Noted! Thank you for your observations. Yes, the poppers prompts have quite a long gap in the middle, but I was sort of hoping for a period where the viewer forgets where they are, entering a sleepy erotic daze until they’re woken up. This was also the idea of the switch to femdom.Froz3n wrote: ↑Sat Jun 25, 2022 3:19 pm Hello Supermassive.
First off, I'm a huge fan of this work and I appreciate every bit of effort you put into it. I've tried to dabble in your works in the past, but the content was not my cup of tea so to speak, so when you presented this one as being a lighter and "non-intrusive" I had to give it a spin and I was simply blown away.
I've never tried 2CB but I do possess a pretty powerful D9 cart that tends to have some psychedelic effects with adequate amounts. The poppers sequences were hands down my favorite. Having the whole world completely black around you and just being dragged into the screen. It's a truly a surreal experience that I honestly never felt before and I hope that means that the video achieved its goal. Hats off to you!
I do have some remarks that maybe you'd like to consider for your future videos:
- The opening sequence is amazing and does it's job perfectly to put your mind at ease and simply go with the flow. However, in the later parts of the video, the voice tends to go into uncharted territory to me, asking me to do things and calling me names that I made me go "what the f*ck?" and sort of snap back to reality for a minute. I do agree that it's pretty minimal and just sort of tingles that area, but still I was waiting for the voice's theme to change or at least to go silent (it does for the most part) so I can not think once again. Maybe you would like to consider making a video with an accompanying voice focused solely on trance, ascendance, blanking out, endless space... Like at the very beginning of Blueberry Vortex, and during Poppers sequences. You get the gist. Some JOI to go slower/faster is appreciated, but the femdom stuff really takes me out.
- Poppers sequences: as mentioned multiple times before, these were simply amazing. I do, however, wish they were a bit more often. You mention that you placed them sparsely so that you have some time for the substance to dissipate so the effect becomes stronger once you take another hit. That makes sense, but I think it comes down to the Poppers you use. For example Rush Yellow I feel can be reapplied at a frequent rate since it's effect are like a geometric progression that constantly goes up. In this video's case, switching to Rush Black made more sense since they're extremely potent at the very first draw, but immediately fall off on the 2nd draw. At one point in the video though, I became so enthralled in the whole space sequence that when another prompt to draw came in I simply took deep breaths of air. But please leave these visual and audio sequences as is! I'm sure everyone is able to adjust their hits in moderation. With a bit more often poppers hits (I think 5-7 minutes is the sweet spot) content ramp-up can be more severe as well.
- Speaking of content ramp-up: This of course depends on the type of video you're aiming for, but I think building up things faster might serve the video well. I'll admit I'm mostly a hardcore content enjoyer, but coming into this video without 10 days of release, still made me wish things progressed a tiny bit faster. We shouldn't necessarily go all the way to hardcore fucking and gangbangs (those can actually be a huge turn off), but something more to edge to would be much appreciated.
- Speaking of that: The ending/finishing sequence seemed a bit unrealized. It was sort of "ok you can cum now". The extra poppers hit was appreciated, although maybe going all-out space sequence once again would've been more impactful. I think the JOI could've encouraged the viewer to edge for a solid chunk of the video, maybe to some fucking, not only finishing visuals.
In the end, I really really loved your creation and I can't wait to see more. Keep up the awesome work!
- And finally, the content. Most of the time it's simply amazing, sensual, beautiful. Some of the scenes made me go "holy fucking shit" as I couldn't believe what I was seeing. However other scenes (while being good on their own) really fell out of the whole concept. Maybe you'd like to consider sticking to some thematic? Maybe not for the whole video, but for segments of the video. For example there's lots of amazing thematic CH videos and PMV's that are following some sort of theme, like Sensual girls, Girls being massaged, TikTok girls, OnlyFans girls, E-girls and so on. Or maybe it could be a specific camera angle thematic, as only having riding videos, or POV videos. Finally simple things as having good natural lighting in all scenes throughout makes the end result so much better (instead of switching from dark video to full blown out daylight). I did however very much like the mix of both sensual and hardcore stuff stitched together. Had an element of surprise to it.
But valid points and something I’ll bear in mind for the future.
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