The tournament - introduction

[buckeye10smith]

Hey everybody, The Tournament was my first tease and I feel I can do a lot better on the sequel, but I'm not sure how to go about it. I have a basic idea of what I want to do but I feel the little things are really important, so any suggestions or critiques are more than welcome. Please be as honest as possible, don't sugarcoat it.

[stormeagle]

Looks like a good start!

Unfortunately, they've removed the first video you link to - any chance you could fix that?

[buckeye10smith]

I just fixed it, thanks

[ordered]

OMG!! Kate is SO hot! And you found pics of her... well, wearing... the same cute little purple nightie I've been eyeing to buy so I can wear it for my boyfriend!

But now I'm embarassed, I'm not as pretty as Kate, but I still want a cute little purple nightie to wear for my b/f, now I have to find a different one.

Otherwise a great tease, but I've got to give it a thumbs-down, because you randomly got pics of the most gorgeous woman while she was wearing my clothes!

[subboytom]

I thought the first was a damn fantastic tease. Beautifully written, with depth and characterization, not to mention lots of stunning women.

[state of denial]

Great tease!!!

Looking forward to the follow ups!

[simpleman_17]

I went through this tease and found it to be a great blend of challenge and pleasure. I think it is one of the best beginnings to a series that i have come across. I enjoy teases with dildos and this has a great work up to this then finally ends in denial!!!! PERFECT! Well just wanted you to hear good feed back and give credit where due ya know.

[pin-dicked sissy]

Just letting you know, the first video link is broken again as Yahoo has removed the video