davej2438 wrote: ↑Sun Jan 23, 2022 2:26 am
I personally really like the VOs (especially the one at the end, I'd love to know her name )
I think it's a unique style and one of those things that sets you apart from the other creators in a good way. Thanks for making the series!
I'm glad you like it! :) She's Jaye Wilde
froog wrote: ↑Sun Jan 23, 2022 1:33 pm
Nice video, my feedback on the voices was that I only liked the deeper voice. The higher pitched one was a bit too over the top what she was saying and sort of ruined the vibe.
Have you thought of cutting a version without the voices? Or is that going to be too hard to unmix them now?
Thanks for doing it though. I cannot complain for all the effort you put in. It is high quality production.
Thx for commenting! It's not a problem to do another version without the VOs. I can do that. Or do you think it would be a good idea to make another version without the high pitched girl and maybe get rid of some of the voice lines to make it more clean and replace the original video?
ferdinand21 wrote: ↑Mon Jan 24, 2022 10:31 pm
Thx for commenting! It's not a problem to do another version without the VOs. I can do that. Or do you think it would be a good idea to make another version without the high pitched girl and maybe get rid of some of the voice lines to make it more clean and replace the original video?
I think that would be great - I don't think you need to lose them all (to make me happy). I only thought having one without any voices might be less work for you to make more people happy - a simpler option. I will watch it again and give you more specific feedback in a couple of days as to which for me would be good to keep, if that would be useful for you.
But basically - for me the voices that were more like JOI instructions worked better. The section from around30mins onwards was the bigger turn -off - maybe because the voice does not relate to what's happening in the video. Maybe that's is. - it's came across like a role-play phone sex line to me, that bit. (Also the lines and delivery were a bit over the top as well for my personal taste)
ferdinand21 wrote: ↑Mon Jan 24, 2022 10:31 pm
Thx for commenting! It's not a problem to do another version without the VOs. I can do that. Or do you think it would be a good idea to make another version without the high pitched girl and maybe get rid of some of the voice lines to make it more clean and replace the original video?
I think that would be great - I don't think you need to lose them all (to make me happy). I only thought having one without any voices might be less work for you to make more people happy - a simpler option. I will watch it again and give you more specific feedback in a couple of days as to which for me would be good to keep, if that would be useful for you.
But basically - for me the voices that were more like JOI instructions worked better. The section from around30mins onwards was the bigger turn -off - maybe because the voice does not relate to what's happening in the video. Maybe that's is. - it's came across like a role-play phone sex line to me, that bit. (Also the lines and delivery were a bit over the top as well for my personal taste)
Yes, that kind of feedback would be wonderful too! Even now I have better view of what to do about it already. The Phoebe round 5 needs to go and I'll get rid of some of the other lines too. And I can also make a version without any VO at all, leave only the intro.
Here's an idea: should I update the video and remove round 5 (phoebe with the high pitched voice) and maybe remove some other lines to make it cleaner and reupload this fixed version and replace the original with it?
Script is really good. For whatever reason, this video, combined with the voice overs and the script are my kryptonite. I've played this twice and I don't think I've gotten more than 20 minutes in. I'm looking forward to enjoying all of it some day. :)
Ok so I have watched both versions. I'm a bit indifferent on wether I like voiceovers as a whole.
After some thorough tests this video works better with the voiceover imo.
ferdinand21 wrote: ↑Thu Jan 20, 2022 10:09 am
Looks like it's a niche within a niche and not everyone will like it. They do work for me so hopefully they will for some people too.
I think people who don't like voiceovers are overrepresented in the comments and many people actually like it.
Anyway, personally I like it , and I loved your creation.
So please feel free to make other masterpieces with voiceovers in the future if you feel like it
kcsmith2476 wrote: ↑Fri Feb 04, 2022 9:25 pm
Maybe not a popular opinion here, but I actually like the voiceovers. Really gets me going even more.
And OMG, that last round....one of my all time favorite porn stars.
I'm so glad that you liked the voiceover and that the final round worked as it should :)
MaKTasTiK wrote: ↑Fri Feb 04, 2022 9:48 pm
Ok so I have watched both versions. I'm a bit indifferent on wether I like voiceovers as a whole.
After some thorough tests this video works better with the voiceover imo.
ferdinand21 wrote: ↑Thu Jan 20, 2022 10:09 am
Looks like it's a niche within a niche and not everyone will like it. They do work for me so hopefully they will for some people too.
I think people who don't like voiceovers are overrepresented in the comments and many people actually like it.
Anyway, personally I like it , and I loved your creation.
So please feel free to make other masterpieces with voiceovers in the future if you feel like it
Thank you for the feedback too :)
So as I see it I will leave the original video as is and there's the no VO version too. I want to create another one and will take all the feedback into account. Hopefully I'll use only just enough of voice next time, but I definitely want to use some. I'll maybe try a little bit different format, but nothing radical tho. We'll see
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, and I loved your creation. 