The secret of your girlfriends necklace

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The secret of your girlfriends necklace

Post by Jaberwocky »

Hi all!

Just added a webtease. Though it is more of a story than a webtease.

Feel free to leave comments here.
Elwood, of the Blues Brothers wrote:Try not to be so negative all the time. Why don't you offer a little... constructive criticism?
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Jaberwocky wrote:Hi all!

Just added a webtease. Though it is more of a story than a webtease.

Feel free to leave comments here.
Elwood, of the Blues Brothers wrote:Try not to be so negative all the time. Why don't you offer a little... constructive criticism?
My good man scandinavian friend,that would have been a great tease,only if you inserted some,,stroke 100 times,, for the key..and so one.
Your talent is great.
However,you must take control of the dick's at one point.You never did it,even though the pics were great.
Be aware we are here to follow instructions,not to read a story.
The story is secondary..the stroking is primary.
When you understand this,you'll understand my wisdom.
love,danny(good work,keep trying,dear..you have talent)
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Thanks for the comment!

Being locked and stroking is not a good combination in my eyes. But you are right about one part, without the stroking it is indeed less of a tease. When I get to make another one, it will have stroking!

(btw, The Netherlands are not part of Scandinavian)
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Jaberwocky wrote:Thanks for the comment!

Being locked and stroking is not a good combination in my eyes. But you are right about one part, without the stroking it is indeed less of a tease. When I get to make another one, it will have stroking!

(btw, The Netherlands are not part of Scandinavian)
OOps..sorry I forgot that..I was in Amsterdam ...fine city,all with water channels.Great beer.
For some particular reason,I thought Holland was scandinavian speaking language.
My mistake.
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Jaberwocky wrote:
(btw, The Netherlands are not part of Scandinavian)
However...on this link
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/North_Germanic_languages
"In historical linguistics, the North Germanic family tree is divided into two main branches, West Scandinavian languages (Norwegian, Faroese and Icelandic) and East Scandinavian languages (Danish and Swedish), along with various dialects and varieties. The two branches are derived from the western and eastern dialect group of Old Norse, respectively. There was also an Old Gutnish branch spoken on the island of Gotland. The East Scandinavian languages (and modern Norwegian, through Danish) were heavily influenced by Middle Low German during the period of Hanseatic expansion."

Since you speak danish,it's really ridiculous to admonish me that the Holland is NOT a scandivavian speaking language.
Shame on you,scandinavian!!
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Excellent start.... if this continues this could be a great chastity tease!
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I like your idea here ... keep going with it. And ignore the "hundred strokes" comment; it's just a troll comment. The "hundred left, hundred right" teases get very dull indeed, in my humble opinion.
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MartinC wrote:I like your idea here ... keep going with it. And ignore the "hundred strokes" comment; it's just a troll comment. The "hundred left, hundred right" teases get very dull indeed, in my humble opinion.
I don't remember calling you a troll,asshole Martin...what's the matter with you,dear?
That was my humble opinion also,but I did NOT call you a troll,you cretinoid.Your humble opinion sucks,by the way..
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I liked the plot, but it ended too soon. I think it would be a good base for a real tease, maybe you show her your cb and she starts teasing you ("do you want me to unlock you? hm, let me think... you should tell me what's your favourite part of my body first!") ...
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dannywanker wrote: Since you speak danish,it's really ridiculous to admonish me that the Holland is NOT a scandivavian speaking language.
Shame on you,scandinavian!!
One tiny small insignificant point to your comment:
I don't speak Danish at all! If a person speaks Danish to me, I don't understand a thing he or she would say. The only thing I can do a little is make out the subject of an article in a newspaper when I read it in Danish because it contains a lot of words I know from Dutch, Fries(another language spoken in The Netherlands) and German.

If you still consider that The Netherlands are a part of Scandinavian, because of the origin of our language, be my guest. But than you should also include the following countries:
Germany, The U.K., Canada, The U.S.A., Australia,... by the way, where are you from?

Many Australians would probably be surprised to hear that they are part of Scandinavian :-O
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nomeuno wrote:Excellent start.... if this continues this could be a great chastity tease!
Darn, you have a nice time-consuming point ;-)
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MartinC wrote:I like your idea here ... keep going with it. And ignore the "hundred strokes" comment; it's just a troll comment. The "hundred left, hundred right" teases get very dull indeed, in my humble opinion.
Sorry..you are the mother fucker who called me troll for expressing my opinions?...

Why NOT accept that you ARE a troll,since you have zero understanding of how men react,plus you are impotent,since more then 100 strokes makes you bored?
A limp dick like yours surely will get bored.
trolls like you should get to the cemetery...
really.
Because real men can do 10,000 strokes with no flinching other then the mexican mouskitos biting their dick-head.
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Guys,
Polite would be nice :-(
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Jaberwocky wrote:Guys,
Polite would be nice :-(
Polite would be nice if the mother fucker cretinoid asshole would not have called me,,troll,, for expressing my opinions.
Other then that,it was my humble opinion only.
really.

Since I am the one always banned,but the mods look at me only,not the words addressed to me.
Looks like they they have a ,,fix,, on dannywanker.
Look what the OTHERS have said,with no provoking from me,before you bann me.
<<TROLL>???..
I beg your pardon,asshole Martin?..for saying my opinions,cretinoid Martin?
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Post by Marke »

i loved it. Great story and use of pictures. Love the model's name and everything about it.

It was actualy a tease I could do without fear of cuming.

I just love that she has the key to your hart. That is so deer.
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