Another tease - feedback please

[submatt]

My third tease, Paying the Price, is up. What do you think?

[johnno240]

I thought that it was quite good. Definately the best so far.

I guess some constructive criticism, from a personal point of view, i would like to see the tease maybe a bit longer, and maybe be a bit more descriptive in the text, just to add to the fantasy. Also, a personal taste of mine is not to count my strokes as such, maybe just stroke for a certain amount of time.

Great work though!

[spiff]

This is clearly the best tease you have made so far (at least if you ask me ).

I found the tease to be a little bit on the short side. The tease was comming along fine, and then all of a sudden it was over

But keep the teases comming and if you would consider making the next one a little bit longer, that would just be very great

[dark]

To say it like seraph0x: Longer is better

I agree with the posts above me. Your best tease

[gimpnipples]

I recently did this tease... The bit about the ice cubes... My ice cubes are those ones you have to fill a bag with water and freeze it. The icecubes are really big and sharp edged and you get a LOAD of them in a bag... So i was doing ok till it said to put the whole tray up my arse. I got about 5 away from the end and nearly vomited from the pain! Never had my limits tested like that ha ha! Thanks submatt. Also i only managed about 5 jumping jacks then i almost passed out. Thought i would share that :)

[dark]

I recently did this tease... The bit about the ice cubes... My ice cubes are those ones you have to fill a bag with water and freeze it. The icecubes are really big and sharp edged and you get a LOAD of them in a bag... So i was doing ok till it said to put the whole tray up my arse. I got about 5 away from the end and nearly vomited from the pain! Never had my limits tested like that ha ha! Thanks submatt. Also i only managed about 5 jumping jacks then i almost passed out. Thought i would share that :)

Damn that sounds painful