[RELEASE] [FEEDBACK] The Allure Asylum

[witness1]

I considered adding the skip function!! And who knows, perhaps more rooms will be added?

What makes it so good, I think, is player choice. I can get through fast, if I want to, by just playing the neccessary stuff. I also can take my time, visit multiple times, get the secrets etc. Mazes usually have dead ends that feel unfair, and the mapmaking gets in the way. Leaving denial to a random chance has its allure, too, but only if you have the time and stamina to put double or more effort in, or makes the experience abruptly too short. The Asylum doesn't do that.
Definitely looking forward to the expansion, if you really add more rooms! (Suggestions in the spoilers if you want them)

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Maybe an expanded Blackmail-threat, an actual therapist-themed room, or a room with benefits if you fail it? A room you need to enter twice to be awarded somehow. And I really enjoyed the secret-hunting. Like I imagined with the timekeeper, that if you press the "edge" button in a certain time frame, there would be a different outcome. That would need a hint of some sort though. Playing into the insanity-aspect more. "You exit the Asylum, but nausea overwhelms you." The Patient hallucinates a new scene and wakes up in one of the rooms, because he isn't "healed" yet and forces himself subcontiously to stay - obviously with a hint to why that happened. Electric shock therapy room, art therapy room (hentai of course :P). The theme allows so much it is amazing.

Just to be sure: None of this is negative criticism, just wishful thinking. I hope that comes across.

How is your stance on borrowing (=stealing) your tease as a frame work for my own attempt on making a similar tease myself?

[UninvitedGeist]

I considered adding the skip function!! And who knows, perhaps more rooms will be added?

What makes it so good, I think, is player choice. I can get through fast, if I want to, by just playing the neccessary stuff. I also can take my time, visit multiple times, get the secrets etc. Mazes usually have dead ends that feel unfair, and the mapmaking gets in the way. Leaving denial to a random chance has its allure, too, but only if you have the time and stamina to put double or more effort in, or makes the experience abruptly too short. The Asylum doesn't do that.
Definitely looking forward to the expansion, if you really add more rooms! (Suggestions in the spoilers if you want them)

Spoiler: show

Maybe an expanded Blackmail-threat, an actual therapist-themed room, or a room with benefits if you fail it? A room you need to enter twice to be awarded somehow. And I really enjoyed the secret-hunting. Like I imagined with the timekeeper, that if you press the "edge" button in a certain time frame, there would be a different outcome. That would need a hint of some sort though. Playing into the insanity-aspect more. "You exit the Asylum, but nausea overwhelms you." The Patient hallucinates a new scene and wakes up in one of the rooms, because he isn't "healed" yet and forces himself subcontiously to stay - obviously with a hint to why that happened. Electric shock therapy room, art therapy room (hentai of course :P). The theme allows so much it is amazing.

Just to be sure: None of this is negative criticism, just wishful thinking. I hope that comes across.

How is your stance on borrowing (=stealing) your tease as a frame work for my own attempt on making a similar tease myself?

As they say, good artists borrow, great artists steal! I’d be honored to have my work be a framework! Means I did something right! Just give me a heads up once it’s out so i can check it out!!

[witness1]

As they say, good artists borrow, great artists steal! I’d be honored to have my work be a framework! Means I did something right! Just give me a heads up once it’s out so i can check it out!!

So I might have been

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EATEN BY A SUCCUBUS TODAY

but otherwise I'm fine. Thank you for the permission. I will find time to try out some teasemaking myself someday soon!

[UninvitedGeist]

As they say, good artists borrow, great artists steal! I’d be honored to have my work be a framework! Means I did something right! Just give me a heads up once it’s out so i can check it out!!

So I might have been

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EATEN BY A SUCCUBUS TODAY

but otherwise I'm fine. Thank you for the permission. I will find time to try out some teasemaking myself someday soon!

Best of luck!!! It’s quite time consuming, so I won’t be making a new one for a while.

[witness1]

Best of luck!!! It’s quite time consuming, so I won’t be making a new one for a while.

Looking through the files and programming in the EOS editor right now. For the first time, I realize how much work that has had to be. I even found some relics from obvious early ideas (like the demon book) that were scrapped and I am just fascinated. I underestimated the dedication people like you put into our entertainment. Absolute appreciation and respect! To you and everyone else who put these together. Thank you for your time. You are a very welcome INVITED Geist.



I will work on my version of the Asylum. See you next YEAR...

[UninvitedGeist]

Best of luck!!! It’s quite time consuming, so I won’t be making a new one for a while.

Looking through the files and programming in the EOS editor right now. For the first time, I realize how much work that has had to be. I even found some relics from obvious early ideas (like the demon book) that were scrapped and I am just fascinated. I underestimated the dedication people like you put into our entertainment. Absolute appreciation and respect! To you and everyone else who put these together. Thank you for your time. You are a very welcome INVITED Geist.



I will work on my version of the Asylum. See you next YEAR...

Oh wait, you can go into my files and such? I had no idea!! And yeah I had an idea that I might use in the future… just want to find a sweet spot of how I want to incorporate it.

[witness1]

Oh wait, you can go into my files and such? I had no idea!! And yeah I had an idea that I might use in the future… just want to find a sweet spot of how I want to incorporate it.

You can (by searching the forums) cheat the URL into giving you the complete scripts, galleries, etc. Very easy actually. I have tinkered around for solid 4 hours, and now I can implement if/else decisions, define and call variables, split off paths and change the narrative. Maybe it will be ready faster than 2026.
Still, mad props for building this from scratch. Awesome work!
As of now, I have implemented an in-world skip function ("I was here before"), expanded the CheckIn-questionaire and defined a way to decide, if the "new wing" exists after renovations since the player's first visit. It is kind of fun! This will occupy me for the foreseeable future.

PS: I chose the nurse in my last run. Support your HMS-workers!

[andreas261]

This was one of the best teases I've played thanks alot. I think I have to play it again soon. I defeated the succubus and got the gift. Should you take the gift to some girl in a room or..? I just left, said an edging goodbyes to all the girls and the warden stopped the cum countdown in the middle I was so freaking horny I almost cried haha. Was this one of the "bad" endings? At what point can you give the gift to someone?
I really really liked the girls. At the start where you obviously choose ass or tits, does it change anything in the game? I chose tits and that I would give my whole salary to see her boobs and kinda expected a boobapalooza not like huge tits on everyone etc. but just a focus on tits, close ups and so on. That would have made the game a lot harder for me.
But great work and everyone has their own kinks and you do your stuff. Don't go changing anything if you don't like it

[janhuubdikstaal]

This looks really promising! I'm planning on playing it this weekend.
Is there a ruined orgasm ending? I know I'm asking for a spoiler, but if there is one, I need to keep playing the tease until I get it.

[UninvitedGeist]

This looks really promising! I'm planning on playing it this weekend.
Is there a ruined orgasm ending? I know I'm asking for a spoiler, but if there is one, I need to keep playing the tease until I get it.

So about that kind of ending,

Spoiler: show

I hate to break it to you, but not at the moment no, however rooms are currently being worked on and added soon.

[UninvitedGeist]

This was one of the best teases I've played thanks alot. I think I have to play it again soon. I defeated the succubus and got the gift. Should you take the gift to some girl in a room or..? I just left, said an edging goodbyes to all the girls and the warden stopped the cum countdown in the middle I was so freaking horny I almost cried haha. Was this one of the "bad" endings? At what point can you give the gift to someone?
I really really liked the girls. At the start where you obviously choose ass or tits, does it change anything in the game? I chose tits and that I would give my whole salary to see her boobs and kinda expected a boobapalooza not like huge tits on everyone etc. but just a focus on tits, close ups and so on. That would have made the game a lot harder for me.
But great work and everyone has their own kinks and you do your stuff. Don't go changing anything if you don't like it

That’s a secret! And to give a gift, you must’ve already finished a girls room. Then they might want to see you again.

[witness1]

Hi again.
I might have obsessed over the EOS-Editor the last few days and might have my Asylum version "ready" (meaning, I don't know if there still are soft locks in there, I found one so far).
Thank you again for letting me rework your tease. I learned enough to make the next one on my own in just a few days.
You can expect me to publish it this week. I am still holding off, because I fear the reception. Typical creator anxiety, I think. Nonetheless, it would be an honor to hear feedback from you as the originator.

It was a lot of hours! I still think, you and the other creators on here are amazing storytellers and even coders, gifting us horny folk their dedication and time. Thank you a lot, again.

For everyone here: My version will be an actual Asylum, with doctors, therapists and inmates. Some new and all reworked rooms, small extension of the questionaire, implemented small changes based on the questionaire, and many, MANY dumb mistakes still to iron out. If you liked the Asylum, please try my version too, I do need the feedback, as soon as it is out.

[UninvitedGeist]

Hi again.
I might have obsessed over the EOS-Editor the last few days and might have my Asylum version "ready" (meaning, I don't know if there still are soft locks in there, I found one so far).
Thank you again for letting me rework your tease. I learned enough to make the next one on my own in just a few days.
You can expect me to publish it this week. I am still holding off, because I fear the reception. Typical creator anxiety, I think. Nonetheless, it would be an honor to hear feedback from you as the originator.

It was a lot of hours! I still think, you and the other creators on here are amazing storytellers and even coders, gifting us horny folk their dedication and time. Thank you a lot, again.

For everyone here: My version will be an actual Asylum, with doctors, therapists and inmates. Some new and all reworked rooms, small extension of the questionaire, implemented small changes based on the questionaire, and many, MANY dumb mistakes still to iron out. If you liked the Asylum, please try my version too, I do need the feedback, as soon as it is out.

Hey, no matter what, the only opinion that matters is your own. Are you proud of what you did? Then critics be damned; but always be open to constructive feedback!!

And I’ll be more than happy to give it a shot!!

If you happen to post it soon, I’d love to check it out tomorrow if it’s out by then!

[witness1]

https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=75012
Done.
I am really nervous, that I missed some stupid gamebreaking bug. Are you nervous, when you hit "publish"?

[cbtsubik]

There shoould be a metronome for sure