FB: Your Investigation Begins

[grendal]

I kinda think crystal or hanna at the moment (or crystal AND hanna)

Also thank you for the story/tease and i don't usually say something this rude but....

Continue it NOW.

Disclaimer: I thank you for what you have done and imply no requirement by you to do anything I say especially if i am being rude (which i am). this is really an act of desperation and appreciation for you work which i feel is top notch. and of course I understand that real life comes first before anything else really.

that being said CAN'T wait

Disclaimer:actually i can wait take your time and thanks

[cactusman]

I kinda think crystal or hanna at the moment (or crystal AND hanna)

Also thank you for the story/tease and i don't usually say something this rude but....

Continue it NOW.

Disclaimer: I thank you for what you have done and imply no requirement by you to do anything I say especially if i am being rude (which i am). this is really an act of desperation and appreciation for you work which i feel is top notch. and of course I understand that real life comes first before anything else really.

that being said CAN'T wait

Disclaimer:actually i can wait take your time and thanks

Thanks for your guess about who did it, which is interesting to me.

I have been working on it, and plan to have the conclusion ready in a week or two. It's pretty long, so it will take some time to get up to my usual standard. But I'm glad you are looking forward to it.

[cactusman]

The third and final part of my "Your Investigation" series

"Your Investigation Concludes": http://www.milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=9116

is now published. Feedback is welcome. Enjoy!

[Bindo]

The final part of the Investigation was absolutely fantastic. I really, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, not just as a webtease but as a story. I think you did brilliantly on both counts.

I knew it was her! Well, sort of. I was hoping it would be her.

The ending seemed a bit abrupt, but that's the only criticism I have. What a lot of fun this series was to read. Thanks for writing.

[cactusman]

The final part of the Investigation was absolutely fantastic. I really, thoroughly enjoyed reading it, not just as a webtease but as a story. I think you did brilliantly on both counts.

I knew it was her! Well, sort of. I was hoping it would be her.

The ending seemed a bit abrupt, but that's the only criticism I have. What a lot of fun this series was to read. Thanks for writing.

Well thank you very much.

I agree it ends rather quickly, but it was already going on for a long time, and so perhaps I didn't draw out the final encounters as much as some of the earlier ones.

[pbchillin]

I agree with what Bindo says, however it is still a fabulous tease, you're a great asset to this site cactusman, the fact your teases all have such amazing ratings is a testament to that.

[cactusman]

I agree with what Bindo says, however it is still a fabulous tease, you're a great asset to this site cactusman, the fact your teases all have such amazing ratings is a testament to that.

Thanks very much. I appreciate it.

Of course, some of the ratings of my older teases were artificially inflated by my cheating, in former times. I do agree with Indy who said it would feel better to come across the ratings naturally and honestly, and it does.