[FEEDBACK] Adriana's Throat

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[FEEDBACK] Adriana's Throat

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Hello all !

Here is my second webtease, I took note of the feedbacks, and I was more inspired by the webteases I love to do!
Thanks for your new feedback !

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Re: [FEEDBACK] Adriana's Throat

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Hi Paul! I just reproduced both of your teases. I didn't like the first one but the second one is so much better :love: I added it to my favorites amd will play it later today :-P

I really apreciate how you added different sounds for in and out and the dirty talk. Nothing turns me on more than giving oral in a dom/sub dynamic while being called slurs.

My only critic is that in my opinion it would be better if the instruction are placed above the dirty talk.

Instead of:
-"So, you decided to be a throat whore today [...]"

-"Put the head of the dildo in your mouth and [...]"
It should be:
-"Put the head of the dildo in your mouth and [...]"

-"So, you decided to be a throat whore today [...]"

This way we start doing the instructions at the beggining of the timer.

Thank you so much for making these teases!!

PS: it may not be everyone's cup of tea, but I would want a tease where, instead of a woman telling me how to suck a dildo or a guy's dick, it's the guy himself who tells me how to suck his dick. I think this way is more immersive
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Re: [FEEDBACK] Adriana's Throat

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Thank you very much for this feedback!

I made the arrangements you underlined and I fixed 2 3 bugs (metronome and text)

I hope you'll have a good time with the changes and don't hesitate to give me feedback!

Personally I'm doing it tomorrow morning with my hands tied behind my back so that it's hard to test it

PS : Maybe with my dick :blush:
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PS : Maybe with my dick :blush:


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