@Zerganterus:
Oh just wow...and ouch lol. Thank you so much for the very detailed set. Long story short, I'm now at -145 points.
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Well, that certainly was a test with 287 edges in the entire set. The wildcard allowing for breaks definitely made it an interesting balance of risk verses reward, especially since some of the round were fairly light on edges, while some were quite a lot. The double-or-nothing (or I suppose double and double in this case lol) only added to that.
All of the image sets were extremely sexy for me and right in line with the sort of shoots I love. Even the ones which had models not from my favourites list were great. And while I think it was unintentional Lexi and Mia finally triggered a hidden sort of effect in my rules. More on that later.
By the time I got to Marry and Ariel in the pool, I was at the point where I was able to hit the edge in 2-3 strokes even after relaxing back from it. Their set was quite the challenge on its own, just with it being them and wet and then the nice shiny metal railing at the end (7 30 second edges). Even so, with taking a break an effective 300 point cost, I thought it was worth it to keep going.
Oh, the few pictures of them touching the tile had me hitting pretty much as hard as I dared. In honesty I can do things which hurt more, but they all feel like I'm doing it to myself. The weapon/device thing I use feels a lot more like it's the women giving me a kick, which is way more of a turn on. And it also lets me swing hard rather than having to be careful. The set as a whole definitely left me with beaten and tender balls, thank to the tile and stone always showing up with my favourite models somehow, making just about every hit an as hard as I dare hit. 
Nicole Graves is where it all went wrong. I was ending along with her display quite alright, her set was less demanding than the one before it after all. I took my time, went careful and slow as by this point I knew rushing anything would be likely to end in a ruin. Even so, finally to this picture I must have just put a small touch wrong and I couldn't stop myself from just barely slipping over the edge at which point I couldn't stop my body from hitting a ruined orgasm.
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Now, I normally have a lot of trouble getting right back to the edge after an accidental ruin. It's just one of those things where an accidental ruin goes a touch too far and I need 10 minutes before I can edge again. I was really happy that was not the case this time, as after I licked it up and got myself sorted again I got right back to the edge.
The big problem there was, I got back to the edge quick for once, but had almost not control at all. I immediately ruined again, still on the same image. Somehow I made it to the end of her set and decided to take a break.
I got through the rest of the set with not more accidents. Lorena and Ariel were extremely sexy as always, and made sure their visits were rather painful. That was a lot of palming for Ariel...which part of me loves and part of me was begging for her to drop the umbrella lol. I did figure out the 'less than half way' was a bluff, if only because forum character limits are a thing.
Having Caprice finish things off was wonderful. She is always super sexy, and she looked relaxed even if I definitely wasn't (counted her mat colourful). Between that mat and the glossy wood floor, the last two images were 16 edges each.
So, in the edge I gaiend 574 points, but lost 1150 almost all at once too. That means at worst I was down to -391 points while I ended with -145.
Which of course activated the 250 point punishment. I randomized a CH video and round on Pornhub and got Chroma 2, Round 3. Lucky me, that was the rapid beat round...ow.
Overall, the set was in the range of 3 hours to get through and a really amazing challenge. I did ruin, but felt I probably shouldn't have and should have gotten farther in. In some ways I find a high number of normal edges can be more likely to cause an unintentional ruin than a fewer number of edge and rides, while the edge and ride can actually make me feel more desperate to cum. Is there some way I could have done the whole thing with no breaks? Maybe. Ariel and Marry was the most challenging single round, but had I not ruined with Nicole I think it's likely Lorena or Ariel may have gotten me once. As much as all the kicks slow down the edging, it keeps me really horny in a different way. Ruining twice is definitely on me, that shouldn't have happened
Two final things in the way of feedback:
When writing a longer set like this, you might want to keep spoilers for the rounds one after the other instead of nested. It's easier for you too when previewing, since you don't have to go through every round just to see the last one.
The only part of that didn't really work for me was the taunting from Marry and Ariel, and then Ariel again where they really encouraged me to just cum. Trust me I wanted to. It was just clear enough that it was a taunt and not an order from context, but since these two can give me any instruction they want I had to take a pause and check it wasn't actually an order to cum. This was especially true the second time with Ariel, since the premise is sort of that she can get whatever she wants and I'm doing all this because she and the others want me to. A small thing in the end, so if anything for next time just make sure it's clear if they are telling me to cum or taunting me (e.g. 'I know I haven't actually given you permission, but you could just cum everywhere....the points will come back. Come on. Do it!')
But all in all, amazing set and I had so much fun with it. I am a little sore now, and so very, very horny (the two ruins really didn't help at all).
@Roundhound:
Welcome back!
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- Congrats on getting through the whole set, and glad you enjoyed it. I can personally related to Caprice's power to just make...holding back feel crazy
Yes, "Limited" edges are rather difficult with your rules sometimes. Mind you that might be my own bias towards using favourite models and brunettes too.
Okay, interesting. I often can't get back to the edge at all for 15 minutes or thereabouts. Maybe a better way of putting that would have been, when is it comfortable to get back to the edge if she wants you to keep going but not really force you back to the brink?
@everyone:
A couple points to take away from the set I just did.
One, everyone seems to really love the idea of the punishments I've added to my rules if I lose too many points. But it's unlikely I'm ever going to get to the bottom. So, I am thinking of removing negative points entirely and then just having a running suggestion box for punishments in my rules. Any time I ruin accidentally I would still lose points, and then the person who's set I ruined to could pick a punishment from those suggested or make up their own. I would also try to add new punishments as I do each one once. Does this sound like a good idea?
Second, Zerganterus' set for me hit on a certain intentionally vague feature of my rules. If you think about it, it's been in there for a while, and being honest this isn't the way I figured someone would trigger it. So instead of spelling it out I'll just leave a hint for those of you who like puzzles: one of the early pictures in the Mia + Lexi round triggered two modifiers at once somehow.
Finally, I am working on something for the thread for the 1000th reply. It should be an idea anyone can take part in, no matter if they are denied or not. The idea is it will slot in beside all of your usual teasing and sexual activity rather than take over it. But, I am still open to suggestions here. I have lots of writing left to do on it.
No set just now, I might get one posted later but just want to post this as is first.
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My Rules
A couple small tweaks here.
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These look long, but they are meant to be really easy to work with. At the most basic level, clothed women are for strokes, any sort of nudity makes me edge. Here’s a quick cheat sheet and colour code:
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Stroking: Clothed/Covered
Technique: Touching something grainy/powdery or something see-through
Edging: Nudity, Touching something shiny/glossy, vivid/colourful or liquid, favourite models
Ballbusting: touching something rock/stone/tile/ceramic or black/very dark in colour
Special: custom instructions, wildcards, releases, points, feature category (strappy shoes)
All rules are per woman (or trans model) in the image and stack. I enjoy edging and any sort of creativity adding elements beyond stroke, edge, slap, ruin and/or cum.
Basic Rules for All Images
Breasts, ass and pussy covered - Stroke for 1 minute. Covering with hands/objects counts.
Nude or Partially nude, but out of frame or turned away – 1 Edge with slow strokes
Each visible nipple, ass or pussy - 1 Edge
Cumshot – triggers the liquid modifier (see below).
Favourite or Featured Model (list in spoiler) – Hold all edges for 10 seconds longer. They may also give custom instructions (detail in advanced rules).
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- Currently Featured: Gloria Sol, Dani Daniels, Amarna Miller, Heather Vandeven, Niemira
Top Favourites: Kyla Cole, Lorena Garcia, Miela (Marry Queen), Caprice (Little Caprice), Ariel (Piper Fawn)
Favourites: Orsi Kocsis (Klaudia), Ivette Blanche (Linda L), Sunny Leone, Chanel Santini, Tori Black, Alexa Tomas, Carlotta Champagne
Feature Category (changes often): Waring Brown Leather clothing - 1 extra edge, ballbust myself in a way the image seems to suggest to me
Wildcards– add to or modify my rules for the set, as many as you would like. This can be a single small change or turning everything upside down. If you have an idea, feel free to go for it!
Releases – Any releases have to come from custom instructions or wildcards.
Points – Current Total: -145 - To make me want to be teased and edged even more, every edge gives me a point towards a reward I can spend them on. If I cum without permission I must ruin, eat it and lose 250 points.
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Here is the list of rewards and penalties. These are meant to be little extras and not come up often. To get a reward, I must spend that many points. If I go so low that I hit a penalty, I must immediately do it as soon as I can after the end of the set.
Penalties:
-1000 – Watch videos of the model I ruined to and stroke non-stop until I cum at least 5 times. Every orgasm must be on my face or eaten up.
-750 – Find a 20 minute or longer video with the model I ruined to (anything with a beat or hardcore scene). Fuck my ass to that rhythm without touching my cock.
-500 – Watch a video at least 10 minutes long of the model I ruined to, crushing my balls the whole time.
-250 – Watch 1 round of a CH video. Ballbust to the beat instead of stroke.
Rewards:
250 – ruined orgasm by crushing my balls
500 – ruined orgasm
750 – palm to full orgasm
1000 – full orgasm
Modifier Rules - change or add to the Basics
These take effect if the model is touching an object (her clothing/worn items don't count unless she says they do) of the given material with any part of her body. That includes sitting, standing, lying or leaning on it. There is more detail on how this works under Advanced Rules if you need it.
Made of grains or small bits (e.g. sand, gravel, snow, powders) - Stroke tip only.
Any see-through solid (e.g. glass, ice, sheer fabric, mesh) - Palm tip instead of stroking.
Shiny or Glossy – Hold any edges for 20s. Separate objects add up.
Brightly Coloured/Vivid - +1 edge and convert all edge riding into +1 edge per 10s I would have spent on edge.
Liquids (or being wet) – +1 edge for each different liquid or source of liquid. (e.g. A girl with cum from 2 guys is +2 edges.)
For these I will hit or squeeze harder the hotter I find the image, unless text specifies the intensity.
Black or very dark colour (e.g. dark wood stain) - Squeeze/Crush balls for 20s or until task is done (whichever is longer).
Rock/Stone/Tile/Ceramic – 5 hits (something like kicks) to the balls during task. Separate items add up.
Advanced Rules:
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Detailed Rules for Modifiers:
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- -Objects count as what they look like (e.g. wood coloured plastic counts as wood etc.).
-Clothing, jewellery and worn items the model is wearing don't count unless she says they do.
-Clearly separate objects will stack the modifier where indicated. (Examples like different planks in the same fence, different rocks in a riverbed, or different metal bolts in the same piece of furniture are not separate objects)
-A single object can only trigger each modifier once unless the model says otherwise. This should reduce confusion, but let you use an image with an elaborate object to stack things when you mean to. (e.g. a black toy with a black strap, doesn’t add 40s of crushing, just 20. But if the toy is shiny then both the Black and Shiny modifiers will count))
-The image has to show the model clearly touching the item to count. If the item is covered or out of frame it does not count unless the model says otherwise (e.g. You can tell my feet are still on the floor, etc.).
Custom Instructions - I will follow whatever any feature or favourite model says (you may add text instructions each time you use an image of them). If there’s no instruction, normal rules for the image apply. Go ahead and use these to get creative and use things not in the rules above (bondage, poses, toys, whatever!). This can also include reasonable 'homework' tasks for between sets or the next 24 hours.
Featuring a new model - You may suggest a model for me to feature at the end of a set. If I agree and add her, I will edge five times and take five hard kicks to the balls for her. Open to suggestions for what I should do if a girl makes it into my permanent favourites.
Videos
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- Videos follow the above rules for what is on screen. Edging and edge riding is once per minute until there is a minimum 10 second break. Ball hits go up in intensity as the action on screen does. Modifiers all still apply.
Music, CH or BPM – instead of my basic rules you can require I stroke to the beat (or a set BPM stroke speed) for the entire length of a video. Modifiers still apply. If using a CH or other video with instructions make sure to specify if I should follow them or ignore them (or part of them). You can also choose if I should stop at the edge to avoid cumming, or keep stroking at the ordered rhythm regardless until the video ends.
Likes, Toys and Extra Info
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- Likes/dislikes are in my profile. My rules should be able to make for some interesting combinations of tasks, even when I am allowed to cum so go ahead and use this! I'm always interested in creative ways to screw with orgasms once they're granted
Anal can be fun, but it will take me a bit of time to prepare, so it doesn't work well as a surprise. I’m also going to leave any anal entirely up to custom instructions, because it’s a type of play I feel needs more care and description than stroking.
Toys - vibrator with one speed, dildo with suction cup, lots of rope/string/rubber bands, some clothes pegs, most household items, makeshift humbler. Cock cage which prevents me from getting much of an erection, but leaves some room for stimulation so I can feasibly edge and cum while restrained in it. It is not secure nor meant to be worn for long periods.
Last Ruin: May 7, 2x by accident
Last Full Orgasm: Apr 30
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. i am starting to get used to edgind this much now, so i changed my rules a little after your set 
