taking that to a further degree, perhaps your next one might feature censored pics? Just a suggestion, as I said I enjoyed both teases you have created.

[rubber_dick]

I thought I had to give up. But then I didn't... happy they forced me to stay a bit longer... and later they didn't need to force me again, because I decided to stay more.

My brain kinda melted halfway through there too... very good work, I appreciated it.

[catiesslut]

Really great work. I like the pics, I like the format, and I like the tone/mood of the writing.

[Achab1851]

After lots of constructive feedback, my second installment of Goon Session is up. I tried to make it a bit more interactive and less linear.

As always, I'm thankful for any criticism that's aimed towards making my future teases better.

Enjoy and have fun!

.Stew

Hey,
you did a really good tease!
Limiting oneself to strokes and edges might be boring for some, but I find that simple things are often also the most effective.
If you would like to do another one and need some advice, don't hesitate to contact me.

[xman911]

After lots of constructive feedback, my second installment of Goon Session is up. I tried to make it a bit more interactive and less linear.

As always, I'm thankful for any criticism that's aimed towards making my future teases better.

Enjoy and have fun!

.Stew

Your second tease is even better than the first one.

I think what can make better such a tease would be to track the number of edges and edging hold time.

Also another improvement will be if it's made into a multi day tease not necessarily with more content, just the girls saying for example "hello again gooner let's see if you can do more edges today" or something like that.

I should also say the girls in both teases are rally hot.