Missing your Ex?

[chastejames]

Hey,

I'm new to the site, beyond playing teases and leaving again. I just published my first tease - "Missing your Ex?".

I hope it's the first in a series of teases that sends you down a rabbit hole in dedicating your entire life to your Ex girlfriend. I wanted to start a thread for feedback, suggestions and ideas of where the series could go.

At the moment, nothing is off the table, from chastity, anal, feminisation, cbt, public humiliation. At the same time, nothing is specifically planned. So let me know what direction you'd like the series to head down!

[mondany]

Love this theme!

Very well written and psychologically cruel in a good way
Little typo early on though: says "waned" when should be "warned"

[Android71]

I love the idea of this tease, even though I have to replace "ex" with "my crush that I am never able to get"

Mixing this with the memories of an ex (that I don't miss), who leaves me for ot getting her satisfied, works fine.

Hoping you'll keep working on this tease.

[chastejames]

Love this theme!

Very well written and psychologically cruel in a good way
Little typo early on though: says "waned" when should be "warned"

Glad to hear that you're a fan of the theme :) It's one that I've seen a few teases on but never really go in the direction I'm wanting it to, so I'm hoping to fix that.

Thanks for letting me know about the typo - it should be fixed now :)

[chastejames]

I love the idea of this tease, even though I have to replace "ex" with "my crush that I am never able to get"

Mixing this with the memories of an ex (that I don't miss), who leaves me for ot getting her satisfied, works fine.

Hoping you'll keep working on this tease.

Aha! I'm surprised to hear that you've had success with it, even without the ex. Surprised, but VERY glad to hear it!

I hope to keep working on it too. At the moment, it's not getting the best rating, so if you have any constructive criticism to improve it, I'm all ears :)

[mondany]

The resolution on some of the images seems really low, maybe that could be improved. Can't really think of any other issues. I wouldn't worry about low rating right now though. Just a theory, but my guess is since it's top of the front page, it got some 1 star reviews from people who don't like the theme or something. But over time it will get mostly 5 star reviews from people who search it out for the theme

[chastejames]

The resolution on some of the images seems really low, maybe that could be improved. Can't really think of any other issues. I wouldn't worry about low rating right now though. Just a theory, but my guess is since it's top of the front page, it got some 1 star reviews from people who don't like the theme or something. But over time it will get mostly 5 star reviews from people who search it out for the theme

Oooooh! Good to know that the resolution is poor on some images. I'll go through it later today and try and get better res images :)

Thank you for being so supportive!

[imtoosexy]

I like your theme, great idea and best of luck following it.

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I don't like so called tease text relevant images, text gets that point across and doesnt need a relevant google image.
I would prefer images of nice gf type girls while reading that text.

the intro takes a bit too long for me to maintain my interest, especially with non stimulating images. while the stroking edging cumming part is a bit short, especially in relation to the long intro.

consider extending the stroking part to the intro by including a few stroking instructions and replacing non-female images with gf type vanilla porn in order to keep the viewet interested.

you might find scroller.com a good source for images

It might seem like a critical review, but I think it has good potential, and i expect your success to come with a liked start.

[chastejames]

Hey, sorry for the delay on the reply! I love the feedback. I'll be sure to keep it all in mind as the series progresses!

The next instalment is a little delayed unfortunately, due to personal life getting in the way. Too much to do, too little time! However, it will continue :D In the meantime, keep the feedback and suggestions coming :)

[chastejames]

Hey all!

I'm really sorry that the sequel to missing your ex is still not out. I've been under-the-weather unfortunately.

I want to start working on the sequel, but I'm thinking of re-releasing the original with some added stroking, as this was the major criticism of the original. What do you guys think?

All the best,
Jamiex

[PFCuck]

Take your time :) love your tease! Cant wait to see more. This theme is a personal favourite of mine.

[Acceptable_Cry_7868]

Best topic ever. Tell me is there more to come featuring ex-girlfriend worship?