[Release/Update][Feedback] Paradox

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[Release/Update][Feedback] Paradox

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Hi everyone,

Link: https://milovana.com/webteases/showtease.php?id=61263

This is my first tease and I'd love to hear your thoughts and suggestions! There are a few updates I made since the tease was first published. Hopefully, you will like it.

Updates:
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1. Added captions to Images
2. Slight modification to the Confirmation page with Black bar
3. Added a section for Edging towards the end

Post your answers to the Feedback form here ( part of the tease )
1. How much time did you spend in this experiment?
2. Please describe your understanding about the 'Paradox'

Would you be interested in a Sissy version of this tease? Please let me know your ideas too!
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1) 90 Minutes
2) That I started eager for long needed orgasm but once again my submission got the better part of me and I ended up censored and denied, like I deserve it . . .

A sissy version is principally always appreciated, btw. who is the magnificent women conducting the experiment. She could dome me any time.

Anyway, I appreciate all your creators, especially those involved in denial and putting us little sissys in their places.

Write me any time, if you wanna message a bit . . .

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I enjoyed this, though censored porn is not my kink.
wannabe44 wrote: Mon Nov 28, 2022 12:43 am Would you be interested in a Sissy version of this tease? Please let me know your ideas too!
I'd be very interested in a version that pushes sissification, submission, or other kinks instead of censored porn.

Great first tease!
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I liked it, the structure and choices matched the story really well. A sissy tease with a similar structure would be good.
The only thing that felt off to me was that it didn't seem like there was any difference in the script based on whether or not pages were skipped. Although that might have been me not testing to the limits.

1) It took maybe 40 minutes to finish the whole thing.
2) With the paradox, I think I had already come to terms with the difference between what we tell ourselves and what's closer to the truth for me. (My time is worth something and I don't want to spend all of it masturbating, not all pictures of women are made equal, and I like instructions and humiliation).

Also, open question for everyone, when you see a censor, do you fill it in with your imagination?
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mintosius wrote: Wed Nov 30, 2022 12:47 am t it didn't seem like there was any difference in the script based on whether or not pages were skipped.
You are correct. I did not play the tease but title sounded interesting so I downloaded the code and looked through, then decided to not play it as it is not for me, but for all of you into it, improvement could be to trigger outcome based on "score" - which could be total number of seconds you skipped (so every time you skip, the amount of seconds it was remaining on timer get added to total score).

Also if going with that, then you would also need a different path with different ending for those who did not skip.
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Great tease overall, it needs improvement on the endings imo. the only page I was confused is the Confirmation I wasn't sure what I was supposed to do if I decided to wait this 30min.

Idk if intended but
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page: a18 goes back to page:a0 after Timer same for page:b18 idk if it is a mistake or intended
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Thanks everyone for your suggestions! I will definitely try to incorporate them in my next tease.

Yes, there could be a different outcome if someone chooses not to Skip. But my intention was to pass this message:
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'Everyone likes to cum -> But too much freedom and choice makes the experience boring -> We eventually seek instructions, denial and humiliation while cumming -> Being/staying denied is the ultimate form of denial and humilliation -> So we seek denial in all forms -> But that means we eventually seek pleasure in not cumming (denial) -> But Everyone likes to cum?'

So, I wanted to bore the user with too much nudity and control in the beginning so that he 'chooses' to have less of it. The idea of being denied all the things that he wants (nudity, control etc) turns him on and he eventually starts liking complete censorship. So, in the third section he 'chooses' censored images over nudity (by not skipping). When he now finally wants to cum, he is confused whether he likes to cum or likes the denial.
Was this message clear enough in the tease? Is there a better way to bore the user with nudity ( instead of using loops like I have done )?
when you see a censor, do you fill it in with your imagination?
No, not with female nudity atleast ;)
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SlenderSissyNewbie wrote: Mon Nov 28, 2022 6:45 pm 1) 90 Minutes
That's impressive!
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wannabe44 wrote: Wed Nov 30, 2022 12:29 pm That's impressive!

Thank you. I must admit, the censors were all pretty hot and I hoped for being denied, like I deserve it.

I eagerly sat through the 30 Minute timer just gooning. . . what a sweet denial, when nothing happened.
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wannabe44 wrote: Wed Nov 30, 2022 12:26 pm But my intention was to pass this message:
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This is not applicable to everyone. I think too many people are boxed into this way of thinking, only way to retain high energy being denial, your tease maybe doing it too. Masturbation is imitation of sex, but is not a real thing. For real sex, after many years of experience, I learned I do not crave the ejaculation, I crave the lovemaking part. And I can have sex for a while, go through my wife's climax without ejaculating, have one of my own but if I don't contract my penis and pelvic muscles during sex I do not trigger ejaculation. I am completely satisfied if we stop, and I don't even remain horny, I can go to sleep, completely happy and full of energy. I think this state of high energy is what most people who are into denial like, but it is not coupled with denial, because I do have an orgasm, just no ejaculation, and the thing that is linked with lack of energy and being "down" is that expulsion of semen and energy.

I have not been able to achieve this outside of actual sex, without my wife. Which is a bit frustrating, because I don't want to ejaculate when playing with myself, but am unable to get rid of horniness otherwise, and when having sex, my wife enjoys to make me ejaculate and I agree to it every 10 days or so (I noticed that I can recover in like 3-4 days so this is the amount I can live with).
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wannabe44 wrote: Mon Nov 28, 2022 12:43 am
1. How much time did you spend in this experiment?
2. Please describe your understanding about the 'Paradox'

Would you be interested in a Sissy version of this tease? Please let me know your ideas too!
Even tho I'm not into cencored porn, I think its an awesome idea!
Keep up the good work.
If something like this for tease and denial or chastity is possible I would be very happy!
than you
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Love it. Like censored and being denied as I deserve. Chastity humiliation, cuckolding is my thing.
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Post by junkie4bdsm »

I spent about 45 minutes on this.

I love being instructed and controlled sexually so I followed instructions. I do use my imagination to fill in the blanks if that is of interest. Whilst all the images were beautiful some were less sexy to me so I did skip.

I would be interested in other versions with sissy or bdsm themes.
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Re: [Release/Update][Feedback] Paradox

Post by lazlong999 »

Hi wanna,

I've done this tease many times. Thanks so much!

I usually spend about 45 minutes. I really enjoy most of the images and the dominatrix's changing of the rules.

Recently, I've been getting stroke signals in the 5 minute pages. Is that new? That does let me persist through many more of them. I generally do skip if I find the woman not too appealing. But the assumptions do seem to be correct! :-D

Thanks again for one of my favorite teases!

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