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I was trying to play Day 4...
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I was trying to do the 1000 edges. I think I completed all the events you could find, then I started edging on the campus screen. There was a message that said something like, 'I thought 1000 might be too many, but I have a plan. Go to the club room'. When I went from the hallway to the club room, the game froze...
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lion422 wrote: Wed Feb 01, 2023 10:46 pm
Shattered wrote: Tue Jan 24, 2023 4:32 am
TTT_ToTestTease wrote: Mon Jan 23, 2023 9:38 pm Would it be possible to add a reset button, or is there a way I can do it? Thanks for an awesome tease! The first one was such a blast.
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Enabling NG+ should do this, I hope!
noob question. I also want to go back to day 1. please explain NG+

Thanks! it's a great tease!
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enable ng+ and you go back to day 1, but you can choose who disappears each day, or not at all.
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I was playing the tease and discovered something weird.
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when day 2 started a girl disappeared. I've read some comments here and realized this is normal, however, the girl that disappeared was the one I supposedly edged the most for. Is it possible the point system is bugged? Or is it supposed to remove the most liked girl?
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Narissy wrote: Fri Feb 03, 2023 6:30 am I was playing the tease and discovered something weird.
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when day 2 started a girl disappeared. I've read some comments here and realized this is normal, however, the girl that disappeared was the one I supposedly edged the most for. Is it possible the point system is bugged? Or is it supposed to remove the most liked girl?
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Various factors determine this, so you could have edged more for her but answered questions in a way they dont like. If you use code admin, view scores, and then copy that code, and tell me who you thought you liked most, I can see if it glitched
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This was fantastic! Thank you for making such a great game!

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I enjoyed the emphasis on edging. I am 100% happy and actually prefer this kind of edge-focused tease, as opposed to ones that mix in other things like heavy ballbusting, etc. Perhaps I had an edge-focused experience, because that's how I answered the girls' questions -- and if that's true, then huge props for the tease being adaptable.

Kato was my favorite, and I'm happy with the ending I got:
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Kato's stress ball
I would love to see more of her in future teases!

My favorite part was when the girls got distracted and started chatting when Alisa was supposed to end the held edge. Perfect vibe.

Some quick caveats before constructive criticism:
I think this tease was 10/10 and rated it so. I loved it. I also appreciate the incredible amount of time and work that must go into it. So, if I have constructive criticism or things I wish for, I mention them only because I hope you find it helpful when you make the next one. I fully appreciate that some things might be too hard to program and therefore not worth implementing, but I don't know where that line is, so I mention them, for whatever they're worth.

I personally prefer long, lean, small-breasted body types, and I am a little turned off by pornstar proportions. Pornstar proportions seem popular in teases, and I liked that there were at least some girls in this tease for me (Alisa, mainly). My wish-list for the ideal adaptable teasegame would include an early section where you can make choices that lead to spending most of your time with the leaner, sportier girls; and the people who prefer bustier women can make different choices and have their own experience. That is a big thing to wish for, I know, from a technical and storytelling perspective. I only mention it because it seems like the "progressive elimination" element of a game like Bokki Tease Club is adjacent to that idea -- especially since it included a Q&A section that presumably influenced the things that came after.

Along those lines, the choice "Ass" or "Breasts" is a bit of a trick question for me. Because small breasts and a cute ass are turn-ons, and big booty and big breasts are turn-offs. So I always find it difficult and a bit immersion-breaking when teases ask "Ass or Breasts?" and then they take my answer to mean "I like big booty" or "I like big breasts." It would be great if teasegames asked more specific questions, there.

That said, I tried to make choices that I thought Alisa would like, but she got eliminated first anyway. I certainly could have misjudged my answers, but it genuinely felt like the person who should have liked me the most was intentionally eliminated, out of jealousy or something.

I do not share Mila's exhibitionism kink, which was pretty heavily featured in the game (an entire day). Thinking about it afterwards, my wish-list would include somehow choosing (knowingly or unknowingly) which girl's kink to explore that day. Alisa seemed to have a thing for hopeless gooning; Kato hit a lot of themes (pain, edge-holding, cosplay); and Brooke was big into being dominant. It felt like I did "Mila Day" but I would have loved to experience "Alisa Day" or "Kato Day" -- which, I'm sure would be a ton of extra work to make, for content that many players won't see.

Thank you so much for this wonderful game! :love:
Bug Reports / Notes:
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The path from the QR code did not seem to work.

On the 1000-edge day, some of the edge counters say "Edges remaining:" rather than "Edges:" or whatever, even though they are counting up from 0.

Returning more than once to the club room on 1000-edge day to hang out with Kato, she acts the same way each time. Not a bug, but fwiw, it would be cool if she remembered that you were already there.

In the SurveyMonkey survey, the question "Which ending did you get?" lists numbers, but I don't know which number corresponds to which ending.

I got the same dead-end crash that some other people got when they returned to the club room after 1000 edges. I had to exit and put in the code, which also reset my name and I worry might have affected my ending.

In a couple places here and there, the text was the wrong color for the girl that was speaking. It was sprinkled around, and I'm sorry I can't be more specific. It did not degrade the experience.

I got the same error as chutmunger, where, at the end, "Pick Alisa" came up multiple times under pictures of other girls. I wonder if it is connected to having to use the code, after the dead-end crash on day 4.
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I just finished the first day and seem to have run into a bug with the password. The password I am told starts with 4 "NaN", then 4 "undefined", then "2day-start". All in the same textbox, but with a new line between them.

I'm logged in, so I don't really care if this is the only issue. But I am concerned that this means that none of the variables actually got saved.

Second issue that may be more spoilery:
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After entering the room for the entrance test, the application app shows "What number do you see?" I completed the rest of the day without ever going back to the application tease.
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I'm wondering..
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when Brooke asks you on the last day to put in a name, will she always reply like "it sounds like it should ring a bell, but it doesnt"? I tried putting in some names from the past, but none worked. Can you tell me what to put in there? :whistle:
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mangoman wrote: Sun Feb 12, 2023 10:43 pm I'm wondering..
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when Brooke asks you on the last day to put in a name, will she always reply like "it sounds like it should ring a bell, but it doesnt"? I tried putting in some names from the past, but none worked. Can you tell me what to put in there? :whistle:
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Its a generic response. Brooke has vague memories but not specific enough.
magie686 wrote: Fri Feb 10, 2023 3:46 am I just finished the first day and seem to have run into a bug with the password. The password I am told starts with 4 "NaN", then 4 "undefined", then "2day-start". All in the same textbox, but with a new line between them.

I'm logged in, so I don't really care if this is the only issue. But I am concerned that this means that none of the variables actually got saved.

Second issue that may be more spoilery:
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After entering the room for the entrance test, the application app shows "What number do you see?" I completed the rest of the day without ever going back to the application tease.
For the bug, sadly the NaN and undefined bug is persisted in eos and it appears a small amount of the time and I have no idea why :( ive never been able to solve when they come up. The passwords for this tease sadly cant be any simpler, as
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the password is just literally inputting the necessary variables to calculate the backend. Also for the app I was going ot use that idea but didnt and then forgot to remove it :lol:
lmind wrote: Wed Feb 08, 2023 1:02 am This was fantastic! Thank you for making such a great game!

Spoilery Feedback:
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I enjoyed the emphasis on edging. I am 100% happy and actually prefer this kind of edge-focused tease, as opposed to ones that mix in other things like heavy ballbusting, etc. Perhaps I had an edge-focused experience, because that's how I answered the girls' questions -- and if that's true, then huge props for the tease being adaptable.

Kato was my favorite, and I'm happy with the ending I got:
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Kato's stress ball
I would love to see more of her in future teases!

My favorite part was when the girls got distracted and started chatting when Alisa was supposed to end the held edge. Perfect vibe.

Some quick caveats before constructive criticism:
I think this tease was 10/10 and rated it so. I loved it. I also appreciate the incredible amount of time and work that must go into it. So, if I have constructive criticism or things I wish for, I mention them only because I hope you find it helpful when you make the next one. I fully appreciate that some things might be too hard to program and therefore not worth implementing, but I don't know where that line is, so I mention them, for whatever they're worth.

I personally prefer long, lean, small-breasted body types, and I am a little turned off by pornstar proportions. Pornstar proportions seem popular in teases, and I liked that there were at least some girls in this tease for me (Alisa, mainly). My wish-list for the ideal adaptable teasegame would include an early section where you can make choices that lead to spending most of your time with the leaner, sportier girls; and the people who prefer bustier women can make different choices and have their own experience. That is a big thing to wish for, I know, from a technical and storytelling perspective. I only mention it because it seems like the "progressive elimination" element of a game like Bokki Tease Club is adjacent to that idea -- especially since it included a Q&A section that presumably influenced the things that came after.

Along those lines, the choice "Ass" or "Breasts" is a bit of a trick question for me. Because small breasts and a cute ass are turn-ons, and big booty and big breasts are turn-offs. So I always find it difficult and a bit immersion-breaking when teases ask "Ass or Breasts?" and then they take my answer to mean "I like big booty" or "I like big breasts." It would be great if teasegames asked more specific questions, there.

That said, I tried to make choices that I thought Alisa would like, but she got eliminated first anyway. I certainly could have misjudged my answers, but it genuinely felt like the person who should have liked me the most was intentionally eliminated, out of jealousy or something.

I do not share Mila's exhibitionism kink, which was pretty heavily featured in the game (an entire day). Thinking about it afterwards, my wish-list would include somehow choosing (knowingly or unknowingly) which girl's kink to explore that day. Alisa seemed to have a thing for hopeless gooning; Kato hit a lot of themes (pain, edge-holding, cosplay); and Brooke was big into being dominant. It felt like I did "Mila Day" but I would have loved to experience "Alisa Day" or "Kato Day" -- which, I'm sure would be a ton of extra work to make, for content that many players won't see.

Thank you so much for this wonderful game! :love:
Bug Reports / Notes:
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The path from the QR code did not seem to work.

On the 1000-edge day, some of the edge counters say "Edges remaining:" rather than "Edges:" or whatever, even though they are counting up from 0.

Returning more than once to the club room on 1000-edge day to hang out with Kato, she acts the same way each time. Not a bug, but fwiw, it would be cool if she remembered that you were already there.

In the SurveyMonkey survey, the question "Which ending did you get?" lists numbers, but I don't know which number corresponds to which ending.

I got the same dead-end crash that some other people got when they returned to the club room after 1000 edges. I had to exit and put in the code, which also reset my name and I worry might have affected my ending.

In a couple places here and there, the text was the wrong color for the girl that was speaking. It was sprinkled around, and I'm sorry I can't be more specific. It did not degrade the experience.

I got the same error as chutmunger, where, at the end, "Pick Alisa" came up multiple times under pictures of other girls. I wonder if it is connected to having to use the code, after the dead-end crash on day 4.
-lmind
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The tease is more edge based because that's the comission, all routes lead to edging, just in slightly different ways. I think Kato is likely to show up again given the nature of Bokki, but who knows where! And all the models for this tease were to suit the likes of the person who comissioned it, so they are more in line. I think I lean more towards those preferences as well but I do like to choose who has the right sets/feel for the role, which does vary, but there's always patreon if you want to request something to suit you better :w00t: It's definately possibly from a storytelling perspective, and this tease went somewhat down that route with a tease for each person, but it amounts to so much missed content for most people that one has to ask if it would be better to just make two seperate teases, or if the choice is better.

Some of the bugs I tried to fix and ended up breaking a LOT more than intended, so I have had to just leave them in given they dont break the game sadly! Such as the colours changing. Some others I believe to have fixed that maybe you need to do a forced refresh (ctrl+f5) to trigger in the tease. Hopefully that sorts it!

your ending wont be affected once you reach day 4, worry not.
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Hello! Looking forward to this tease, I'm a big fan of your work. Just wanted to let you know though, I downloaded the tease using the MiloDownloader but it seems it doesn't work with GuideMe. I just get a blank screen when I load the tease.
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I didnt think any eos tease worked with guideme!
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Shattered wrote: Thu Feb 16, 2023 1:54 am I didnt think any eos tease worked with guideme!
They do, not completely bug-free, but they work fairly well. I played the first Bokki tease using GuideMe, and am currently playing through Month with Xia on it too. Nowadays I tend to play teases offline rather than online
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Suddenly my Name is "undefined" after revisiting after a couple of days. Anyway to fix this without starting from the beginning?
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mr-max wrote: Mon Mar 13, 2023 2:37 pm Suddenly my Name is "undefined" after revisiting after a couple of days. Anyway to fix this without starting from the beginning?
Code admin, select set names.
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Shattered wrote: Mon Mar 13, 2023 3:11 pm Code admin, select set names.
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So I had my first play through. As always: Excellent work! :love:

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There was a moment when only one girl was left near the end (after the boxes) where she said:
"Ooor...I have a better idea. Why don't you just come see me right away? You want to cum right? Why wait a day for that! I'm waiting."

I have tried some things to actually "see her right away" but coldn't figure out what to do ;) Any hints?
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Never mind. I guess the behaviour after clicking "it's tomorrow" is the intended one. :)
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