Two Hole Slut - Feedback Thread

[jyk518]

Hi everyone!

This is the first tease I've made in years and my first time using the EOS Editor. I absolutely love the functionality of it and all the things you can do with it. I'd love to hear your guys feed back on the tease, anything I can do to improve it or things you guys liked. Hope to continue to make teases. I personally have a fucking machine and was thinking about making a tease involving that, though I know a lot of people probably don't have one of these. Thanks!

[sparkyjo]

Hi, Great tease, I really enjoyed the ending . I would like to see a few more pics. Although your choice of mistress was great, I prefer it when the pic changes on every new instruction. It's ok to go back and reuse a pic but I just feel it's more interactive to change the pic. I like metronomes too but i know there are some who don't.
I found some of the throat fucking a bit rough but that's probably just me . I tried to keep up but the long timer beat me
Hope this helps,
Keep up the good work

[jyk518]

Thanks for the feeeback! I’ll definitely look into adding a metronome and more pictures. I know people have mixed feelings on metronomes sometimes. Was a great first experience using EOS.

[Mr.styr]

Looks great, thank you! I will test it at end of month when all toys will be delivered to me

[Nwah]

I really enjoyed this tease! The verbal humiliation was very well-written and I liked the pacing. You kept progressing between intense and relaxed parts, but still gave a little time to take breaks as well as "get into position" when swapping to another task. The part with the inflatable plug and the vibrator on your cage - wow. Good stuff! Loved the ending too.

Good use of suction cups. I don't think I'd have enough hands to do it without them.

[Ph0enixAsh]

Took a peek at the beginning of this one and I'm really looking forward to coming back to run through it properly when I have an open afternoon. It looks great at first glance! I noticed one small "boneappletea" moment though that I thought I'd point out: when she first asks you to get hard she refers to her breasts as "soft and subtle" but the idiom you meant to use is "soft and supple." Those perfect tits are anything but subtle.

[silverlight-29]

You made a great tease, I really appreciated it, but I was a little disappointed by the end, I mean, I'd like to continue fucking with a bigger dildo, more roughly, ruining more more and more until (maybe?) the final release, It would be nice to use the cum from ruined orgasm as lube and get more fucking, over, over and over, maybe also with a mistress female friend.
However, I'm waiting really really hopely for your next teases, please more anal based, more toys too, such as ribbed dildo, more inflatable plug uses, more fun

[Hotwaxie]

I really love this tease and I am desperately looking for similar ones. The combination of chastity and getting fucked is just right in this one. Can anyone recommend another like this?