[FEEDBACK] Grindr: First Hook-Up

[dpr]

Link to the tease

Hey, if anyone has bug reports please post them here.

I'm not even sure how to go back and edit a published tease to fix a bug, so if someone who knows could tell me how that would be very helpful.

I've made a few teases but this is the first one I decided to actually publish, so any feedback is appreciated. Thanks!

[indyc]

Link to the tease
I'm not even sure how to go back and edit a published tease to fix a bug, so if someone who knows could tell me how that would be very helpful.

I'll try to give tease feedback later but to quickly answer your question edit your same tease just as you did prior to publishing and publish it again when you fixed whatever bugs you want. It will overwrite the current published tease with the new version.

Glad to see more creators adding content!

[dpr]

to quickly answer your question edit your same tease just as you did prior to publishing and publish it again when you fixed whatever bugs you want. It will overwrite the current published tease with the new version.

Thank you

[dwinmerlaik]

Wow! this one is one of my favorite teases. I liked the detail that, if you cum, the dialogues/images are adapted to the current position.

I just wish the guy told me to deepthroat his dick (he says "go deeper", but I didn't deepthroat it yet as I expected he would explicitly say to do it at some point). He was being dominant and mean (which I loved), and yet he didn't make me choke on his dick not even a little

Also, I wish that he talked more in the anal phase, he was so talkative during the oral and then went mostly silent. Though I'm aware that writting dialogue without being too repetitive is hard (or at least it would be for me). IMO repetitive dialogue would still be much better than nothing tho.

Don't let its rating discourage you, the tease is one of the bests. I'm convinced that it's not getting the stars it deserves because of the gay pictures (late edit: even though you made it clear who the target audience was in the description, dildo teases are scarse so this one will also be reproduced -and misrated- by starving users who are into dildo play but not into gay porn). Personally, I prefer straight porn but, as long as the bottom is a twink, gay porn arouses me too

Thank you so much for making it public! can't wait for more

[TheBlackEarl]

Yaay, finally some more gay stuff!
Now if there were only more teases with bi sex...
Anyway, thank you sir

[maidenbtm]

I absolutely loved this! Please make more of these gay Stories from the perspective of a bottom! Also in the meanwhile, if you have any recommendations for stuff similar to this on milovana or any other site please let me know!

[dpr]

Thanks everyone for the feedback, it's been very helpful. I'll definitely give this tease some small updates before I move on to working on the next one.

[dwinmerlaik]

I'll definitely give this tease some small updates

Please let us know when/if you do it!

[Shinobu]

That was a very good tease, I liked it a lot, it is really good too see more gay stuff here, can't wait for more aaaa

[adrawingthespian]

love it!