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Playful And Cruel
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Playful And Cruel
Last edited by green on Wed Sep 23, 2009 2:39 pm, edited 1 time in total.
You can own the earth and still - All you'll own is earth until
You can paint with all the colors of the wind
You can paint with all the colors of the wind
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Re: Playful And Cruel
I thought it was a good effort. I liked the choice at the beginning, and any tease with Liz is a winner for me. That series is one of my favorites!
However, it was too short! I would have liked to have seen the die roll sequence played out longer, it ended too abruptly.
Overall, a good job!
However, it was too short! I would have liked to have seen the die roll sequence played out longer, it ended too abruptly.
Overall, a good job!
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Re: Playful And Cruel
Thanks tallguy.
I'll keep your Feedback in mind when writing another tease. Longering the Dice Procedure is actually an awesome Idea! =). Anyways it was just a kind of practice tease for me, to learn using the editor and such.
Already got another Idea, but cant find suitable Images. :(
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I'll keep your Feedback in mind when writing another tease. Longering the Dice Procedure is actually an awesome Idea! =). Anyways it was just a kind of practice tease for me, to learn using the editor and such.
Already got another Idea, but cant find suitable Images. :(
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You can own the earth and still - All you'll own is earth until
You can paint with all the colors of the wind
You can paint with all the colors of the wind
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Re: Playful And Cruel
Loved the choice at the beginning. Havent gone through the whole thing yet.
I usually don't like ice cubes, but I can always skip that.
Good writing, Good pictures. Please keep it up!
I wish you could hover the buttons and see what the next page of the tease says.
Sometimes I want to click the wrong button to see if I get punished, and instead it ends the tease.
I usually don't like ice cubes, but I can always skip that.
Good writing, Good pictures. Please keep it up!
I wish you could hover the buttons and see what the next page of the tease says.
Sometimes I want to click the wrong button to see if I get punished, and instead it ends the tease.
Re: Playful And Cruel
Nice tease, the choice at the beginning was very original, i liked that very much, hope to see more
Cheers
Cheers
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Re: Playful And Cruel
Thanks.
I've got Ideas for new teases, but can't seem to find suitable images ;/.
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I've got Ideas for new teases, but can't seem to find suitable images ;/.
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You can own the earth and still - All you'll own is earth until
You can paint with all the colors of the wind
You can paint with all the colors of the wind
Re: Playful And Cruel
Nice tease! However, the words on the successful dice rolls (4-5) seems to be cut off for me? Anyone else or a browser prob? I think it was cut off at around throw your legs over your shoulder so that...
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