MGC Part 2 Feedback

Mz_Teneale · Post by **Mz_Teneale** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:33 am

Hey guys

Let me know what ya think. I hope it lived up to all the expectations!

pleezz · Post by **pleezz** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:38 am

finally!
thank you Mz_Teneale
im doing the tease now

pleezz · Post by **pleezz** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 6:53 am

i guess i was n am too horny

the first girl is so hot( n mean)
i just thought the tease can be a little longer, so i can stroke more.....
anyways....we needa wait again

*Sighs* I wish i had a real man here to fuck me. A big, strong man with long blonde hair like the character in my book. Someone with a cock bigger than 5 inches.

so u want a boyfriend like that, rite?

hornyslave · Post by **hornyslave** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:39 am

Mz_Teneale,

i absolutly loved the tease, all the girls where so hot( or is this just because of the denial that everything starts to get very hot).
i liked the good mix of pain, humiliation and stroking.
i should haven know that no cumming would be allowed yet, but things will get harder now.blue ,crushed balls and still no stroking.guess this is what we wanted and wherefor we love your teases.

thanks for another great one

subglyn · Post by **subglyn** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:48 am

I"enjoyed" it.
Very painful for me as I haven't done much cbt before and this was way more then I'd ever sone - Balls still stinging. I wanted to cum sooo bad but managed to hold myself off. From all the cbt at times it seemed like I wouldn't be able to get hard again, But soon enough I was hard and from there in less then a minute of stroking I was at the edge

*Spoilers*
You'll figure out what happens in the tease from my description.

Had been up for almost 40 hours as I was to horny to sleep last night and was going to go to bed but checked the computer first and saw the tease.
Here what happened:
Did what was the fasted shaved cock and balls of all time I think, got the panties ready and on and then the squeezing which was bad and made my tummy hurt but was tolerable.Tied up my balls andattached the weights tied. The jumps actually hurt less then I thought they would. Then it was the ruler, the edge was so painful, words can't even describe it. I still said thanks!

I'd liked the second mistress it felt so good to touch again. Better then stroking had ever felt. Barely made it though the minute or two of stroking assigned. And the edges felt awesome but holding back was killer.
With the icy hot(bengay for me) I made an error and forgot to to turn on the timer so spanked for what I'd guess was just over a minute and then turned the timer on.The stinging seemed to go away faster then I thought but I think I just couldn't feel it betwen the ruler and the pain on my cock head and it returned a bit later when the other pains died down.
By cock and balls were so sore that at first I had little reaction to stroking, it felt good but not much else. But pretty soon I was hard and got to the edge pretty fast. The next edge I think took 15 second to get to!

Felt really really good to stroke again, At first the brushing was too much pain but after a while it started to feel good and bad at the same time, guess I'm just horny and starved for attention.
As I write this my dick ishalf erect and trying to escape my panties. I'm sure that once the soreness is all gone I'll be stuck with a big hardon.

A question about the never remove your panties without permission does that also mean you want us wearing them between teases as we didn't get permission to remove or am I reading into this too much?

Otherwise overall what I have to say about the tease is all the women were sexy, writing was good. I have two complaints, besides from the pain and no cumming!

A minor one is the dice rollor didn't work for me as I lacked a plug-in but a quick google search found what I needed. Maybe use one that doesn't need a plug-in next time. The bigger concern is the small penis humilation aspect. I understand this is popular so I can see why you put it in and it is so common in other teases. But since I'm large in that area having women wish for a dick longer then 5 inches, or writing pin dicked sissy on my panties doesn't really do it for me. I'm guessing others feel the same. But it's your tease so whatever you like best is fine. Thank You for the tease.

Any chance on finding out when the next part is coming? How many parts are planed? Or are we still on a need to know basis?

I hope you enjoyed my description Mz_Teneale! Thanks again

subglyn · Post by **subglyn** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:01 am

I wanted to add the tease was great not just because of the content also the build up you made for it was great. The teasing comments on the forum, making people submit applications, and promise to follow instructions. I'm sure if I hadn't argeed to follow the instructions I would have cum and skipped some of the cbt. I've only been hornier then this once in my life,(My ex teasing me with a pair of panties she had played with herself in, but that's another story). I want to cum so bad right now!

Mz_Teneale · Post by **Mz_Teneale** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:05 am

Thanks for the feedback so far guys!

I love getting feedback - It helps me to create better teases. In that respect i like negative feedback more because it tells me where i fall short. Here are my arguments to the little bit of negative feedback.

Pleez - The tease was 19 pages. Which is as long as i have ever done. Its also longer than alot of the stuff out there. Unless of course you mean that the actual stroking was short? Well i did that because i knew all you guys would want to do that. So i tried to deny you that a bit. Also, i didnt want any accidents so i thought the less stroking, the less chance you would have an accident.

Subglyn - Thanks for the detail... It made me laugh and its a nice thought. I didnt know the dice needed a plug in. It was just what we had in the links page so i used it. Maybe you could send the link you used to me in a pm and i will add it to the links page. Also with the small penis humiliation. I think i asked what guys want in a tease a while ago in another forum. Its hard to keep everyone happy as you can imagine and i was merely pleasing the bulk of them. Maybe in my next series of teases i will write a tease for the bigger than average male.

As far as the pink panties are concerned. You have to wear them every day. Of course, if you do not feel comfortable wearing them to work, thats fine and i understand. But everyone has to wear them while at home.

There is only going to be part 3 of this series, in that one it will decide whether or not you get to cum. Unless people really enjoy this tease series and want to see more of it, possibly even from different authors *looks at Jenna*, then part 3 will be the end. But it wont be my last tease so dont get worried. Part 3 has an expected release date of the 20th of June................. In 2009

I loved the build up too. Alot of you guys joined in which made it lotsa fun for me. It just got insanely fun when Phoxy and Jenna were starting to join in. Im glad you liked the interactivity. I will possibly do something like that in the future too, and hopefully others will also. Although, i think i would do something completely different.

By the way. I really liked the first girl too. Im not what you would call bi but i can definately appreciate the female form. And damn what a form. She was actually the one who inspired me to create a tease again, she just looks really sexy in glasses and that fishnet outfit.

nomeuno · Post by **nomeuno** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 10:27 am

Thank You MZ. Teneale. i would give this whole set a ten if it allowed us to score that high. i'm gratreful.

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:22 am

going to do it in a mo, yay! lol.

glad i missed the little brawl between u and seraph0x, i think i might have been on his side simply cause his our all powerful leader and i think he made the right decision he is after all a busy bee who needs release

now please don't hurt me for saying that Ms Teneale $:\'-($

pin-dicked sissy · Post by **pin-dicked sissy** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 11:42 am

Firstly, i had a quick browse thru the first part of the tease cos i was at work this afternoon and obviously couldn't do it then. i will leave the rest of it till i can do it in full, tho the shaving bit could make things a bit of a challange (but it will be done as promised).

Mz_Teneale wrote:By the way. I really liked the first girl too. Im not what you would call bi but i can definately appreciate the female form. And damn what a form. She was actually the one who inspired me to create a tease again, she just looks really sexy in glasses and that fishnet outfit.

I first recognised this chick in another tease here Cucky's treat and thought she was great (and so was that tease!). this set of her is the best i have seen and just added to the first part of the tease IMHO.

Great work Mz_Teneale and now eagerly await MGC Part 3 with increasingly sore (pea)nuts and an eternal semi.

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:01 pm

you used the bird that i was going to use for one of my new teases....

my balls itch now, it was good, worth the wait

subglyn · Post by **subglyn** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 12:59 pm

Mz_Teneale wrote:Subglyn - Thanks for the detail... It made me laugh and its a nice thought. I didnt know the dice needed a plug in. It was just what we had in the links page so i used it. Maybe you could send the link you used to me in a pm and i will add it to the links page. Also with the small penis humiliation. I think i asked what guys want in a tease a while ago in another forum. Its hard to keep everyone happy as you can imagine and i was merely pleasing the bulk of them. Maybe in my next series of teases i will write a tease for the bigger than average male.

As far as the pink panties are concerned. You have to wear them every day. Of course, if you do not feel comfortable wearing them to work, thats fine and i understand. But everyone has to wear them while at home.

I'd love a tease for bigger guys! You can always humilate in different ways, like making fun of how long they last, or skill level, etc.
I'll be sure to wear the panties at home and elsewhere when possible.

Mz_Teneale wrote: There is only going to be part 3 of this series, in that one it will decide whether or not you get to cum. Unless people really enjoy this tease series and want to see more of it, possibly even from different authors *looks at Jenna*, then part 3 will be the end. But it wont be my last tease so dont get worried. Part 3 has an expected release date of the 20th of June................. In 2009

2009!

That's just mean

pin-dicked sissy · Post by **pin-dicked sissy** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 3:59 pm

So, i just finished MGC Part 2 and right off the bat i have to say, fantastic work Mz_Teneale!!! both loved & hated it (in that good way tho

).

there are a few things i'm going to im you Mz_Teneale but overall, i loved the pacing of the tease, i was never allowed to really build up a dying need to cum, what with the world of hurt my balls were in!! i think they are still going to be feeling that well in to tomorrow and then they'll probably have to go thru something similar with part 3. oh the agony and ecstacy of it all....

whacker44 · Post by **whacker44** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:56 pm

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

alpahde5 · Post by **alpahde5** » Tue Jun 19, 2007 5:57 pm

just kidding... although that post makes no sense and isn't in context with anything.