just came across this story series now, got to say, one of my favorite so far! It's really your writing and planning, the words to get to the edge and timing out along to hold it, really exceptional.
I'd love to see you work on a cuckold multi part storyline. Contrary to what a lot of people here seem to think, a good cuckold doesn't need to involve any kind of feminization. Just having a good looking girl with your writing, talking to the reader as if they are her husband, teasing him, pushing him to the edge over and over, denying him while talking about going out with her lover, talking to them on the phone, anything along those lines. I think you could really nail it!

