joshsdont wrote: ↑Tue Apr 23, 2024 3:58 am
Two sets for me in the same day is crazy! I'll try and get to them soon ...
I INTENTIONALLY broke it up so that it could be played in pieces. Check the "set length" section. After the initial "main set" you can play the "activities" in any order ...
Take your time. Enjoy it. THAT is the point! You can leave feedback as you finish the parts or all at the end—your choice.
I'm going to be working on a set for Ecik next, so ... it's ALL GOOD!
Also, I will be leaving additional feedback for your set in a PM. Don't want to publish everything I have to say publicly. It's not bad, just personal.
I usually prefer to be forced to cum rather than forcing my cum onto her, but storywise didn't make lots of sense to do something like that
I found this bondage clip with Chloe and was like 'That's it. That's the perfect final.'
I mean I wanted an 'escape' final. Maybe I'm just too nice.
But who knows. Next time it won't be this easy...
Local Sex office wrote: Hello Noah, thanks for complying to our Guidelines. Now we just have to do one last Test with your Rules. Please come back to the Office. Please come directly to Room 5590. Your local Sex Office.
You arrive at the Sex Office. You enter.
You look for your Room. You find Room 5590 and enter.
Hey Noah, welcome back at the Sex Office.
This is a Special Room in the Sex Office. Here we can do some Test with our Customers...
But you will not enter this Bed today... you are doing another Test. Start your Level 2 for me.
You did your Favorite List in less than an hour after you left me last time?
Thats fast. Some guys will never do that... they will even ignore my mail... but you are different
You are obedient.
But not 100%!
There was an optional Part. Do you remember?
I have to check a lot of these Favorite List every day... you know how difficult it is to remember all these Girl names... it would do my job so much easier if all of you pervs create an easy graphic.
But most of them never will do... sad. Will you do that for me?
I cant force you... its not part of the offical protocall... but I can punish you in other ways.
Lets move to the massage table.
You are not fimilar with a programm that can to such a graphic?
I dont think so... you are just lazy dont you?
Well... we will see how much you care. Better create a nice graphic before you come here the next time...
Well... back to business. You are here for a test.
Its thes Favorite List Test.
You will have to answer some questions about your favorites.
You know them well right?
Or do you dont even know all there names?
Some days ago I had a stroke who didnt even know all of the names of his favorites... I think he was called HornyChabo... hes such a looser
But you are better right?
If you have your rules or your favorite list open. Close them now!
I will have a little massage here while you will do the test next door.
There is an empty room with an Computer. Just start the Computer and everything will start.
You better concentrate.
Have fun. And count your right and wrong answers for me.
Welcome back, Noah
I hope you did well on your Test
The Test will determine if you need "special attention"
So tell me! How many did you answer right?
All of them? I better hope so.
If you have not answered ALL Questions right. Yes that means 100%. All names and all Places. You will be send to a new Department in the Sex Office.
I just work in the "General Affairs". We just do simple strokers.
If you have got all answers right you can Cum for me if you want. You are good to go. BUT if you are a Failure you will NOT CUM!
Some girl from the "Special Attention Department" will contact you soon if you failed. She will tell you everything you need to know.
You are just a number for me Noah. You are one of many Strokers I have to check every day.
Remember to do the little graphic for me. If you fail to do so... I will give you a Special Girl from the new Department. Bye Bye.
I little bit short again for you... but Iam not sure how the Sex Office Story will continue. I just wrote the first set without thinking much about a continiuation... I hope it is still ok. Maybe the Special department will work better. You got an idea which girl you would like to be your personal "Special Attention" Worker?
I will try to play the Emily Bloom Set soon. Very few time at the moment.
Thanks for the Set. I really really liked how you introduced elsa als CEO again. I really loved that Theme back ago and liked it just as nice now.
I will NOT double everything for Elsa... thats just to much stroking and Edging. Sets will be too long then. So ELSA TAX will just be ruined Orgasms.
Lenai: I really liked the Idea of a finance girl introducing a Point System. I will add that to the Idea/Whises part in my Rules. BUT Lenai was kind of my type... but not enough to make it favorite... So I left her without a orgasms. Did I do a mistake here?
Loretta: Again she was kind of my type... but not a favorite sorry. But these Captions were very very Awesome. I really like that stuff. Even one of Brooke Monk. So nice. Perfect fit... but not Loretta as a favorite.
Sherice: This was a easy decision... She was kind of hot. But she was the least likely to get a favorite Place. The censoring was way to weak... I really like some more heavy censor. Just the Face... or feet or armpits is more of my type. Just censoring the Pussy does not trigger me well.
I really liked Leani and Loretta for the Special things like Point Systeme or the Captions. So I was tempted to put them on my favorite list, BUT I decided purely on there appereance. So maybe a different Girl can be my finance girl. Maybe a Girl already on my favorite list?
I really was happy as I got a full orgams at the end... even I did not pick any girl. I hope Elsa will not be mad at me for not picking a girl...
Basic Rules Temporary Rule: None at the moment Normal Mode:
(everything accumulating!!!)
Girl 20 Strokes (per Girl)
Pussy +1 Edge (per Pussy)
Ass +20 Strokes (per Ass)
Tits +10 Strokes (5 per Tit)
Feet +20 Strokes (10 per Foot) (You can expand the Rules for Shoes or/and Socks)
Special Rules/Characters for Models (see Special Rules/ Favorites)
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Special Rules/Favorites
Feel free to use other Models in Sets as well!!!
Special Rules: Elsa Jean "The Queen" "CEO of a Company"
The ElsaTax: Every orgasm in Elsas presence has to be ruined. (Testphase for April, maybe permanent?) Mila Azul: Ballbusting Queen Little Caprice: She does not like my foot fetish. Dolly Little: She wants me to have more redheads in my favorites. (Kind of Speaker for Redheads)
others: (not favorites but still good)
Kay Jay
Elle Tan (dominant)
Tiffany Tatum
Rachel James
Carisha Maja
Lara Brookes
Agatha Vega
Eliza Ibarra
Riley Star
Chloe Foster
Ava Sparxxx
Taylor Reed
Kaleesy
Stalfra
Maxa Saloma
Alice March
Melena A
Krystal Boyd
Anastasia Knight
Celebrities: (Good sources: reddit or instagram)
(Dont use them exclusively in a Set. Need some nudity as well)
Julia Beautx
Lisa Küppers
Brooke Monk
Turn On:
Solo & Sex Pictures
Videos (max. around 15min. per Set)
Small-, Skinny-, Petite-, Cute- Girls
Small to Medium Tits
Ass>Tits
Redheads
Flexible, Swimwear, Massage
Sport / Flexible
Feet/Socks/Shoes
Censored Images (heavy censorship. Face should be still visible)
Blacked
Turn Offs:
Big Tits
Bondage
MILF
Tattos (little ones are ok.)
any kind of piercings
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Wishes / Ideas:
Inspire yourself with these suggestions. Or feel free to do something totaly different.
Random Order. These are things I would like to happen.
More Special Rules for my favorites. Create some kind of "personality" for them. See Special Rules/Favorites.
Girls trying to get into/up my favorite List. Or Punish me for not beeing or beeing to low on my favorites list.
I think this is hard...
I love captions on Pictures. Maybe not for the whole tease, but for the picture I should Cum.
I lost interest in Ballbusting. Maybe Mila Azul (She was the Ballbusting queen) can get me back to it? (Start very gentle. And be open about me not liking it any more.
(Force me) to create a point system. Like I can earn point from girls (how? how many?) and buy things with these points like a full orgasm or a ruined one or stuff like that... Maybe a Girl can be my financial Manager? Like Elsa is a CEO?
Piper perri is too low on my list. She can easy get up to 10 or even 9,8
New Profile Picture. Still Elsa? or will another girl force me?
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Story Story is necessary!!!
It can be a really basic Story.
Try to have like 1 or 2 lines of text per Image.
It can be Simple Neighbor, School Friend, Ex-Girlfriend Storys,...,...
Create a single Story Set or start a Set series. I like both ways.
Dont have any pics without any Text/Story.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Edge I have pretty bad Stamina. Try to stay under ~50 Edges.
Iam getting better at Edges :D
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Cum
PreCum eating is possible. No CUM EATING!!!
The Set needs to have an Full Orgasm or a ruined one.
Can be decided by Luck, Guessing, my behaviour through the Set, Cruel intention of the Girls, etc.
------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ Toys
Short Rope (to tie penis or balls)
Clothespins (Need to know before the Set)
Small Lock (Can put under my glans. Stroking/Cumming with it is bad. Its like a beginner cage. Can wear it in the Set for up to like 15 min. max)
First of all since I haven't seen any feedback for it, I'll repost it here once. I know everyone sets are way less popular than custom ones here, but I do think that the Casino set that I made was really good, so heres hoping at least one person will give it a shot at this link (Fatts, I'm still planning on doing a tease that ties into that for you, but I might have another different tease first so idk how long it'll be lol)
Also, I don't have time to get into the details right now, but I did fail my CHI game . Details to come, but letting specifically Fatts and Ecik know in case they have a set in the works. I'll probably want a punishment set, but obviously that'll require specifics which I'll provide when I have more time later . I'm actually not that frustrated that I failed though because joining the forum has been a great experience. Full update to come when I have more time.
1. I must say after normal orgasms my arousal absolutely drops. And since I can't really "live" denial in real life, I want to be on strict denial during multi day sets. Now ruins are similar I'm afraid: They don't work as well as they should, I always have some spasms which leads to a refractory period and a drop in horniness - *sometimes* in passes quickly, mostly not (I think it's also a mental thing. So if I'm being honest (and on the safe side): I'd probably say I'd prefer to stay at denial before the end. As much as the thought of multiple ruins turns me on in theory, I mostly just lose too much of this absolute goon state I miss so much. Hope that helps?
2. my plans have changed a little: I have 20th evening, 21th all day and 22nd to afternoonish to myself. Other than that I'll probably have a 2-day window in June (weekend - completely free) and two 3-day-windows in July (2 days completely free)
3. I'm alone at home, have the flat completely to myself. Whilst I do have some work / stuff to do, I try to dedicate those windows to playing.
4. Whilst I honestly don't want to demand even more of your time I see where you are going, as I actually really am a character / story guy. I can pull off limit pushers (CEI or so) for Uma, Liya because their characters have been built in my imagination and I have a "relationship" to them. But again: I bet anything will work as you write with a lot of detail anyway. But just to answer your question fully: whilst I can't 100% guarantee to stay denied, I will have time for shorter / single day sets prior in May.
Wow I must say your teaser has me scared and excited the same time. If it's across the ruin topic - which it seems to be - I must say I wouldn't dare say "don't" because the thought if it is a massive turn on as I said despite the fear of longer refractory periods - I just might not be in the same submissive state (which I love). But the thought is a massive turn on and
who knows: I might break a mental barrier or so and great writing / characters help. Just reading your post has gotten me so excited that I'd definitely say go for it . And your confidence alone is getting me soooo anxious about this in a good way - damn, I'd ruin for Uma right now thinking of it .
(Other than that: I noticed humiliation can be quite a turn on (e.g. CEI etc.). But anything bi is a firm limit I wouldn't break)
RE other contributors: of course I can'd demand that, if some would like to chime in, awesome. And yes, the recent sets by K and Beanie were absolutely awesome. That CEI scene with Lana is on the Mount Rushmore. As well as the Uma ending, which made me feel so humiliated in a good way for the first time.
But yeah: that would be absolutely amazing and I'd consider myself very fortunate for such a project and would definitely love to return the favor.
Speaking of which: I will definitely return the favor - not sure how yet but noted on Kenzie and Uma: I remember writing that mini set. But you need to help me with what happened (with her and your NNN challenge ) and I'd be happy to come up with a "response" in whatever form. Noted on your preferences to, so I might just follow up with multiple parts (depending on your feedback in between)
Again: thank you so much already, I honestly can't wait!
We don't want to ruin the fun, do we?
Last full orgasm: 27/APR/2024
Last ruin: 2/MAY/2024
Stroking: I put only fast strokes in my rules because I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... . You can even choose the bpm (120 bpm minimum by default). This can be used as a warm up, before cumming and for POT .
CBT: I also enjoy Ballbusting a lot and you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself .
Edging: I enjoy edging A LOT, so don't be shy with those edges and also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT . Long edges are encouraged before cumming.
Palming: I can edge by palming after lots of edges . I actually LOVE to cum by palming, so don't hold back .
Post-Orgasm Torture: I prefer to cum just once and at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another . Anyways, I really enjoy POT .
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text. (I do love dirty talk and name calling (cumcow, fuck toy, cum machine, cum dispenser, whore, ...))
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
If you decide to make me a Set I will send the Feedback ASAP including my Favourite Pictures :)
- Black hair: 30 Fast strokes without edging (punish me with more Edging/CBT if I edge)
- Brunettes: 10 Ball Slaps
- Redhead: 3 Edges
- Blonde: Hold an Edge for 20 seconds
- Other-colour hair: 10 seconds of head palming
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please . (I fucking LOOOOVE palming, so please don't feel constrained by the rules )
- 10 Ball Slaps for every Brunette (you choose the intensity (Hard by default): Medium < Hard < Very Hard < As hard as I dare < Try to floor myself)
- 3 Edges for every Redhead
- Hold an Edge for 20 seconds for every Blonde
- I Cum if one of my Favourite Models requests it directly (long edges and palming are encouraged before cumming)
If there's 2 or more girls in the picture, I will follow the rules for only 1 of them, you can choose which one (My preferences usually go: Other-colour hair > Blonde > Brunette > Redhead > Black hair).
If a Blonde picture is followed by another Blonde picture, I won't stop holding the edge, unless told otherwise.
Also, I prefer a Set where the girls talk and "interact" with me, rather than a bunch of images without any text. (I do love dirty talk, name calling (cumcow, fuck toy, cum machine, cum dispenser, whore, ...) and be forced to beg )
And well, because I'm into Post-Orgasm Torture (I prefer to cum just once at the end, but if the girls prefer to make me cum more than once, please make those happen one after another (I might regret this )):
- 30 fast strokes without edging for every Black hair (I LOVE to get punished if I edge with busting/more edging,... )
- 10 seconds of head palming for every Other-colour hair (I can edge by palming after lots of edges)
(Note: You can use both of these rules as a warm up or whatever, I don't need to cum before you use any of these rules)
Pd: I'm not into Ruined orgasms or CEI at all.
Also, don't be shy with edge-holding, I can endure A LOT
You can also add Wildcards (for example, you can swap the tasks attached to their hair color, holding edges for every Brunnette and ballbusting for every Blonde). You can combine rules, change the ones attached to a hair color for another, ... Or even do a full tease with only one hair color, feel free
You can always add, combine or even change any of the Rules above as you please, they act more like Guidelines than anything else . (I fucking LOOOOVE palming, so please don't feel constrained by the rules )
Favourite's Special Rules (feel free to use them and/or add anyone you want ):
- Jenya D (Eugenia Diordiychuk / Katie Fey): 10 seconds of head palming WHILE holding the edge through the palming for every pic (for multiple pics of her in a row I will hold it as 1 long edge as it makes more sense with her character).
She loves VERY VERY LONG edges. It's so hard for me to hold back from cumming when doing so and she knows it, so she takes advantage of that and makes me beg for longer and longer edges.
- Dainty Wilder / Dainty Suicide: 10 Ball Slaps WHILE head palming for every pic.
She loves to dominate me A LOT and call me fucker and make me her bitch. She even enjoys making me cum with palming and busting to make my orgasms so agonizing adding some POT to them too.
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(Source for her photos: https://www.nudecollect.com/ , search: site:nudecollect.com Dainty Suicide in duckduckgo.com or reuse previous set photos with her)
- Faye Reagan: 2 Edges + 10 Ball Slaps.
She loves to make me her personal Bitch, and even if I edge a lot for her, she seems to enjoy kicking my Balls harder and harder even more.
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- Mila Azul: all her Ball Slaps are done Very Hard minimum.
She enjoys Ball Busting me and everybody on the HMC thread. She loves to push me and see how much more I can take.
- Adriana Chechik: 30 fast strokes, and if I edge I have to do 20 Ball Slaps.
She knows that all the Ballslaps and edges snowball and make it more difficult to avoid edging for her. She loves making me stroke faster and take more and harder Ball Slaps everytime.
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- Liz Vicious: 3 edges per pic (normal redhead rules).
She is kind of crazy and knows it. She wants to see me goon for her with endless edges. She treats me as her cumcow and talks about milking my precum knowing how much it turns me on to be called that.
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Favourite Model's list (they are in order of preference, but they are still my favourites, so don't worry about putting one that is at the bottom. Also, I rearrange them every now and then ):
- Tori Black
- Mila Azul
- Hailey Leigh
- Charity Crawford
- Gloria Sol
- Rosalyn Sphinx
- Malena Morgan
- Jenna Haze
- Riley Reid
- Lana Rhoades
- Kortney Kane
- Amarna Miller
- Faye Reagan
- Piper Fawn (Ariel)
- Liz Vicious
- Snugglepunk
- Jia Lissa
- Elle Alexandra
- Ava Sparxxx
- Red Fox/Michelle H
- Ulya I
Yes, you are right that general sets don’t usually get a lot of feedback. Maybe because they aren’t specialized towards a single person, I don’t know! but, I played it! After a fun intro from mia…got more instructions from Lana…which pics were my favorite.
I rolled a 4 at first, which wasn’t bad. For the first wheel, I rolled a 3. On the second wheel I rolled. 6…which led to a fun countdown (edge down?)
Last wheel, I rolled a 6. At this point, with my rules, led to a series of edges without permission
Back to mia again…I got caught in a loop, because I’d keep guessing the wrong number! I was 5 off for the first, 7 off for the second. I eventually gave up and admitted defeat. I will try again later
Sad that you lost your quest! That’s ok…it actually helped me figure out what to do with your sets. Consider my existing set a 2 parter. Just assume that when you play the set…nobody knows you’ve failed…but they will..eventually!
AAHHHhhhhhhh!!! I was SO SURE I was going to have at least ONE of them break into your favorites! I TRIED SO HARD!!
For REAL ... I tried SO hard! But it's fine—it's TOTALLY fine.
My money was on Sherice. That's why I made her last. I thought she was just CRAZY hot ... LOVED her tight, petite little body ... cute face, and then with the red hair ... I just FOR SURE she would break in ... sigh ... but alas, it was an "easy decision" ...
I was just going through pornpics and happened to see this one Loretta set that I just thought was FIRE! ALSO ... I'm not really a pussy guy—and I know YOU are—so ... I just thought that EACH ONE of these girls just had EXQUISITE pussies, so ... pretty, petite, cute girls with nice pussies—TWO of them redheads ... sigh ... I EVEN tried to work little special rules in with each and also give each one a distinct personality ... I WAS SO CONFIDENT THAT I WOULD GET at LEAST ONE! ... but like I said, it's okay.
I will try to play the Emily Bloom Set soon. Very few time at the moment.
No worries. No rush. It has LITERALLY been sitting for OVER TWO YEARS UNPLAYED BY YOU! What's a few more days/weeks? That is FINE ...
And, it REALLY IS a long set. I don't know how long, but ... I think 120 pictures JUST of Emily Bloom ... and then there are OTHER scenes in there with I think 3-5 other girls, and then a few galleries for games ... yeah ... it is a LONG one.
THAT said, whatever your current "stamina level" was at the time—I believe it was 30 stated in your rules ... even though the set IS long, I counted and tried to stay close to that ... HOWEVER ... part of the game was Emily trying to trick/convince you into edging more, so ... IF you do all of those optional extra edges ... maybe 40? I don't know, but ... Probably 2-3 hours to play it, but ... it is VERY GOOD.
Don't rush it, man! ENJOY it ... Save it for a day when you have TIME and are in the mood to be teased for 3 hours of wanking, lol.
I really really liked how you introduced elsa als CEO again. I really loved that Theme back ago and liked it just as nice now.
Yeah, I mean ... like I said, I remember back when you and Ecik were exchanging those sets, and ... ever since then, I have pretended that Elsa was that rich billionaire CEO. I think it is a nice premise that we should stick with. I know Ecik had her buy "Club Goon" in his set, so ... I know HE still believes it! And even if you DON'T want to go back to working for her—that's fine ... but she can STILL be your ultra-rich goddess!
I will NOT double everything for Elsa... thats just to much stroking and Edging. Sets will be too long then. So ELSA TAX will just be ruined Orgasms.
I think that is 100% fine and a smart decision. I REALLY respect when people know and understand their limits.
BUT Lenai was kind of my type... but not enough to make it favorite...
I chose her for you because of the red hair, nice body, and nice pussy ... I wanted each one to be a separate character, and other than the physical, I wanted to give each one an "extra dimension" that MIGHT be enough to tip the balance and put them into your favorites ... but only YOU can decide who goes into your favorites and what that criteria is ...
So I left her without a orgasms. Did I do a mistake here?
I cannot say, but ... quite possibly she could be convinced to interview again, so ... maybe the door isn't shut entirely ...
Lenai has red hair in MOST of her galleries, but ... I think she is a natural brunette, because some galleries also have her as brown hair ... something to think about ... I AM very glad that the "point system" and having a "numbers person" idea appealed to you, though. To use an American baseball analogy, I managed to hit some doubles and triples (get to second and third base), but unfortunately NO HOME RUNS!
Loretta: Again she was kind of my type... but not a favorite sorry. But these Captions were very very Awesome. I really like that stuff. Even one of Brooke Monk. So nice. Perfect fit... but not Loretta as a favorite.
Then I am going to add her to my favorites, friend! I think she is CRAZY hot. YOU clearly REALLY like captions, while they are "just okay" to me, but ... FOR REAL ... I am DEFINITELY going to be adding HER to my list. I just wanted to wait to see what you did, because if you liked her, then I was planning on developing her character more and writing her more often for you, but ... since she didn't quite make the cut ... I will DEFINITELY add her to MY team! Feel free to include her in any sets you write for me. I am not really a pussy guy, but ... hers is FANTASTIC. SO pretty ... what a BEAUTIFUL girl!
Sherice: This was a easy decision... She was kind of hot. But she was the least likely to get a favorite Place. The censoring was way to weak... I really like some more heavy censor. Just the Face... or feet or armpits is more of my type. Just censoring the Pussy does not trigger me well.
That is 100% fair. I am lazy. My favorite part of writing teases is developing the characters and writing the dialogue, so ... I spent a LOT of time doing that ... I am not really into censoring myself, so ... I don't know of any good tools and was too lazy to find and use them, so ... I just did VERY lazy censoring with Windows paint! That was the first time I EVER really did censoring for a set, so ... Not surprised it was bad and didn't do much, and that is FINE ... I did "points" and "captions" for the other two ... I wanted EACH ONE to ALSO be able to offer some special connection with your rules—in order to make them more attractive to choose as a favorite. Censoring was "left", so ... I just gave that to Sherice ...
I probably won't do/try censoring for you any more, but ... I can DEFINITELY find some captions. THAT is a pretty easy thing to include in some sets here at there ... and I ALSO REALLY liked Sherice, so ... since she didn't make it for you ... I might just add her to my favorites as well! I thought she had the best chance which is why I saved her for last—cute redhead with an AWESOME pussy! I thought it would be a slam dunk ... sigh ... but I guess not ...
I really liked Leani and Loretta for the Special things like Point Systeme or the Captions. So I was tempted to put them on my favorite list, BUT I decided purely on there appereance.
I don't think there is anything wrong with that.
For me, "personality" plays a HUGE role, but ... creating "characters" and giving them certain personality traits ... that plays a BIG ROLE into how I like someone ... I mean, I do NOT really care for thicc girls, but ... Ecik sometimes writes Angela White into his teases for me, and I have actually come to like her QUITE a lot ... not because of how she looks, but mostly because of the personality and writing style, so ... for me, that is almost THE most important part, but ... not everyone writes the same, and I think it is FINE to just go PURELY off of appearance.
So maybe a different Girl can be my finance girl. Maybe a Girl already on my favorite list?
This, I think, is a VERY good idea.
I do NOT plan to do any more "interview" style sets like this for you. As I said, I tried VERY hard and thought that maybe 2 of 3 you would pick ... with the models I chose I thought you would REALLY like, PLUS personality, PLUS special rule, but ... sigh ... NOT ENOUGH! So, since my BEST EFFORT was not enough ... I just don't really want to try EVER again!
THAT said ... while I DID want to try, and EVEN THOUGH I failed ... There is STILL MORE DRAMA for you on this story from me.
As you know, there is a certain someone who was removed from your favorites list ... and she is NOT HAPPY about it. After playing through ALL of your recent sets—which THAT is something I DID DO —I was "inspired" to do the "interview set", but ... I was ALSO inspired to do ANOTHER one, so ... MAYBE I ruined the surprise a bit, but ... I KNOW YOU PEAK BEFORE ANYWAY! Do you still do that!? Or did Helequin/Caprice convince you to stop peaking as a warm-up before? Well, anyway ... I have AT LEAST one more set idea for you—with the scenes already planned out—so ... I was REALLY excited about it two weeks ago after I started working on that one, but ... NOW I have gotten excited about other sets, lol, but ... Maybe I will wait for your return set, and then you STILL have that Emily Bloom set, so ... perhaps it is best to wait a while and work on some for others, but ... I DO have my next idea for you ready to go!
I really was happy as I got a full orgams at the end... even I did not pick any girl.
Well, Sherice does not like having debts, and ... if you picked her as a favorite, then a ruin or denial would be nice, because then I could LATER have her give you a full orgasm, and THEN you would have something to look forward to ... if you read the other ending, that was the idea ... but, I like to cum, and I like to usually end my sets with that, so ... I guess getting the full orgasm was a second place prize, since getting a new favorite would have been a #1 prize.
I hope Elsa will not be mad at me for not picking a girl...
Elsa is going to be VERY disappointed ... She spent a LOT of time organizing and planning and getting everyone together—FOR YOU ... and then NOTHING. But, YOU are in charge of your favorites list and NOT her, so ... While mad, she is more mad at herself than she is at you—because she did this without your asking ... So, she is NOT mad at you, but she IS mad at you—but not too much, so ... Probably only mad enough to punish you a little, but ... there is someone who is VERY mad and wants to punish you MUCH MORE.
Thanks for this amazing Set.
I am REALLY glad you liked it. Thank you for saying that. It was VERY fun to write.
I am busy with other ideas and sets, so ... I will wait to start writing again for you until AFTER you send a return set to me ... THEN I will add you to my list and start working on another set for you.
And don't forget to play the Emily Bloom set when you have time—but no rush. Maybe she will even move up in your list.
@brian: I have a VERY irregular request ... when you open this spoiler to read my response to our continued discussion ... you need to be ABSOLUTELY NAKED with not a STITCH of clothing on you! No cage either, so ... DON'T read this while you are at work! This is NOT a lie, but ... I have written PAGES of words that I want you to read ... but you need to be naked when you do ... you'll thank me later ...
I really enjoy your creativity and writing, so that was sincere. So I'm thrilled to get a set
No, I knew it was sincere ... that was part of the reason it meant so much!
1. I must say after normal orgasms my arousal absolutely drops...
That ... is perfectly understandable, but ... at the same time ... I TOTALLY do not understand it—when looking through the prism of my personal experience—because I am a TOTAL cumslut, and one orgasm USUALLY ISN'T ENOUGH!! I want MORE ...
I typically cum 1-3 times every day. My refractory period is pretty good. My record is 5 full orgasms in a single hour ...
Your answer to 1) ... this ... THIS gives me pause ... I think I am going to have to have a long hard think about this, but ... I have an *idea* of what I MIGHT do ... sigh ... hmmmm ... Obviously can't ruin the surprise, lol ... but this is VERY helpful to know ... I think I will take it under advisement ...
Hope that helps?
It does ... it does ...
2. my plans have changed a little
So, you DO have two full days, but ... it is split up amongst THREE days ... I see, I see ...
Does that change my plans? Hmmm ... OBVIOUSLY, I had an idea that I was REALLY excited for! Originally, I was thinking 2 full days ... I started planning out scenes and girls today and yesterday ...
::several minutes of silent thinking later::
I think in some ways 2 days spread over 3 would be WAY better, but ... in other ways—for the idea I have—two FULL days is going to be best. I don't want to spread it out for that long. I don't want to give you too much time to think. I just want to run you through the gauntlet and just "GO! GO! GO!" It's going to be a WILD ride with a LOT of action. I just want to hit the ground running, jump into it, and then it is going to be, "WHAT is going to happen next? HOW am I going to do this?" and you just gotta endure and survive ... HIGH intensity, a sprint from beginning to end, so ... in terms of pacing, I think 2 FULL days would be best ...
And if that can't happen till June, I think that's okay. Will just give me more time, which will be alright ...
3. I'm alone at home, have the flat completely to myself. Whilst I do have some work / stuff to do, I try to dedicate those windows to playing.
PERFECT ... good to know!
4. Whilst I honestly don't want to demand even more of your time
This is HONESTLY REALLY HARD for me! Because I get an idea and a vision, and I just want to go and execute on it, and when I set my mind to it ... yeah, I just ... I just make it happen, lol! So, you're not "forcing" me to do ANYTHING!
I've written enough of these teases to know myself and what it takes and what is involved when I enter into "Full Dynamo Mode" ... I just don't hold back and go BALLS DEEP Project creep is DEFINITELY an issue for me—one that I am FULLY aware of and nervous about. But at the SAME TIME ... I'm an artist who takes PRIDE in his work. That Uma Jolie shopping set was probably THE MOST creative set I have EVER done. The planning and getting all of the spoilers and choices right was a PAIN and took a LOT of time to pull off and get right, but ... I would LIKE to think that my set was ONE of the MANY contributing factors that made Uma one of your current favorites ... and we have SO MANY FANTASTIC writers on here, so ... if *I* can craft an experience that is memorable and impactful and stands out amongst THIS crowd ... that's REALLY kind of cool and special ...
... and writing something like that for someone like you who really appreciates and enjoys that and my writing and style of set creation ... I mean, who else better is there? I think I would be hard-pressed to find someone who likes it more than you. Some guys don't like the character-driven stuff. A lot of guys English isn't their first language (and nothing wrong with that! I'm the stereotypical monolingual American. ) and might not fully appreciate the wordsmanship ...
... but while a full, all day, multi-day set IS a commitment AND a lot of work ... in some ways, it's a RARE opportunity ... because I can tell a COMPLETE story from beginning to end, which ... a single set doesn't provide that level of opportunity for narrative creation ... Now, series I enjoy, but ... for me, series are often more back-and-forth with adjustments made in situ with feedback. THIS is just a full thing. I have to be EXTRA careful in my planning to anticipate, because there WILL BE NO ROOM FOR CHANGES ... but at the same time, that kind of "locks me in" and I have to commit and make it all happen, so ... I think it will be a GREAT opportunity, and so long as I don't commit to too many of these ... one with you will be enough, and NOW I "don't have any more room" for any other "epic-length" projects!
And the OTHER part of it is, "Can I do it?" Will I be able to pull it off?" I haven't written many multi-day sets ... I mean a few here and there and then some "play as you have time," but ... Not too many like this.
I see where you are going, as I actually really am a character / story guy.
You do and you do not ... but that's okay ... because I think I have to hold my cards REALLY tight to my chest on this one!
I can pull off limit pushers (CEI or so) for Uma, Liya because their characters have been built in my imagination
That is VERY good to know ...
I have a "relationship" to them.
I understand THAT part PERFECTLY. The losing interest after cumming—not at all —but familiarity and "relationship" ... 100% I am the same way. I will take "girls I know" to "hotter" strangers ALMOST every time. Fortunately, on here, we can get BOTH! The hottest ladies with the BEST personalities!
But again: I bet anything will work as you write with a lot of detail anyway.
THAT is the other thing that is CONSTANTLY in my brain: "Can I pull this off? Is my writing good enough? Do I understand brian's psyche well enough to sink my hooks into his curiosities and fantasies and arousal centers and DRAG HIM ALONG through my story, kicking and screaming until the SMASHING conclusion?" ... and it's an open question. I guess I won't know until after I get the feedback!
But just to answer your question fully: whilst I can't 100% guarantee to stay denied, I will have time for shorter / single day sets prior in May.
I will do it. It will be a little bit of a test run ...
I'm a perfectionistic overachiever. A full day set would actually be WORSE for me ... just ONE good, solid, medium-length to long set ... THAT is all I want—or need ...
Basically, I have ONE character that I REALLY want to introduce to you and use quite a lot in the multi-day set ... the whole set does NOT revolve around her as the premise will be set by Uma Jolie who will get the first and last scene (probably ) ... HOWEVER ... this girl IS a main character and will drive MUCH of the plot, so ... if you don't like her, then it's probably best to pull the plug on my idea, but ... if we "test her out" in a single set and you like her or REALLY like her ... then that gives me some confidence. I'm NOT going to write a set that I KNOW you will hate. But depending on your reaction to her, I'll get a better sense of what the success rate will be.
She's on your favorites list, by the way—but NOT currently on mine.
Wow I must say your teaser has me scared and excited the same time. If it's across the ruin topic - which it seems to be - I must say I wouldn't dare say "don't" because the thought if it is a massive turn on as I said despite the fear of longer refractory periods - I just might not be in the same submissive state (which I love). But the thought is a massive turn on and
who knows: I might break a mental barrier or so and great writing / characters help. Just reading your post has gotten me so excited that I'd definitely say go for it . And your confidence alone is getting me soooo anxious about this in a good way - damn, I'd ruin for Uma right now thinking of it .
Brian ... I am known for being melodramatic, high energy, and LOUD in my personal life—DESPITE being an introvert—but around the right people—they all know ... I am known for my sarcasm and hyperbole—however ... I am in a technical field which has taught me to choose my words VERY carefully ... I am ALMOST ALWAYS CONSCIOUSLY AWARE about the things I claim and what my words mean and if I am claiming too much or lack sufficient evidence to support said claim ...
With that preface in mind, let me now write this:
Uma has a plan for you. What she wants—ABSOLUTELY DASTARDLY ... She wants to reward you ... but you are going to have to prove yourself and work for it ... I have not read all of the Liya Silver sets written for you—HOWEVER ... I am willing to say with a HIGH degree of confidence that what Uma wants from you is greater than ANYTHING Liya EVER asked for. And knowing you, I will stand by that statement, and if after the fact it happens to be that I am wrong ... you can have Uma tease and deny me for 48 hours, after which, my next orgasm will be RUINED—and by her ...
Wow! Now I'M the one getting hard! That sounds like a FUCKING FANTASTIC set ... a set that would be VERY hard for me and that I would HATE to play!
... but not NEARLY as bad as the PURE TORTURE FANTASY I have running in my head—that Uma has in store for you!
Brian ... I am going to keep it guarded ... I am going to hold back the premise for as long as I POSSIBLY can ... BUT ... when you DO finally hear it ...
Your stomach will drop into your balls. Your face will go white. The feeling of dread will be OVERWHELMING. You will have a physical reaction from the panic and sudden onset of fear. You will INSTANTLY regret agreeing to ANY of this ... Your mind will either go blank from being unable to process what is happening—and then SLOWLY start to piece it together ... OR, your head will just EXPLODE with nervous thoughts traveling at speeds faster than sound ... Your brain will turn to mush.
You will question yourself and your ability to perform, and you will be second guessing yourself and wondering if you can even go through with it the ENTIRE TIME I bet you will be wavering ...
... but at the SAME TIME ... the excitement and the thrill and the prospect of all of the impending teasing—which the girls will HAVE to perform in order to make it happen ... the thought of just HOW SCREWED and helpless you are ... you will question your ability and resolve ...
... and you will love it. You will be in a state of TERRIFIED bliss, almost completely helpless and without agency ... because *I* will have you checkmated before you even make the first move ...
The STAKES, brian! OH, the STAKES! You will be constantly FILLED with dread, wondering the whole time, "Will I ACTUALLY go through with it!? NO! I can't—But I MUST!" The drama of the situation will create a tension within you that just may rend your very SOUL in two ... and you will be UTTERLY exhausted by the end. Mentally. Physically. Overstimulated and oversexed ... just a COMPLETE mess ... People may ask what happened to you, but ... you just simply won't have the words ...
And you may be thinking to yourself right now, "But Fatts ... aren't you overhyping? Don't you think this is all just a little too much and over-the-top?" My answer to you ...
No, brian. I don't. I don't think this is overhyped.
Let me take off my Leeroy Jerkins sunglasses for a minute ...
I've got your number. Uma's got your number. I know what you want. She knows what you want. And let me tell you ... we BOTH know that you DON'T want this! ...
Hype is as BIG as you want it to be. The ONLY problem comes when you underdeliver ... which I DON'T plan on doing!
You get out what you put in ...
As a Dungeon Master, I make my Dungeons and Dragons players write backstories for their characters. It takes work, but it helps them to better role play and get into character. It builds anticipation and creates investment ... which means they have more fun when they are playing the session ...
But the thought is a massive turn on and who knows: I might break a mental barrier or so and great writing / characters help. Just reading your post has gotten me so excited that I'd definitely say go for it . And your confidence alone is getting me soooo anxious about this in a good way - damn, I'd ruin for Uma right now thinking of it .
Remember that. I can almost promise that you will see those words again, and THEN you will be reminded that you signed up for this ...
The nerves. The excitement. The fear. The arousal ...
She lays down on the bed, letting out a long sigh ...
I was watching you, you know ... I had a spy cam installed in this room a LONG time ago ...
You just have no idea what you're getting yourself into, do you?
ABSOLUTELY clueless ... it's kind of pathetic ... You're REALLY hopeless, brian—do you know that?
But you can't help it ... no! It's not your fault! The fault is mine!
I just make you so very weak for me, brian ... isn't that right?
I just loom SO LARGE in your mind ... it's only natural that you just want to give me everything ... EVEN WHEN YOU DON'T KNOW WHAT IT IS you feel compelled to hand it over ...
That generosity, that ... trust, that ...
... devotion ... Oh! It makes me wet!
I don't even have to tell you what to do ... You've already said it ... I already know you want it ... and, right now ...
Has your arousal completely vanished now that you came?
Or has anticipation gotten hold of your dick?
^^Do NOT miss the above spoiler!!^^
(Other than that: I noticed humiliation can be quite a turn on (e.g. CEI etc.). But anything bi is a firm limit I wouldn't break)
I wouldn't DREAM of doing "bi themes" with you, and I'll take a note of the first piece ...
RE other contributors: of course I can'd demand that, if some would like to chime in, awesome. And yes, the recent sets by K and Beanie were absolutely awesome. That CEI scene with Lana is on the Mount Rushmore. As well as the Uma ending, which made me feel so humiliated in a good way for the first time.
I couldn't DREAM of demanding that of ANYONE ... I just didn't want to declare a personal monopoly on your limited play time ... but, with it going later ... that gives more time to organize—and plan ... and recruit—potentially!
Will have to view those scenes. Gotta do my "research" after all! A good writer ALWAYS does!
But yeah: that would be absolutely amazing and I'd consider myself very fortunate for such a project and would definitely love to return the favor.
It will be a while. Right now, I have a rush of "new passion project thrill" ... must thread the needle between diving in and pacing myself.
NO idea what I want in return ... ALWAYS AND FOREVER my fear is getting WAY too involved on here! It's already happened, but ... maybe I'll put a BRIEF pause on, though I don't know ... Maybe just pick a few days these week where I do not log on or even CHECK this site—at all!
But for fear of getting overinvolved (too late ) I haven't really thought about what I REALLY want ... just trying to keep things simple for now ... played Ecik's set today ... was PLANNING on updating my rules and leaving some feedback for him, but ... got mugged by my muse—and the overconfident spirit of Leeroy Jerkins—AGAIN! MOST post this and THEN TO BED ... will have to update and post more feedback tomorrow ...
Speaking of which: I will definitely return the favor - not sure how yet but noted on Kenzie and Uma: I remember writing that mini set. But you need to help me with what happened (with her and your NNN challenge ) and I'd be happy to come up with a "response" in whatever form. Noted on your preferences to, so I might just follow up with multiple parts (depending on your feedback in between)
If you can write Kenzie BATSHIT CRAZY ... feel free to give it a go! THAT is a fantasy, that ... well WOW ... just WOW ...
... and short is FINE ... tomorrow I will update my rules, but ... short sets are PREFERRED at this moment.
It's been a year and a half ... I kept a journal of Leeroy Jerkins exploits at the end ... I'll have to go back and revisit and check your set and try to recall EXACTLY what happened ...
I've been reluctant to fully revisit and retire and "finish off" Leeroy ... it was a WHOLE THING and just a COMPLETELY different style playing this game, where LITERALLY every set and post I was pretending to be someone else, so ... it's kind of nice to just "be myself" again, hahaha
But I have retained SOME of Leeroy's confidence! (CLEARLY! ) But I'm STILL trying to figure out how EXACTLY I want the girls to treat me ... My first play through as Fatts, I was pretty submissive, and with Leeroy a Sigma Male Switch ...
I asked you to write Uma, because you "know her better" than anyone else ... AND ... since I am SO "character-driven" ... I think it would just be REALLY COOL to "experience her through your eyes" ... but, I've JUST gotten back, and things are just VERY different now ...
I'm not "subby Fatts," but I'm not boisterous Leeroy, either ... I guess I'm the same person I always was, but ... Playing Leeroy helped me to break some barriers I had while initially playing this game, and now that I'm "free" and starting again, I just don't know what I want ... except that I want the girls to treat me authentically ... which is ONE of the reasons I am looking for "new" girls ... because "the Village" I worked on originally has "been retired." Leeroy has "been retired," and so it's just sort of easier to "start fresh" with mistresses who don't have to navigate my complicated baggage, lol ...
I mean, Uma interacted with me as Leeroy, and she at least probably knew "of me" as Fatts ... cannot recall if we ever played together ... if so, it was like just a single scene or two ...
So how does she react to me as I am right now? Was she attracted to Leeroy? What did she think of me as Fatts? Knowing that I used to be Leeroy, how does that color how she perceives me now?
I'm in this weird space where I have just gotten back and am NOT in the mood to be teased really hard or get into longer-term submissive relationships (with a buncha tease girls) and don't even really have the stamina right now for that ... but while I WANT to be dominated—still—I want the girls to acknowledge that I am ALSO a switch ... and if she doesn't really respect me as a person and MERELY wants another boy-toy sub she can abuse ... then even if she's as hot as Uma Jolie is to me—I don't want that. I'm just REALLY tired of not having ANY of the power in these dynamics ... and again, while any given mistress can be dominant the majority of the time, I NEED TO RETAIN SOME CONTROL TOO ... and be respected and have scenes where I'm treated/seen as an equal ... and that doesn't necessarily mean that she has to be submissive if that is not in her nature ... For example, Helequin was ADAMANT that *his* version of Caprice would NEVER be a "switch" ... which was fine, because "Leeroyverse Caprice" *was* (a closet switch) and that was all good and fine ...
... but I don't want an incongruent version of Uma from you which is tailored to me ... I just want to experience the Uma that exists in YOUR mind, but ... I don't know her that well, and CERTAINLY could not even BEGIN to tell you how she might react to all of this, lol! So I don't even know if she would want to play with me—as I am right now. And if not, that's fine ... don't twist your character into doing something that she isn't ...
And lastly, Nancy Ace IS my steady "cyber girlfriend" in my "lore." We're a couple in an open relationship because that's just the way it has to be when you date a Milovana "tease girl." I wouldn't share her if I didn't have to , but ... it's like you with cucking. NEVER in real life, but ... here I'm good with having a "girlfriend" that just sleeps with EVERYONE! My particular version of Nancy is VERY specific, and if you want to get a taste, check out my last set to Josh ...
So chew on all of that ... you're character-driven too, so ... I'm not asking this of ANYONE ELSE, really ... which is why I took out pretty much all of my old favorites from my rules—just easier and cleaner to start fresh, but ... yeah, if you want to include Uma in sets for me—have at it! BUT ... I would "prefer" that IF you do ... you navigate THIS whole mess! BUT ... if you are as "character-driven" as you claim ... I'm sure it will be "fun" for you—which is why I don't mind asking.
What she knows ... let's see ... She knows I am Fatts and she knows I *was* Leeroy ... and THEN I ghosted for a year and a half to re-emerge—and now Nancy's "mystery boyfriend from Canada" has suddenly shown up and is REAL ... and it's ME. (There is an American trope where a boy says he is dating some BEAUTIFUL girl who he SWEARS is real but "she lives in Canada" and so his friends can't confirm and all believe he's lying.) Her memory of NNN is hazy. She SWEARS that she was the one who "ended my run" and gave me a FULL orgasm ... she even has texts she sent her friends that say that and she SORT OF remembers, but ... then Caprice ALSO claims that she drugged me and that SHE has/had proof that SHE was the one who ended the run with a full orgasm for me ... but the dates conflict, and the timestamps are messed up, and there are conflicting memories ... but then Leeroy just ghosted, so ... it all just got forgotten ...
The REAL truth I sort of know—and it's too fantastic for Uma ... and then "Leeroyverse Caprice" ALSO disappeared shortly after Leeroy did ... So ... at THIS moment ... SHE doesn't even know for sure what happened ... but it's been so long, and NOBODY has been talking about it ... AND THERE I GO AGAIN!!!
I SWORE I wasn't going to get myself wound up in overwrought plot lines, but ... A WRITER MUST WRITE—AM I RIGHT!?
Anyways ... she honestly doesn't know ... MAYBE that means she's too embarrassed too ask ... or maybe she'll ask point blank ... but it has ALSO been a long time, so ... I'll let YOU sort that all out—but ONLY if you WANT TO! For the RIGHT PERSON I'm sure it would be SUPER FUN, but ... for the WRONG PERSON ... just annoying homework! But if you want to explore that, GO FOR IT, MAN!
Of course ONE ADDITIONAL THOUGHT (lies ... I have more than one ) ... if YOU tease me with Uma, then I will have a better idea of how to write her for you. Granted, like I said ... between now and when I sit down to write the 2-day set, I WILL reread that shopping set ... I WILL read that NNN scene ... I'll read/play through some of your most recent "Uma sets" to get a better idea of the character ... ALL of that will help with my conception of her ... but ANYTHING from you will help, too.
And her and I will probably have a VERY different relationship than you and her ... and that is FINE and I would actually WANT THAT. Just don't FORCE our interactions ... make it as organic as you can.
Actually, one of my all time FAVORITE scenes was this one by Mistypanda22:
It was a ONE SCENE MINI SET featuring "Mama Bear" Malena Morgan ... and this was AFTER I sent him THREE "one scene mini sets" featuring her, where ... we just had this exchange where he would leave feedback/a post/comment, and then I would respond with a mini set "as Malena" he would react, and then I sent ANOTHER ... and we just went back and forth ...
But the thing that I just liked about it the most was how she just treated me as an equal ... and ... she wasn't even really actively "teasing" me ... we were just having a conversation ... one in which SHE was stripping and *I* was naked and stroking, but ... that is PERFECTLY NATURAL BEHAVIOR FOR MILOVANANS!
She could tell me what she likes about having you as a slave ... her thoughts on Leeroy ... if you want me to be "helping her plan" your big weekend ... or not ... if she's brave enough to ask what really happened during NNN ... I mean ... just WHATEVER you want ... and short is FINE.
I used to write WHOLE LETTERS to Caprice—as you know ... it was a very "Leeroy" thing to do, but ... even as Fatts, I will probably write a few letters to girls—because that's more fun and immersive to me than leaving feedback ... The role playing I did as Leeroy was QUITE FUN. "Becoming friends with Uma" ... I mean ... THAT is the shit that I would ACTUALLY PREFER to all of the mistress-sub and domme-slave relationships and power dynamics that are SO COMMON around here ... something simple and more relaxed sounds AWESOME ... and that doesn't mean we CAN'T have sessions where she dommes me (or I dom her—if she's into that ) but that doesn't need to be every set ... shorter and more frequent and more casual ... I would DEFINITELY be up for that ... but that is NOT typical for the HMC thread—though CERTAINLY possible ...
... and yes, I DO get to cum at the end of every set, but ... if she is not comfortable/too busy/doesn't want to do that ... if it is a mini set especially, it would be FINE for her to farm that out to someone else—a friend or homework assignment or "she found this video she thinks I would like" ...
Crazy Kenzie is fine, too. And Uma can "observe me" for a while longer ... and YOU can decide whether or not I am IN ANY WAY helping her with your current situation. Just write her authentically and let the "character" take over.
Again: thank you so much already, I honestly can't wait!
The pleasure is mine. I am CLEARLY overexcited or else I would NOT have spent so long writing ALL OF THIS!!
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Where? Oh, it goes tongue, left nipple, right nipple, your couice 1, your choice 2.
* After setting the 5th pin you will use the fleshlight for stroking.
* With each edge you can remove one of the pins (last first, etc, down to the tongue pin).
* Then you are down to zero pins, you can use your hand for stroking again
* But... the whole game starts again. One pin for the first edge...
I hope you like my new rule?
You don't look convinced.
Well, I like it. And that's what counts.
Why don't you give me en extra EDGE?
Yes, extra edges need pins too.
I'm looking forward to all the edges you will produce tonight.
Want to fuck my titties? EDGE!
Now have fun with my weather related friends.
Come back to me later for the final.
Special rules for this one.
- remove all your clothespins
- put clothespins on your nipples only
- hold your crop between your teeth
- stroke with your fleshlight to the beat (audible beat ends after about 3 min, but try to keep that speed)
- when you edge: rest as long as you like (but don't pause the video)
See: that's where we are different, I completely lose interest in being submissive or sex alone for some time. So I believe one full orgasm is definitely the max there
Regarding the time: that's up to you: but I'd say the May window is also full two days+ (day 1 evening, day 2 full, day 3 until PM more or less). June would be AM day 1 to early PM on second day, too. But again: totally up to you!
And yes: of course you shaped Umas character A LOT! The kinky side, doing something in public etc. that was amazing. And I totally get what you are saying about enjoying writing: Whilst I do get to overcomplicate things I really enjoy writing sets and seeing where it goes as it's a form of (dirty) art
Now regarding the characters: I fully trust you there, you know my preferences, my favorites and they are all there for a reason. And if Uma is playing such a dominant role, I'm eating out of her hand anyway
Overhyped? Ha, you have already sold everything you need to sell, I'm so incredibly looking forward to this, I can't wait. I'm scared but also desperate to know what Uma has in store. I will regret it and that's what I'm looking forward to most
Now for your teaser: Damn, Uma had be in her grip in no time, she is just stunning - her body, but most of all her eyes. Now of course I obliged and ruined - I'd do anything for her . And I see what you did, the dialog after helped me get over the refractory period *better*. Whilst my mind was still curious I did stay almost limp towards the end of her scene though. I think it's a bit of a mental thing, too - like ejaculating tells my brain "right, we're done here"
But I'm willing to be Umas guinea pig, I just hope it works out mentally and physically
As for you: Noted! But I will have to go through your text again to see what I do. I can't guarantee when I'll get to it, life is a little hectic this week.
PS: As soon as you know when you intend to do the set for me, just let me know so I can note it in my rules . Again: no rush at all, I'm very grateful for this. Just more of schedule thing.
We don't want to ruin the fun, do we?
Last full orgasm: 27/APR/2024
Last ruin: 2/MAY/2024
Working on set for Drool and brian at the moment, but I'm sorry to say it's going a bit slow. Not having too much time to write or even complete sets right now, but I guess it's good to know what to do when the time comes. So Drool and brian, I haven't forgot about you, I just haven't been able to write the set as fast as I had hoped to. But again, looking at the issue positively: You have a set coming your way soon enough...
Have finally managed to complete Noah's set for me. Ecik17 and Milorabo set is next on my to complete list. Will also get you some return sets, but don't expect them too soon as life is keeping me a bit too busy right now.
You madman! That was a crazy set, and a long one as well. As I already let you know I failed on the first attempt after 61 edges. Ruined while tied up with a cock ring, which made the ruin a bit too rough and my body wasn't willing to let me continue on. Decided to start from the beginning at a later date.
Finished the set at attempt 2. Alina Lopez is beautiful, and i could see her earning my final Goddess spot alongside Valerica Steele and Elsa Jean. Use that knowledge if you want to.
Alika White is not one of my favorite mistresses, but I can appreciate her every now and then.
The first real challenge was the three minute holding. Here I was really close to ruin during my second playthrough. I'm not very good at holding, and several minutes is quite the challenge for me. The rapid edges that I had to do for the next videos really sent me into the gooning state. Digital Crush PMV is just pure gooning gold.
Then came the edge four times per minute. Wow. Constant edging. Halfway through I noticed my mouth was open, that's how gooned out I was already.
Thankfully Stella Sol's metronome stroking didn't do anything to me. I got a small break from edging...
Because next was the video that ruined me last time. I got out my cock rings and strapped my balls and my cock with separate rings and started edeging. I had to be careful this time, because the pressure from the rings really makes it difficult to hold the edge. And boy did she make me edge. I lost count of the amount of edges, but maybe 17? I did finish the video without ruining, and removed the rings as my balls and cock were turning purple. Realized that something wasn't right lol.
I thought I could be close to the end now and BANG. A 17 minute cock hero. I knew I was screwed. Here you had me slapping my balls for every edge. Now, I've never been into ballbusting or pain, but I was so gooned out I decided: Let's try this for Alina. Ended up with four edges and 50 slaps for the video. And Vina Sky btw, adding to my favorites. She is a treasure.
The next CH was down, and didn't find another source. Lucky me, huh?
Then Jessa Rhodes and Naomi Woods PMV. I was getting desperate. Brunette Naomi is fine as hell. She's also going to my favorites.
Then followed the webtease. I must admit I'm not that into webteases. Some can be good, but I often just lose interest in them because I don't have the patience to wait during the texts... So I cheated. Edged some times but then just gooned to some other video instead. I was aware I may need those chips later, but that's a future me problem.
Now a well deserved rest after two hours of gooning. I was ready to ruin or explode but there was a part two.
I was scared when Alina told me that the real punishment starts now. Help. Usually I'm all about gooning and edging, so the no stroke/edge rules was a welcome twist. Sometimes I was desperate to touch and sometimes I was just bored. But I went through with it.
Then another Cock Hero... But with ball slaps instead? Again something I'm not that into but decided I would do my best to try it. You have to taste everything, right?
Towards the end of the video I was leaking precum. The slaps hurted a bit at first, but soon enough they started to feel somewhat... Pleasurable. What's happening? Am I starting to enjoy some light ballbusting? It got me really turned on and I'm willing to explore it more if you feel like it fits a theme!
In the end was a difficult task for me. I wasn't able to cum hands free for Princess Cin. Waited for 15 minutes and got the task of doing the hands free video until I cum hands free. Now, this would be a totally fine task, but for the moment I'm too busy to engage in this task. I haven't even got to writing a return set for you yet, and didn't want to deny myself the possibility of completing the two other sets that are waiting for me.
Thanks for this huge set, Noah. It feels like our sets are just growing and growing in size. It can't continue this way! But I may want it to...
And lastly, a message to Alina:
Alina, forgive me for not obeying the last task... Or the task with the Cum Chips. Hopefully you choose to see my obedience with the ballbusting instead, which normally is a limit for me. But for you, I'll do it again if you feel like it.
I'm hugely submissive and will do pretty much anything that a Goddess commands me to do. I love being toyed with and to follow the rules that are given. Lingerie, bikinis, slutty dresses and yoga pants are probably my biggest turn-ons.
Lately I've been having trouble ruining my orgasm without going into the refractory period. Ofc it's a frustrating way to ruin, but it keeps me from continuing after a ruin. Happened a couple times that I ruined just a bit too hard and wasn't able to continue a set after the ruin. A bit scary writing it here as it may be used against me in the sets.
If no other rules are given I'll follow this very simple set of rules, but know that I enjoy it very much to be dominated and when my rules are thrown in the garbage and I'm just told what to do:
Stroke 30 times for each pic. Stroke 30 times for nose piercing Stroke 30 times for belly button piercing Edge for ass in lingerie. Edge for pierced nipples. Edge for naked pussy. Edge for naked ass.
Additional rule: Stroke 30 times for each pic of a girl with GLASSES. (Added by Favorite Eva De Vil and korashar on May 5th. 2023)
MULTI DAY SETS, POSSIBLE DATES: May 17th - May 19th
My limits are: scat and pain, CEI.
Toys: Let me know immediately if I'll need any of these in the set, especially if The Handy is needed, as it takes some time to prepare it. No need to use any of these, just for your knowledge and inspiration.
The Handy (Automatic stroker for the Quickshots. Can use existing funscripts or sync with video from faptap.com).
Fleshlight - Kumzumi
Fleshlight - Waifu
Fleshlight - Toy Meets World
Fleshlight Quickshot - Riley Reid
Fleshlight Quickshot - Mia Malkova
Fleshlight Quickshot - Alien
Fleshlight Connector (to connect two Quickshots together)
Small vibrator
Cock rings
Lube.
I like to meet new girls. I'll add them to my favorites when encountered in sets if I feel like it. Favorites can be promoted to Goddesses if they convince me of it.
Goddesses: If a model can convince me to add her to my Goddess list, I'll double everything for her as long as she stays on the list. Can have only three Goddesses at once. I like to think that a Goddess that get's dropped down to a Favorite should punish me or convince me to let her back to the status of Goddess. But that isn't necessary, just an option to explore if you feel like it.
Current Goddesses:
Valerica Steele SPECIAL RULE: The ValTax. All orgasms in Valericas presence must be ruined until further notice. (Added by Valerica Steele and brian on January 18th).
Elsa Jean SPECIAL RULE: Every edge for Elsas pussy must be held for 1 second longer than the last one. 1st edge = hold one sec, second edge hold two sec etc. (Added on April 11th).
Given rules: I'll modify my rules with any additional rules that may be given. Rules can also be removed.
Edge Counter:
1. Valerica Steele 222: edges
2. Adriana Chechik 151: edges
3. Liana Luck 127: edges
4. Eva Elfie 117: edges
5. Elsa Jean: 98 edges
6. Emilia Hops 58: edges
7. Foxy Alissa 52: edges
8. Alina Lopez: 41 edges
9. Sonya Blaze 39: edges
11. Eva de Vil 37: edges
11. Eliza Ibarra 37: edges
12. Goddess Lindsey: 29 edges
13. Lana Rhoades: 26 edges
14. Liya Silver: 23 edges
15. Emily Willis: 17 edges
16. Maarya: 16 edges
17. Onlydi: 15 edges
18. Julia Rain: 11 edges
19. Little Caprice: 9 edges
20. Lucy Li: 6 edges
21. Goddess Versona: 5 edges
23. Jia Lissa: 3 edges
23. Amber Stark: 3 edges
25. Gina Valentina: 1 edge
25. Aidra Fox: 1 edge
Ruin counter:
1. Valerica Steele: 3 ruins
5. Alissa foxy: 1 ruin
5. Lana Rhoades: 1 ruin
5. Liana Luck: 1 ruin
5. Alina Lopez 1 ruin
Orgasm counter:
1. Eva de Vil: 1 orgasm
1. Emilia Hops: 1 orgasm
1. Elsa Jean: 1 orgasm
Orgasm, ruin, denial, multiple ruins in set... You decide!
Creator of Denials & Orgasms 1 & 2
Co-creator of Decks of Denial
See: that's where we are different, I completely lose interest in being submissive or sex alone for some time. So I believe one full orgasm is definitely the max there
Without wanting to give too much away, and I don't think it gives ANYTHING away, because it just seems COMPLETELY OBVIOUS to me—and what other way could I make it?
Uma Jolie at the start. Uma Jolie at the end. FULL orgasm from Uma at the end ... IF you hold up your end of the bargain ... If you don't, you'll end with a ruin, so ... whether or not you get a full orgasm will be up to you.
And again—I don't think that's giving ANYTHING away, because ... I mean HOW ELSE could it be? And this is no lies—no tricks ... Not going to ruin you then promise a full—only to RUIN YOU AGAIN —as it suggest would be "super ultra mean" or however you put it in your rules, hahaha ...
No, with this one ... you will have earned it! So, the offer will be REAL, and the full orgasm at the end ... yes, that is a BIG carrot for you to help motivate you through to the end, but ... I ALSO have a PRETTY BIG STICK with which to cudgel you into following through!
So that was always my plan, and it seems like that is compatible with how you generally work—so that's good ...
Regarding the time: that's up to you: but I'd say the May window is also full two days+ (day 1 evening, day 2 full, day 3 until PM more or less). June would be AM day 1 to early PM on second day, too. But again: totally up to you!
Yeah, I need 2 days ... I don't think a day and a half will cut it for what I want to achieve ...
I STILL think 2 FULL days is better for pacing than 0.5+1.0+0.5=2.0, but ... probably best to "strike while the iron is hot" ... let's go ahead and "lock in for May." Put me down as well as the dates in your rules and be sure to mention that people should PM me if they want to collaborate/contribute scenes or even just want to find out what the hell I have planned!
MMmmm ... 3 days it's going to adjust the pacing I had planned, but I'm ALREADY thinking of "alternate solutions" ... and they are ALREADY *both* better AND worse for you! So, yeah ... I can make the 3 day window work.
And yes: of course you shaped Umas character A LOT! The kinky side, doing something in public etc. that was amazing.
That makes me REALLY happy.
And I totally get what you are saying about enjoying writing: Whilst I do get to overcomplicate things I really enjoy writing sets and seeing where it goes as it's a form of (dirty) art
My best friend is one of the few people "in real life" that knows I am on this site. When I told him, he said, "Okay ... so it combines THREE of your favorite things: porn, community, and creative writing." It was SO TRUE!
Now regarding the characters: I fully trust you there, you know my preferences, my favorites and they are all there for a reason. And if Uma is playing such a dominant role, I'm eating out of her hand anyway
Yeah, the cast for this play will comprise solely of women from your favorites list ... when writing a story like this, it's just better to work with the established characters/models. Nancy will be in it, but ... obviously *MY* version of Nancy. ... Lana will DEFINITELY be in it, but ... I don't know her "character" that well, so ... gotta "do some research" or have someone else write her scenes ... The "mystery woman" Uma eluded to ... you'll meet her soon enough. She's on your list—but another one of my "favorites to write"—but how I write her is VERY distinct ... and ... if you DON'T like her, well ... idk ... that ... that might just torpedo the WHOLE THING! Honestly ... if you hate her I might just cancel completely.
BUT ... you like my writing ... and this woman ... hahaha ... This woman is UNIQUE. AND distinctive! And I GUARANTEE you have NEVER been teased by a girl like her before! She is SUPER dominant and with you being submissive—PLUS my writing ... I'm pretty sure it will work. PLUS ... she's fucking CRAZY! And in femdom ... crazy ... crazy is good. USUALLY crazy translates to "unpredictable" and "out of control" and that usually scores BIG points with the submissives, so ... yeah ... She is NOT the sort of "classy" and "put together" sort of domme you are used to getting teased by, so ... yeah, should be a good time!
And Ecik is getting my next set, buuuutt ... After that, I think I will probably do a "normal length" one with her to introduce you ... MAYBE even get it out before weekend's end. We'll see!
Overhyped? Ha, you have already sold everything you need to sell, I'm so incredibly looking forward to this, I can't wait. I'm scared but also desperate to know what Uma has in store.
So that's the thing ... with it going to 3 days 2 nights, you will NOW have TWO full nights of worry and dread as opposed to only one, which ... I felt 1 would be better for pacing, and then you would just be SO exhausted and spent by the end, so ... NOW you will have more "recovery time", but ... ALSO that idle time will just eat at you mentally —for better or worse! Because I HAVE to unveil the premise on Day 1 evening now when I was GOING to keep you guessing until Day 1 afternoon, but ... I'll make it work.
I will regret it and that's what I'm looking forward to most
Good. You just keep telling yourself that and remembering that!
Now for your teaser: Damn, Uma had be in her grip in no time, she is just stunning - her body, but most of all her eyes. Now of course I obliged and ruined - I'd do anything for her . And I see what you did, the dialog after helped me get over the refractory period *better*. Whilst my mind was still curious I did stay almost limp towards the end of her scene though. I think it's a bit of a mental thing, too - like ejaculating tells my brain "right, we're done here"
Okay, so ... there ARE some "ruin masters" on here—like Helequin and others—who can have that PERFECT ruin where they can ooze out a little but STILL stay hard after and keep going ... THAT takes practice and is kind of "high skill"—in my opinion ... SOMEBODY around here I think had a whole set dedicated to THAT where the girls tried to help him "practice" that technique or something ... I'm PRETTY SURE that I could do it REASONABLY well—myself—but ... Right NOW, I am SO out of shape and practice ... my bod is ALL OVER THE PLACE! Sometimes, just 10 edges will send me into a refractory period right now, so ... and then other times, I can have been wanking off for 5 hours, and then pull off 10 edges in 26 minutes easy-peasy ... so ... PROBABLY—at least "in my prime"—I feel like I could do that, but ... DEFINITELY I would struggle right now due to poor stamina from being out of practice with playing sets ... and also, no one has ever asked me to do that in a set, so ... I don't know for sure, but ... I need the right context to REALLY make me WANT to do something like that ... because multiple ruins sounds challenging AND like a lot of time ...
But anyways, enough about ME ... the point of THAT was to say I "get where you're coming from", and for THIS set, that won't be a problem ...
I was EXPECTING you to go limp after the ruin. That would be my "default expectation" for ANY given stroker I write a tease for on here ... UNLESS they mentioned that they were able to perform this technique successfully in the past, which ... not everyone can, because it requires knowledge of one's own body, experience, and practice ... but, I did not intend for you to "keep going" with your normal rules after the ruin ... I suppose I could have said, but ... I didn't want to break immersion ... and the BEST sets are the ones where the girls linger and don't immediately leave after the orgasm, lol ... I know *I* prefer a little bit of "pillow talk" after I cum, and I think 95% of the time, the expectation is that after you cum, you go into the refractory period and your rules cease, so ... THAT is usually unwritten in 99% of sets, but ... sorry not sorry it was unclear here, but I didn't want to break immersion ... but sorry you felt like you had to keep it going with your rules ... I hope that didn't mess you up/inconvenience you too much after. MY main point was I wanted to see if I could at least keep you MENTALLY aroused and interested even after your orgasm ... THAT was my main objective. And it seems I was at least somewhat successful ... so yay!
But, I guess in ALL future sets you get from me from now on, if you orgasm—ruin or full—your rules will be suspended ... and IF I ruin you in the multi-day set I WILL plan for recovery time and to give you a break and will NOT expect you to just "keep going" right after. "Executing the perfect ruin and continuing on seamlessly" will NOT be my expectation for you, lol, and if it WAS, then the girls would tell you that explicitly—as well as beforehand so you know that is the maneuver you are attempting.
I DEFINITELY get the "utility" of the "perfect" "zero-refractory-period" ruin ... and I would CERTAINLY be willing to try and attempt that in a set featuring multiple ruins ... NOT that I am "asking" for that! Because I am NOT! I would need to be in the right mood ... a multiple ruin set would be a LONG set for me ... probably 4-5 ruins in a 3-5 hour set or something ... I would need to mentally prepare, but also need a REASON or a CONTEXT ... it would need to be a SPECIAL set ... like perhaps something with Kyla—because I just LOVE her and Helequin writes her SO well —but it would need to be bespoke and discussed with him BEFOREHAND and planned a bit and agreed to ... or if my little wager fails and Uma has to "ruin me a bunch" ... NOT sprung on my but "planned out ahead of time" and there being a "reason" ... sigh ...
But, yeah ... for me, most of the time, when *I* ruin, I ruin HARD and try to have the BIGGEST orgasm I can ... except it doesn't feel good and so is STILL a punishment ... BUT ... if I knew multiple ruins were incoming or a "soft ruin" and "keep going!" was the expectation, THEN I would adjust accordingly. But, if the girls determine that they want that from you, I will be SURE to state it explicitly. But that will NOT be a major theme of the set so no need to be concerned about THAT.
But I'm willing to be Umas guinea pig, I just hope it works out mentally and physically
I both admire and personally reproach your willingness! BUT ... I'm grateful you are willing to try ... The greatest and most memorable sessions are the ones that twist and turn that you least expect ... and, you can only ever experience something for the first time once.
Part of the "magic" of that shopping set was the novelty. It was new and exciting and kinky and memorable as a one-off.
THIS will be the same, and you will NEVER be able to do ANYTHING like this again and get NEARLY the same results ... because the novelty will have worn off ... it will NEVER again be "as good as the first time" ... But ... the shopping set was actually QUITE TAME compared to THIS
You WILL be physically exhausted—I am sure—and it WILL challenge your stamina, but ... success will NOT depend upon having a perfect performance at the "sex olympics." What Uma wants you can easily physically do ... BUT ... whether or not you can go through with it ... and whether or not you can/will enjoy it ... THAT I cannot guarantee, but ... YOU are willing to take the risk ... *I* am willing to take the risk ... and based on your willingness to experiment and your eagerness to have your boundaries pushed PLUS your affinity for my writing ... ALL OF THOSE THINGS is why my confidence is high and I made all of those RIDICULOUS wagers!
As for you: Noted! But I will have to go through your text again to see what I do. I can't guarantee when I'll get to it, life is a little hectic this week.
Ah—I'm just overexcited is all! Like I mentioned earlier, it's that intersection of three of my favorite things: porn, community, and creative writing—ALL together and pal-ing around at the same time! It's just hard for me NOT to contain myself! And life is RELATIVELY quiet right now, so ... I have the time.
But that does NOT mean that YOU have to get sucked into the whirlwind of MY zeal! You seemed interested, so I threw out the bait ... Feel NO OBLIGATION to take it! Just because *I* am going crazy and getting obsessed does NOT mean that you need to be drug along with me!
THAT said ... I just enjoy the role playing and immersion and character development and cooperative storytelling SO MUCH ... I have thought OFTEN back to my time as Leeroy Jerkins and ESPECIALLY all that transpired in the fall of 2022 surrounding NNN ... and what happened with Uma ... it was the turning point precipitated the end ... and you would have to be given a FULL update to REALLY know all that happened, which ... MOSTLY written but NEVER published—at THIS point ...
There is no rush. The creative process cannot be forced. When you do, the results usually suffer ... and I am GLAD that you are busy and have a life. For me, right now, I have the time to spend on these kinky and creative and frivolous pursuits ... and so I can AFFORD to spend HOURS and HOURS writing all this shit to you while planning fantasies in my head ...
But don't rush it. Mull it over. Take some time to think about it. Live your life, and in the moments when you brain wanders over into sexual fantasy and creative writing, take some time to think about the Uma character and how she might respond to me ... but keep it fun and casual and low energy ... unless your muse suddenly appears and becomes VERY demanding! But no rush, and if you can't or it seems too complicated or you lose interest or inspiration—that's fine. There are PLENTY of other easier and more traditional ways in which you can tease me ... This was more of an irregular, big "SPECIAL" ask ... but, you don't have to pay me back with this just because I'd writing you a multi-day set. This site is leisure. What we do on here should be "fun" and not seen as work, so ... yeah, just take it however and whatever happens is fine ...
And as for Kenzie ... the Evil Stepmommy v1.8 "Happy Endings Pt. 1" is what "inspired" me. The description in my rules is probably sufficient, but if you want an "example" that tease would be it ... The entire thing probably takes like 3-5 hours to play. (It is a MAMMOTH tease.) But there is an early scene with Kenzie I believe ...
... but I feel like writing "crazy" well is actually REALLY HARD for most people ... I don't think most people can do it, and I'm not sure that you can ...
"Crazy" has its own logic and it doesn't make sense to a normal, rational person, so ... you just have to put yourself in that correct headspace ... and it is WAY too easy to go too hard and just make it COMPLETELY nonsensical ... and then of course the OTHER pit fall on the opposite side is not dialing the crazy up enough ... and then it's just a little boring and sad and loses its impact ... For me, ideally, the tone would have to be "lighter" and more comedic, which ... you have to have a certain level of silliness and whimsy to write like that—which not everyone does that well ... I feel like you either have the personality for it and you can or you don't and you can't ...
With Uma, it's kind of a big ask to do all of this character analysis and development and WORK to make an "authentic experience" ... and DON'T rush that, and if you don't have time—THAT is okay, too ... but, with Kenzie, what I have in my rules is enough of a prompt to try it. No further research necessary. IF you're up for it—give it a go. Don't overthink it too much. You'll either have the skill set or you won't! And if you THINK it might be too ridiculous and absurd ... then you are probably on the right track! I DON'T want some "heavy domme experience." Light and fun with PLENTY of shenanigans and tomfoolery and RIDICULOUSNESS that shocks and makes me laugh! But my expectations are pretty low for ANYONE writing her, but ... I am willing to be surprised! The effort will ALWAYS be appreciated.
And just a "normal" set is TOTALLY FINE, too ... the simple, basic set you DO write is WAY BETTER than the overcomplicated and perfectly nuanced set you DON'T WRITE! I have high standards, but ... when it comes down to it, I'm not that picky and just grateful for ANYTHING that gets sent my way!
Once again, Ecik first, and THEN the set for you with mystery woman ... prepare yourself for a "text from Uma"
PS: As soon as you know when you intend to do the set for me, just let me know so I can note it in my rules . Again: no rush at all, I'm very grateful for this. Just more of schedule thing.
Hm... Aria... I think I start to like her.
She didn't waste any time and put me on my place as her goon toy. I was excited about the clamps...
The first video was an excellent choice with slower and faster strokes. Edges and clamp pulling felt good. A pleasant trip.
Riley's outfit should have given me a hint. That nipple torture took me by surprise and it really hurt (and took me several attempts ). And this was only the beginning... "I know you can't wait till I do it again" ... and she was right.
The latex video was very special and one of my favourites. Someone did some extensive background research here.
I was really afraid of any more pain and desperately tried not to edge. But I was constantly close, which was pretty arousing, which in turn made it harder not to edge, which... Oh, I loved it.
After that I felt dried out and had to drink some water (obviously I had been panting like a dog all the time ).
But... there was also some underlying fear how this would progress. And it progressed. Masuimis task was... impossible. At least at the first try. I edged only after seconds. Even if I had to punish myself only every 3rd time, it was clear that I couldn't survive this physically. So I just stroked somehow through the (also perfectly chosen) clip.
But this felt like cheating (which it was) and since my dick was now more accustomed to the fleshlight and less sensitive, I tried it again.
The result was similar to the clip before, but of course more intense. And the clamps started to hurt even without pulling or ripping...
Bridgette! I had hoped for her to appear! And there she was and promised me an orgasm. Closing the fleshlight made stroking for her most intense (and saved some time cleaning later ).
I tried to imagine I was fucking her ass. But only for a second, as I nearly came too fast.
And then - inevitably - happend what my coward subconsciousness tried to avoid all the time: the final rip off.
But since it came with an orgasm, it was easy and blended in nicely.
After this I fell back in my chair, numb.
"Vida loca" - never was a post orgasm song chosen more fitting.
Conclusion: What a ride. I think I learned something about myself. The fear of pain is a greater turn-on than pain itself. Thanks, Doctor!
Ok wow, I think I was completely on the wrong track , I was certain this was going to be something about ruins. No need to comment, but yeah. So on the one hand I'm relieved, because I prefer denial. On the other hand: WHAT ON EARTH COULD YOU MEAN?
Anyhow, can't wait. I'm on the run right now so just a short response: but I'll go through the rest in detail and think of a first set.
THAT is the point! 
You can leave feedback as you finish the parts or all at the end—your choice. 
It's not bad, just personal. 
. Details to come, but letting specifically Fatts and Ecik know in case they have a set in the works. I'll probably want a punishment set, but obviously that'll require specifics which I'll provide when I have more time later 
. I'm actually not that frustrated that I failed though because joining the forum has been a great experience. Full update to come when I have more time.
but make it quick!
: 
. Anyways, I really enjoy POT 
My favorite part of writing teases is developing the characters and writing the dialogue, so ... I spent a LOT of time doing that 
No cage either, so ... DON'T read this while you are at work! 
And if not, that's fine ... don't twist your character into doing something that she isn't ...
). And this was only the beginning... "I know you can't wait till I do it again" ... and she was right. 