What was the Katie thing at the end? Did I miss/forget something? When asked Hailey says she'll explain it after the lockup period or whatever, but "Continue the Tease" just replays the last hour. Also how is the lockup period determined? She just said I have "0 points" or whatever?
In the end when I press "I have one last question", there is a "What happened with Katie" option. Hailey then says "I'll tell you what...you know those bonus days of Chastity you've earned? Once you've done them...remind me about Katie, and I'll tell you alll about it. You might get more than you bargained for, hehe! Come back and 'continue the tease' once you've done your time locked up, ok?"
There was a very small bug locking off the secret ending...you can go to code midnight2-4 to fix that and then continue The bonus days depended on the 9pm task, so that should have fed through...
Well I definitely did click all/most of the prompts (more than 0 for sure), so I'm not sure that worked? I had saved the tease between the two, I think. So maybe it didn't save right? BTW Bug in the secret ending thing. When you say "Remind me what happened, Miss" it just loops back.
In the end when I press "I have one last question", there is a "What happened with Katie" option. Hailey then says "I'll tell you what...you know those bonus days of Chastity you've earned? Once you've done them...remind me about Katie, and I'll tell you alll about it. You might get more than you bargained for, hehe! Come back and 'continue the tease' once you've done your time locked up, ok?"
There was a very small bug locking off the secret ending...you can go to code midnight2-4 to fix that and then continue The bonus days depended on the 9pm task, so that should have fed through...
Well I definitely did click all/most of the prompts (more than 0 for sure), so I'm not sure that worked? I had saved the tease between the two, I think. So maybe it didn't save right? BTW Bug in the secret ending thing. When you say "Remind me what happened, Miss" it just loops back.
Corrected the loop! And seems like 9pm was a fail overall so if its failing again always good
It's great to be able to able to dip in and out with the hourly codes. I know it's not really meant to be played like that, but it works for me rather well.
Anyway, here are some more incredibly silly observations that may or may not be of interest/use:
"And your still mostly be marked by me, so it's fine!"
*your* -> *you're*
"So if you need the toilet, nows your chance! Go, just in case you need to!"
*now* -> *now's*
"Good Slave. Now you leave that alone until you've prepared something to eat, then come back to me!"
*that alone* -> *that cock alone*
- The action buttons are labelled as "Edge", but perhaps they would be better labelled as "On the edge" or "Edging"?
- It was implied that the clamps could be removed once the meal was finished, but perhaps the session could be rounded off with something like:
"If you have any food left, finish it off and then you can remove the clamps."
"So first, about the test thats in the past...Caprice stopped by, didn't she?"
*thats* -> that's*
"So for the first question...I'll make it easy and give you a good chance at my breasts! The vibrator will only get worse, hehe..."
*at my* -> *at seeing my*
- I like a good quiz! I scored 9.
"Prepared means that you have done all your edges, you're back on your cage..."
*on* -> *in*
"So if you need the toilet...go now, you won't have chance once we start! And make sure you come back with all those pegs!"
*have chance* -> *have a chance*
"Oh come on, we both know. It's a clamp on each nipple! The only question is which should type it's going to be! Choose your difficulty wisely!"
"Speaking of pins, add more clothespins! Lets put one on your lower lip, and one on your upper lip on the same place so they brush against each other! "
*lets* -> *let's*
"Okay, so take clamp A off. And place it as close as possible to clamp B - ontop of it it possible!"
*off. And* -> *off and*
*ontop* -> *on top*
*it it* -> *it if*
"The clamps can distract you, but lets see if we can make you forget them. Kneel before me."
*lets* -> *let's*
- When the timer expired, it jumped out, which may have been intended, but as I was taking my time (and making pedantic notes!) I might have missed some of the pain section. It seems like a good safety measure!
"I don't need permission to see you first, but I was intrigued, so I agreed! And...oh, I think that's her calling now! It's a surprise to me, so lets see what she has in mind, hehe!"
*lets* -> *let's*
"Now think back, Hailey. I asked you a series of questions over the last month or so to prepare for this. Any idea what they are?"
*are* -> *were*
"Like I said Hailey...I already have all he answers. You're just playing into my hands. It'll make more sense once we start. Are we all ready?"
*he* -> *the*
"Alright then, I'm going to ask you for your preference between two things. Choose which you prefer. If you don't like either, you'll still prefer one than the other."
*one than* -> *one more than* / *one over*
"That's right. You can chance to squeezing your nipples until the next question you get right. It's fitting."
[Smacking Balls]
*chance* -> *change*
*Smacking Balls* -> *Squeezing Nipples*
"I thought about a question you asked me with the pineapples, but hearing that...I think it's three for three."
- I think there should have been a pause on this paragraph.
"Hailey agrees. She made that one, so I wonder is she's bias? Hurt those balls."
*is she's bias* -> *if she's biased*
"Nintendo or Sega?"
[Nintendo] [Cider]
*Cider* -> *Sega*
"Hey there Slave- oh wait, it's back to Slave now isn't it! Hehe. Well, as much as I would like to sit and cuddle while we caught up on Kaguya...I kinda gave the game away already, didn't I? First let's get you unlocked!"
- I had to look up 'Kaguya', and I'm still not sure what's going on!
"There you go! I bet you didn't think about what you'd be doing at alll did you? Well, I want you to be able ti see two screens...Firstly find a nice long porn video thats about an hour."
*ti* -> *to*
*thats* -> *that's*
- This seems a bit out of context with the previous request to find some non-porn. I wonder if this instruction would be better in the 6pm session, i.e. to find one porn and one non-porn video that can be viewed simultaneously on two different screens.
"But while I do want to watch you...I'm not in the mood to do just that. So I want to see what you've got for us to watch! What did you pick?"
- Does this question reger to the non-porn video or the porn one? It's not quite clear what's happening with the non-porn that was supposed to be chosen during the 6pm break to be ready for 7pm.
"That might distract you sufficiently, hehe. Alright, opening credits are over, lets watch! Just let me know if we need to pause to lock you back up."
*lets* -> *let's*
"I'm going to get a drink. We can start our activity for 8pm once my throat is quenched as I need to talk a lot for it, hehe. Let me know when you're ready!"
[Hour End]
*Hour End* -> *Continue*
"You know I like making games out of your chastity. Remember when I made that tease on Milovana? It was fun but a lot of work! Well, rather than having to program all that, I had a similar idea we can do just me and you!"
*do just* -> *do, just* / *do with just*
"But there's A FEW little differences beyond just me reading it out to you. "
*there's* -> *there are*
"Firstly, there's some gaps you need to fill in to change the story! I'll give you a gap and you'll be able to fill it in."
*there's* -> *there are*
"The second is that it's a little interactive. If anything happens to the character in the stories cock and balls, you do it to your own! That includes unlocking, locking, hurting, stroking...but nowhere else on your body is affected, ok!"
*character in the stories cock and balls* -> *character's cock and balls in the story*
""I know your demonic tongue can sow disaster byitself! But I have come to...negotiate. So we need it for now. Meet my terms, and you might just avail yourself of boredom for a while!""
*byitself* -> *by itself*
""Both sides have inflicted numerous losses, but we finally have you. But if we keep you here, eventually you'll just get replaced. So...we need to mark an alliance between our two kingdoms to lead to lasting peace.""
*inflicted* -> *incurred*
""Wha-? _________""
[...Yes, if it brings out kingdom to peace.]
*out kingdom* -> *our kingdoms*
""I see. Well, you best show me what I'd be pleasuring myself with every night, Princess.""
*you best* -> *you'd best* / *you'd better*
"As the cage unlocked, the demon kings dick exploded to several times the length of the cage. , The wand was removed and stopped vibrating."
*kings* -> *king's*
*cage. , The* -> *cage. The*
""I am Princess, but before long I will be queen. I have not been trained, nor do I need it. Manipulating men and demon alike is a small task for me.""
*am Princess* -> *am a Princess*
*queen* -> *Queen*
""So, let us not forget while your here. You will be expected to cede to our demands for this.""
*while your* -> *why you're*
""And I'm certain some would find that itself a very enticing offer.""
*that itself a* -> *that, in itself, a* / *that, by itself, a*
""Hey, let's not get too far ahead of ourselves! I'll need your seal before I agree to that." But to help you get there quicker..."
*that." But* -> *that. But* (misplaced quotation)
*quicker...* -> *quicker..."*
- I really enjoyed the story, very nicely put together!
- I wonder if the words spoken by the Princess could be in a different colour to the narration?
"End of the 8pm Session. Come back to the tease at 9pm for your next session, or click below when ready."
"You will need a vibrator and a dildo depending on your choices in the next hour."
- I don't think you need either a vibrator or dildo at 9pm unless I missed a choice somewhere?
"Because we are going to indulge a rare little kink of mine... time wasting."
- There's a blank line after this text.
"Get on your knees before me. Naked for all but that cute little cage."
- There's a blank line after this text.
"Anytime a button isn't on screen, you'll have an order to follow. It will be either a Mantra, or an Order."
*order* -> *action*
"And you better pay attention, because if you miss even one...there will be consequences beyond today."
*you better* -> *you'd better*
"For an order, repeat that order until you receive a new mantra or order."
*an order* -> *an Order*
"Order: Squeeze your cage."
- Does this work? Just curious!
"Order: Stand on one leg."
[Press Me]
- On pressing the button. a second timer appeared for the remaining time within the thirty seconds.
- The button commands appear to be blank (in the EOS script)
"Order: Slap your face once every 5 seconds."
[Press Me]
- On pressing the button. a second timer appeared for the remaining time within the thirty seconds.
- The button commands appear to be blank (in the EOS script)
"Well...I said relax, but we still have a lot to do before midnight, you know! And I want to look back a little. On our time together. All that we've achieved!"
*little. On* -> *little on*
"Put a clamp on each nipple and then give them a nice little tug!"
"Does it feel like it's loosening up? I hope so!"
- The second line seems out of context with the previous one.
"Your little reward hehe...now look around you. I want you to see if you can attach the chains on those clamps to something - like the end of your bed, a coathanger on the wall..."
*chains* -> *chain*
"And just like that...you can be the Slave you're always meant to be."
*you're* -> *you were*
"Now push that plug as far as it can go and just leave it a moment..."
*plug as* -> *plun in as*
"NaN edges in just one day, not to mention all the teasing in that cage...you must be dying for that orgasm by now!"
- Not sure why the '<eval>userEdge</eval>' returns not-a-number, but this might only affect me. It looks like the init section should load it from the 'edge' storage. I'm assuming that if it's not in storage, it would return either null or '', in which case I wonder what JavaScript's evaluation of userEdge++ would be?! If it doesn't seem to affect anyone else, it's probably nothing to worry about.
"So if you can't take any more teasing and want to ruin it...just let me know, hehe! I'll be glad to help that...with a bit of teasing, maybe!"
*help that* -> *help with that* / *help out*
"Have you ever ruined it with a vibrator, Slave? Are you about to have your first? Because you clearly don't have a choice if it makes you go over that edge that right now..."
"I want you to keep both your hands on the same rhythm. You fuck your ass at the same pace you hold that edge."
*pace you* -> *pace that you* / *pace as you*
"And then, of course, right after you clean up...you'll lock back up."
*lock back* -> *lock yourself back*
"You got zero points!! I didn't want to let it get in the way but I was a bit miffed at the end...don't even mention your cock to me for another week, and don't think about unlocking yourself because you deserve it!"
*you deserve* -> *you don't deserve*
- I don't know quite how I got zero points. I notice that userPressScore is only incremented with the 'Press Me' button on page 2100-13. All of the other 'Press Me' buttons don't have any commands associated with them as I mentioned before.
"In addition, any feedback via reddit, Milovana PM, or on the Milovana thread are highly appreciated - especially if you encountered any bugs, but positive feedback is essential for me to see the time I put in as justified - and negative feedback is key to improving. The feedback thread is at:
https://milovana.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=25114"
FrozenWolf wrote: ↑Tue Oct 18, 2022 5:02 pm
ALL THE HOURS
[/spoiler]
I've gone through all of these now, actioned about 75%, some I changed in a different way or not at all depending. I do appreciate the thorough detail though, thank you! It does take me out of it when I play tease, but my own proof reading can never catch all of this - I find some, but not all.
I always struggle when deviating from teasing plot...It worked enough in context but letting these non-tease bits spill out is fun when I can
'"Order: Squeeze your cage."
- Does this work? Just curious!' Depends on the cage
modnar wrote: ↑Wed Oct 19, 2022 4:06 pm
Just wondering if we could have a reset button, or reset code for the tease please.
"Order: Stand on one leg."
[Press Me]
- On pressing the button. a second timer appeared for the remaining time within the thirty seconds.
- The button commands appear to be blank (in the EOS script)
Dammit so this is why they didn't work, ok im just killing them
Added, should pop up when you next load the tease, if not use the code
"Now push that plug as far as it can go and just leave it a moment..."
*plug as* -> *plun in as*
Wooo we both make typos
"NaN edges in just one day, not to mention all the teasing in that cage...you must be dying for that orgasm by now!"
- Not sure why the '<eval>userEdge</eval>' returns not-a-number, but this might only affect me. It looks like the init section should load it from the 'edge' storage. I'm assuming that if it's not in storage, it would return either null or '', in which case I wonder what JavaScript's evaluation of userEdge++ would be?! If it doesn't seem to affect anyone else, it's probably nothing to worry about.
NaN pops up randomly when things shouldn't and I'll never know why. Sadly I just accept it as an eos quirk combined with my programming knowledge being mostly via this GUI
It's great to be able to able to dip in and out with the hourly codes. I know it's not really meant to be played like that, but it works for me rather well.
I used to write my teases more prescriptively, but now I just kinda write them with how I'd play them personally, but give options for anyone different, so thats fine. That's why my teases over multiple days now have a 'click to continue' button, despite people rarely going to leave their browser open a day! Whatever works for you is best. (I still need to learn some from this, e.g. 9pm!)
- I really enjoyed the story, very nicely put together!
I really enjoyed writing this as well, I'm tempted to try and flesh out the concept a bit more but I'm not sure if it's possible
I think overall you may be able to tell I may have skipped the lesson on how to use ' properly and now my heuristics are doomed!
Thanks very much for the help :)
modnar wrote: ↑Wed Oct 19, 2022 4:06 pm
Just wondering if we could have a reset button, or reset code for the tease please.
I've added this - should pop up automatically, but if not use code
Shattered wrote: ↑Wed Oct 19, 2022 5:57 pm
I've gone through all of these now, actioned about 75%, some I changed in a different way or not at all depending. I do appreciate the thorough detail though, thank you! It does take me out of it when I play tease, but my own proof reading can never catch all of this - I find some, but not all.
Woohoo, and about 50% more than I'd expected! I'm generally terrible at reviewing my own work; it's definitely much harder
Shattered wrote: ↑Wed Oct 19, 2022 5:57 pm
Wooo we both make typos
I guess we're all susceptible!
Shattered wrote: ↑Wed Oct 19, 2022 5:57 pm
I really enjoyed writing this as well, I'm tempted to try and flesh out the concept a bit more but I'm not sure if it's possible
I'm looking forward to a sequel!
I wish I had more time to read through some of the other teases, both of yours and other authors. There are some fantastic ideas and great writing, and it's clear that a huge amount of work goes into creating them.
I had to use code "resettease" then got the button. Pushed button, then went to start tease and it continued from the last point.
Refreshed page, still at the last point.
I had to use the code, click button, refresh page, then all was reset.
The part where it asks you to tie up with the rope cuff I find ever so slightly confusing.
1) What sitting position, considering it says later if you stretch your legs it'll tug on the clamps. That makes me feel like it should be crossed legs?
2) I assume based on the first instruction, it's one rope tie per foot, rather than one cuff tie connecting both feet together, but then with seeing about #1 it sounds like it should be one cuff tie connecting the feet together.
3) Which confuses me more is the part which says "then put your left hand in the handcuff attached to your right leg, and your left hand to the left"
3) Which confuses me more is the part which says "then put your left hand in the handcuff attached to your right leg, and your left hand to the left"
I'll take the blame for #3! I made a suggestion for a change in the wording here viewtopic.php?p=335688#p335688, and my suggestion had a typo; it should of course be "and your right hand to the left".
I don't see a way to start over from the beginning. My only option is to "Continue tease."
I clicked through a few of the beginning screens to try to remember if this is one I've played before. It is and it is the one I was looking for! ... but now I want to actually start at the beginning. Any advice?
Burner382 wrote: ↑Tue Jun 11, 2024 6:41 pm
I don't see a way to start over from the beginning. My only option is to "Continue tease."
I clicked through a few of the beginning screens to try to remember if this is one I've played before. It is and it is the one I was looking for! ... but now I want to actually start at the beginning. Any advice?
MiloDB: Finding Old Teases
I guess we're all susceptible! 
